Great Yob with Amelie's scene with Thomas!  I'm sure you got the audience like " So what was the surprise?" I'm sure I asked myself that. ?It was Thomas cock wasn't it? 

Nice entry! Thomas has quite the sordid past O.o Damn. Hope we get to explore more of it as the chapter continues!

1 hour ago, Jayomms said:

 Great Yob with Amelie's scene with Thomas!  I'm sure you got the audience like " So what was the surprise?" I'm sure I asked myself that. ?It was Thomas cock wasn't it? 

Thanks!

The surprise was actually something I had planned for this entry but didn't do in the end. 

I may do it at some point so I don't want to spoil it. But Thomas certainly got everything he wanted without the surprise so better keep you trumps  .

26 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Nice entry! Thomas has quite the sordid past O.o Damn. Hope we get to explore more of it as the chapter continues!

Thanks and yes we will. (Not in chapter 9 though, but soonish).

At some point we'll even have a short Thomas only flashback (That's actually relevant for the story, crazy I know.)

And we may meet his sister... there was something about Villa Valek in the latest Karlov Manor version, which happens to be Thomas' family/bloodline name.

Heck! Great chapter! So many sensual scenes, especially like the approach to Amelie in this chapter. And I see you managed to set up HDT-pussy, congratulations!

11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

At some point we'll even have a short Thomas only flashback (That's actually relevant for the story, crazy I know.)

Wow! Looking forward to it. One of the most interesting characters you created. ^_^

22 hours ago, Crw said:

Heck! Great chapter! So many sensual scenes, especially like the approach to Amelie in this chapter. And I see you managed to set up HDT-pussy, congratulations!

Wow! Looking forward to it. One of the most interesting characters you created. ^_^

Thanks!

I've been using HDT-pussy for quite a while 

jeez that Nora can be a greedy little girl! nice work Alter you always do fantastic work on these stories!

I'm always amazed by the quality of the first shots of your entries, you really put lots of attention on those, often reminding me postcard aesthetics. A pity you reused some shots in the first dialogues, that made the scene more static than it could've been. As for the  story, it didn't move foward a lot in this chapter ; but you managed to create flavorful stakes with Nora's usual psychological games, with the incentive of threesome going on for quite some time. Aside of your usual high graphical quality (even highlighted with what looked like custom poses for the nails painting), I also appreciated the layout, efficiently going for vertical panels divisions from time to time. Slow pace put aside (with benefits though ^^), exquisite work overall ! ?

Malicia : « I very knew that Thomas guy could honey-honey with nice gals without being meany.

                I'm gonna ask Amelie how it was, yes.    »

23 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

jeez that Nora can be a greedy little girl! nice work Alter you always do fantastic work on these stories!

Thank you!

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I'm always amazed by the quality of the first shots of your entries, you really put lots of attention on those, often reminding me postcard aesthetics. A pity you reused some shots in the first dialogues, that made the scene more static than it could've been.

Thank you!

Sometimes I spontaneously have to add more dialogue lines than intended or I need some extra exposition as a setup for another entry.

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

As for the  story, it didn't move foward a lot in this chapter ; but you managed to create flavorful stakes with Nora's usual psychological games, with the incentive of threesome going on for quite some time. Aside of your usual high graphical quality (even highlighted with what looked like custom poses for the nails painting), I also appreciated the layout, efficiently going for vertical panels divisions from time to time. Slow pace put aside (with benefits though ^^), exquisite work overall ! ?

Thanks, agreed there wasn't that much story content some exposition at best but overhaul pretty low stakes. Problem is that I don't want to start a big red haird Nora story before the Hammerfell storyline isn't concluded which will take a huge part in Chapter 9.

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I very knew that Thomas guy could honey-honey with nice gals without being meany.

 

                I'm gonna ask Amelie how it was, yes.    »

Amelie: ""

Oh my! I can see why this would be one of your favorite sex scene sequences.  It is erotic, sensual, almost tender and on top of it - nobody even dies! ?

Despite the gorgeous intimate scene lasting through most of the episode we still got quite a few bits of story information here. Fina gave birth (yay!) but she wishes to leave. I wonder whether she's worried that Nora will be able to manipulate her by using her little boy or might turn him into her servant once he grows up. ? Though Nora is generally civil towards those who work for her, using somebody to gain an advantage is something she's certainly capable of doing. I hope we'll see more of this being addressed. ?

Really curious about Thomas family history and his sister! Especially about why she is forced to hide now and why she dislikes him.  Your screenshots are always gorgeous and masterfully designed but I am always intrigued by your story and the vampire world that you've created. We are slowly getting various hints about it : the prophecy/vision of Nora, her father and her possible sibling, the political workings of the vampire court, the mystery of the Duchess slain family.  I get a feeling that there's something big coming and I cannot wait to find out what it will be! ?

Wonderful job, Alter! And as always, it is a pleasure to read your tale. ?

On 6/21/2020 at 5:48 AM, Devianna said:

Oh my! I can see why this would be one of your favorite sex scene sequences.  It is erotic, sensual, almost tender and on top of it - nobody even dies! ?

Probably the first entry in years I couldn't assign the blood tag to.

On 6/21/2020 at 5:48 AM, Devianna said:

Despite the gorgeous intimate scene lasting through most of the episode we still got quite a few bits of story information here. Fina gave birth (yay!) but she wishes to leave. I wonder whether she's worried that Nora will be able to manipulate her by using her little boy or might turn him into her servant once he grows up. ? Though Nora is generally civil towards those who work for her, using somebody to gain an advantage is something she's certainly capable of doing. I hope we'll see more of this being addressed. ?

Yeah it's a bit of a bummer to tell some parts of Fina's story only via telling about it instead of actually showing what is happening, but I want to keep my narrative perspective to what Nora actually sees and knows and don't have an omniscient narrator. 

On 6/21/2020 at 5:48 AM, Devianna said:

Really curious about Thomas family history and his sister! Especially about why she is forced to hide now and why she dislikes him.

We'll see I may work on a story this very weekend where she has a chance to appear...maybe, we'll see.

On 6/21/2020 at 5:48 AM, Devianna said:

Wonderful job, Alter! And as always, it is a pleasure to read your tale. ?

Thank you very much for your comment!

Hi , Alter , this episode is so hot , you did a great job of the story telling ! Thanks for sharing , and would you tell me where I can find her bra&garter mod please , I think I need more clothing mods more for my characters to play the scene too !