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Chapter 5 Section 8 - Beast of Prey


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Nora gets a very delicate present form her queen.

 

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Short Summary of the previous entries

 

 

 

 


After murdering her old friend Eric, Nora took over his realm as well as the associated servants and employees. 

 

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During the last night of the vampire assembly in High Rock (Chapter 4, Section 1 - 10) Nora met Lenora, Viscountess of the realm. 


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Without knowledge of the Vampire Queen, Lenora lead Nora to a private dungeon of the undead Queen, containing one of her exotic toys...


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A complete summary of previous chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 


 

Of Blood and Pleasure on Tumblr

 

 

 

Chapter 5 Section 8 - Beast of Prey

 

 


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If you made it so far and lived through the pointless murder, the blood and gore as well as the bestiality without closing the browser you are a terrible human being. Thanks for reading nonetheless.
Bestiality was never big on this blog, but this is the last entry containing it, even though Midnight (the cat) is here to stay. I never liked this kind of content much, but back in chapter 1 I kind of was doing what was popular here. This time I just liked the panther idea too much to not do it. It just fit the idea of my vampire world to well. Also cats, the internet loves cats. ;)

 
 

 

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Great work, I enjoyed :D 

 

Nora is cruel as Always :) 

 

Anyway I ship her with Midnight ;) 

 

Btw is he is vampire too?

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Aria: Not everyone loves cats, although to be fair I'm cursed to be terrified of them well their offspring by that Bastard Father of mine. But it would seem Nora is not so nice, but it was hot seeing her toy with her prey. And Blood seems to turn her Lustfal.

 

GG, yes I made it all the way down and I too am not a big fan of that kind but your right it pulls in views like crazy.

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8 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Great work, I enjoyed :D 

 

Nora is cruel as Always :) 

 

Anyway I ship her with Midnight ;) 

 

Btw is he is vampire too?

Thanks. The last time she was not that cruel... 

For know I have settled on Midnight being just a normal panther that some vampires breed red eyes to (on?). Kind of like Nora's horse that also has red eyes, which is a special breed of a normal horse race that's able to see in the dark. 

 

Just now, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Not everyone loves cats, although to be fair I'm cursed to be terrified of them well their offspring by that Bastard Father of mine. But it would seem Nora is not so nice, but it was hot seeing her toy with her prey. And Blood seems to turn her Lustfal.

 

GG, yes I made it all the way down and I too am not a big fan of that kind but your right it pulls in views like crazy.

Thanks, as said, this was the last bestiality entry on this blog. Also all the animal animations are super hard to control, because you can't use normal poser mods. 

 

 

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6 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks. The last time she was not that cruel... 

For know I have settled on Midnight being just a normal panther that some vampires breed red eyes to (on?). Kind of like Nora's horse that also has red eyes, which is a special breed of a normal horse race that's able to see in the dark. 

 

I see :D 

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Pleasure to the eyes.
I can not find the right words, but it's so fucking awesome!
Love this.
 

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...you are a terrible human being...

That's exactly what I thought about myself when I read and understood that I like it. :D 
 

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1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, as said, this was the last bestiality entry on this blog

In my opinion - the concentration of bestiality is okay ^_^ 
But you are the boss here ^_^ 

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loved it..and the murder was not pointless..Nora  needed the blood..so their was a point to it.and can you really call it murder? when she needs blood to live..as always it was an amazing story..beast fucking fits to her lifestyle..so it does not bug me if you do more or not ..but thank you very much for this  ❤️

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I feel the same about beastiality personally normally i don't like it but Midnight is a beautiful animal!

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3 hours ago, Crw said:

Pleasure to the eyes.
I can not find the right words, but it's so fucking awesome!
Love this.

Thank you!

 

52 minutes ago, goldust said:

loved it..and the murder was not pointless..Nora  needed the blood..so their was a point to it.and can you really call it murder? when she needs blood to live..as always it was an amazing story..beast fucking fits to her lifestyle..so it does not bug me if you do more or not ..but thank you very much for this  ❤️

I meant the murder where she was killing the girl in the prison using blood magic. Nonetheless I'd also call killing the second girl murder. When Midnight does it's "ok-ish", because he acts on instinct. Nora on the other hand has a consciousness, she is also able to think clear thoughts and is thus responsible for her actions. She does indeed need the blood to survive, but there is no need to kill her victim, which makes killing the second girl murder (compare to Erics way of doing this C5S3 ).

Technically the same logic applies to humans eating animals. Nora just do it because she can and feels like it, the same is true for most meat eating humans (I'm not a vegetarian either).

Anyway, I got a bit off topic, thanks for your kind words :) .

 

49 minutes ago, xGHoSTx said:

I feel the same about beastiality personally normally i don't like it but Midnight is a beautiful animal!

Agreed, #TeamCat . 

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If nora will stop sexy sexy with midnight  for now on in the blog, will the narrative explanation be explain away as in the moment with the blood frenzy making her do something she wouldn't have done under normal circumstance? 

 

 

Also, lovely blog, cruel Nora best Nora. ?

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1 hour ago, TheLoneTremere said:

If nora will stop sexy sexy with midnight  for now on in the blog, will the narrative explanation be explain away as in the moment with the blood frenzy making her do something she wouldn't have done under normal circumstance? 

 

Also, lovely blog, cruel Nora best Nora. ?

Thank you!

She was never into this, as shown in Chapter 4 Section 9 and she said as well in this entry: "Whatever other people and you do is off the table, all of it." But then... she lost herself in the bloodrush as you already figured out ;) .

I just liked the idea of her having a black panther as a pet. ;)

 

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well i say its her right to feed how she wants..killing or not..she is one wicked vampire slut..love your amazing stories so keep it up please and thank you ❤️ 

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Bestiality I'm "ehhh..." with. When it fits sorta thing. Me bosmer does it but shessa bosmer, close to nature and such. Me vamps prolly do because they're ancient undeaded beings, no longer consider themselves human and that far removed from society I doubt they give a damn about taboos anymore.

 

This was hot though, Midnight is adorbables and Nora is best longfanged thot.

You still the bestest vampire lady bump lass. ❤️

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Well, I must say that was an uncomfortable part indeed. Yet, just like with the Boltons in Gam of Thrones, some parts of a story are just made to inspire unease, worry and even a certain degree of fear towards what could happen to the characters. So in that regard, though depicting disturbing events, it was still a good chapter. ryHvj7vr_o.gif

 And the technical domain wasn't neglected either. Which made me wonder all along : did you find a poser for animals or are those custom made ? Was the jeez effect on midnight ingame too ? And, about that striking heart scene, was it just a jaxonz positionner comboed to the spell, or was it more complex ?

 

Malicia : « The gentle girl got eaten alive ! That's very horrible ! Smiley_ummon_HFR.gif Amelie, you smell good too, you must get away right now ! You're in great danger !! :classic_exclamation::classic_exclamation: »

 

 

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That was... unexpected. "But of course sweetheart, I care for you. I really do". Pfft, yeah-fucking-right. Proceeds to kill her with a PANTHER. And wasn't she the pregnant girl??? Like, shit. I'm kinda revolted. But, that was probably your intention. So good job. 

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Edit: Just checked. She wasn't the pregnant girl. Less revolted now. Nice work, Alter! ?

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Miss Cruel-sea ? I've got a letter here, for Baroness Karlov... Looks like official business.

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22 hours ago, Jayomms said:

:classic_laugh::classic_biggrin::mrgreen::thumbsup: Right they Love Kitties and Tities  ;)

:D Thanks.

21 hours ago, goldust said:

well i say its her right to feed how she wants..killing or not..she is one wicked vampire slut..love your amazing stories so keep it up please and thank you ❤️ 

Thank you goldust :) 

15 hours ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

Bestiality I'm "ehhh..." with. When it fits sorta thing. Me bosmer does it but shessa bosmer, close to nature and such. Me vamps prolly do because they're ancient undeaded beings, no longer consider themselves human and that far removed from society I doubt they give a damn about taboos anymore.

 

This was hot though, Midnight is adorbables and Nora is best longfanged thot.

You still the bestest vampire lady bump lass. ❤️

I'm not sure if he is "adorable" after what he just did, but yeah, the two head a great chemistry during the feeding and sex scene.

Thanks for your comment :) 

 

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, I must say that was an uncomfortable part indeed. Yet, just like with the Boltons in Gam of Thrones, some parts of a story are just made to inspire unease, worry and even a certain degree of fear towards what could happen to the characters. So in that regard, though depicting disturbing events, it was still a good chapter. ryHvj7vr_o.gif

 And the technical domain wasn't neglected either. Which made me wonder all along : did you find a poser for animals or are those custom made ? Was the jeez effect on midnight ingame too ? And, about that striking heart scene, was it just a jaxonz positionner comboed to the spell, or was it more complex ?

 

Malicia : « The gentle girl got eaten alive ! That's very horrible ! Smiley_ummon_HFR.gif Amelie, you smell good too, you must get away right now ! You're in great danger !! :classic_exclamation::classic_exclamation: »

 

 

I was mostly trying to show how thin the line between nobility and high culture and animalistic instinct driven behavior for "my" vampires is. Just compare the first couple of screenshots with her writing etc. and the last ones of the feeding scene. This is honestly one of the aspects of vampire that I like the most. 

But of course you are right, it was super brutal, but unlike other times on this blog I felt like it was necessary to make my point this time. Honestly the victim just wears the blindfold to take some of that horror away. 

Most poses are just vanilla animal behavior. You can just trigger two different idle animations of them by disabe-ing and enable-ing the animal. One time I used a sexlab panther anim and froze Midnight during the animation so I could pose Nora normally afterwards. 

All effects seen are ingame. I did the blood of Midnight via his texture and the cum, was an object moved around with jaxonz, the same as the heart. 

 

Amelie: "What happend? Did Mistress do somehing?

Don't worry, I'm fine. I know Mistress can be frightening sometimes, but that's what makes it so exiting. At the same time I have never felt so good and secure as when she is around."

 

7 hours ago, Collygon said:

That was... unexpected. "But of course sweetheart, I care for you. I really do". Pfft, yeah-fucking-right. Proceeds to kill her with a PANTHER. And wasn't she the pregnant girl??? Like, shit. I'm kinda revolted. But, that was probably your intention. So good job. 

 

Edit: Just checked. She wasn't the pregnant girl. Less revolted now. Nice work, Alter! ?

No, the pregnant girl was Fina, she is perfectly fine and on top of that as a nice story arc in Chapter 6 and 7 :) .

I knew that this was going to be a controversial one, also see the response for Tirloque, ;)

 

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5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Miss Cruel-sea ? I've got a letter here, for Baroness Karlov... Looks like official business.

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11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

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Well, if that wasn't a frightening yet classy answer, I don't know what is ! :classic_biggrin: Anyway, Malicia may have to refrain writing letters to Blackrock for some time ; as well as installing a double lock on her shack's door.  ^^

11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

I was mostly trying to show how thin the line between nobility and high culture and animalistic instinct driven behavior for "my" vampires is. Just compare the first couple of screenshots with her writing etc. and the last ones of the feeding scene. This is honestly one of the aspects of vampire that I like the most. 

But of course you are right, it was super brutal, but unlike other times on this blog I felt like it was necessary to make my point this time. Honestly the victim just wears the blindfold to take some of that horror away. 

Most poses are just vanilla animal behavior. You can just trigger two different idle animations of them by disabe-ing and enable-ing the animal. One time I used a sexlab panther anim and froze Midnight during the animation so I could pose Nora normally afterwards.  

All effects seen are ingame. I did the blood of Midnight via his texture and the cum, was an object moved around with jaxonz, the same as the heart.

 Thanks for the technical insight. In all cases it looked flawless. As for your point, indeed, in most vampire universes there is some "beast" part underneath being one of their themes. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Amelie: "What happend? Did Mistress do somehing?

Don't worry, I'm fine. I know Mistress can be frightening sometimes, but that's what makes it so exiting. At the same time I have never felt so good and secure as when she is around."

Malicia : « Pssst, psst ! Amelie ! The plan failed ! Can't exfiltrate you right now, no. But I've sent you something to be safe anyway ; see you soon ! :classic_ph34r: »

 

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Well, if that wasn't a frightening yet classy answer, I don't know what is ! :classic_biggrin: Anyway, Malicia may have to refrain writing letters to Blackrock for some time ; as well as installing a double lock on her shack's door.  ^^

Thanks :) . 

Honestly I was most impressed with your lore knowledge of my story, like getting all the names and location and everything right. 

 

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

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 Thanks for the technical insight. In all cases it looked flawless. As for your point, indeed, in most vampire universes there is some "beast" part underneath being one of their themes. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

In my opinion that's one of the most important points since vampires just get romanticized too much nowadays. In the end they are still undead that are eating people alive.

 

9 hours ago, bodabira 01 said:

Very good chapter as always. :D 

Thanks :)

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If you made it so far and lived through the pointless murder, the blood and gore as well as the bestiality without closing the browser you are a terrible human being. 

What the!? That's not fair... ?
You can't write an intriguing story and then lure people into a trap like that! ?

Psh... So much for "It's not going to happen!". Kitty always gets kitty's way.
The little blood magic of Nora killing the sick prisoner was a little confusing. Didn't think that was what she was doing until the bit where it's mentioned that Nora had killed her. :O

Cool chapter! With a few bias + points for the beasty bit. Nora just doing Nora things, go between loving and hating her between every chapter. ?

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Again another great chapter.. simply LOVE it.. Thanks for you great story... And really I love Nora "more then my Girl friend ", my gf is not a vampire that's a shame.. ?

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On 7/28/2018 at 8:43 PM, Rattlesnark said:

What the!? That's not fair... ?
You can't write an intriguing story and then lure people into a trap like that! ?

Psh... So much for "It's not going to happen!". Kitty always gets kitty's way.
The little blood magic of Nora killing the sick prisoner was a little confusing. Didn't think that was what she was doing until the bit where it's mentioned that Nora had killed her. :O

Cool chapter! With a few bias + points for the beasty bit. Nora just doing Nora things, go between loving and hating her between every chapter. ?

Thanks! 

Yeah, the blood magic scene is a bit of a test of what pure images can do. The only indicator of Nora killing the other girl is that one cut to her lying on the ground after she summons the heart. The last sentence was mostly there to get everyone one the same line again in case someone missed it.

 

8 hours ago, death8981 said:

Again another great chapter.. simply LOVE it.. Thanks for you great story... And really I love Nora "more then my Girl friend ", my gf is not a vampire that's a shame.. ?

? Maybe, it's a good thing she's not a vampire. Think about it ;) .

Thanks. 

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I just finished reading all the past blog entries. You're quite good at using images to tell a story. And you've helped fire the imagination of this little blue lemming.

 

Just one question. I'm getting the impression of Vampire influences, especially the use of the term "neonate." If so, is that Masquerade or Requiem?

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