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Chapter 13 Section 1 - Baroness' Return


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Chapter 13 Section 1 - Baroness' Return

 



 

This is the beginning of Chapter 13, leaving High Rock behind and finally returning to Skyrim!

 

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YES She's back! 😃

 

Nice to see the rest of the cast again.
As usual I love good party scenes
Amelie's welcome kiss was sweet.
Nora calling Hanna a whore made me laugh, considering the... ehem,... things she has done herself 🤣

 

There is some clipping in those panties. I think they are Nezzar's collection?

Great work!

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Good chapter.
Good thing Nora seems patient.
But hannah should avoid taking her mother for an idiot.
Because I think Nora is very smart.
I thought for a moment she was going to slap her daughter and the baron’s son.

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6 hours ago, Myst42 said:

YES She's back! 😃

 

Nice to see the rest of the cast again.
As usual I love good party scenes

Amelie's welcome kiss was sweet.

 

Thank you!

 

6 hours ago, Myst42 said:

Nora calling Hanna a whore made me laugh, considering the... ehem,... things she has done herself 🤣

 

'Whore' is used as a generic slur similar how it's used in Game of Thrones. 'The whore from High Garden' etc.

 

 

6 hours ago, Myst42 said:

There is some clipping in those panties. I think they are Nezzar's collection?

Great work!

 

Yes it's Nezzar, though I use followers for many of my NPCs and this is what sometimes causes clipping.

 

 

3 hours ago, hana120 said:

Good chapter.
Good thing Nora seems patient.
But hannah should avoid taking her mother for an idiot.
Because I think Nora is very smart.
I thought for a moment she was going to slap her daughter and the baron’s son.

 

Thank you!

Though Hannah is not Nora's daughter. Hannah is the daughter of Nora's Thrallmaster. Furthermore Nora handed Hannah her invitation to the party well aware that something like this is probably going to happen. Nora is not judging Hannah for what she happened ;) .

 

 

 

 

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27 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

 

Thank you!

 

 

'Whore' is used as a generic slur similar how it's used in Game of Thrones. 'The whore from High Garden' etc.

 

 

 

Yes it's Nezzar, though I use followers for many of my NPCs and this is what sometimes causes clipping.

 

 

 

Thank you!

Though Hannah is not Nora's daughter. Hannah is the daughter of Nora's Thrallmaster. Furthermore Nora handed Hannah her invitation to the party well aware that something like this is probably going to happen. Nora is not judging Hannah for what she happened ;) .

 

 

 

 

Nevertheless I love his character, calm and patience.
Calm in the Karlov. 
"Don’t worry. Why worry?"

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We can see from his face that nothing worries him, nothing irritates him.
She is serene calm patient.

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Is it me or is this chapter really short? I don't know it could just be the way the chapter ended which caught me off guard that it was coming. Either way good chapter. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup:

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22 hours ago, hana120 said:

Nevertheless I love his character, calm and patience.
Calm in the Karlov. 
"Don’t worry. Why worry?"

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We can see from his face that nothing worries him, nothing irritates him.
She is serene calm patient.

 

Thanks... and now I see why you thought she was her daughter, she's just playing along with Hannah's story ;) 

 

 

 

15 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Is it me or is this chapter really short? I don't know it could just be the way the chapter ended which caught me off guard that it was coming. Either way good chapter. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup:

 

Yes, the chapter is divided into two parts, well see how Hannah got to know her two friends next ;) .

 

 

 

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A shorter, yet not empty chapter. It's funny you should mention Game of Thrones, because it's indeed the same personal/political/violent/magical vibe about the story events, yet transposed in a vampire world. And so if Nora gave the invitation to Hannah, one could wonder what was her idea behind it : was it to introduce her to the mundane vampire nobility, or was she fishing for something else in the doing ? Also while the neonate isn't her daughter so to speak, she still educates her in a way close to that. Anyway, lots of great interior visuals going back to the Karlov manor, but also at Davon's castle ; with his sons' design embodying quite well the seducing/manipulative archetype as well.  And still an adult tone on top of that. Last but not least an occasional comic layout being put to good use as well (Hanna's foot hiding something under the beg for example). So great chapter overall. :D👌

 

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ldyMRSUy_o.png « That Valentina teacher, she's speaking like if not being interested in other gals was something very abnormal, uh. She's likely the one who whipped Amelie too. :classic_confused:

               Anyway, they've got nice blankets in that house.

 

                I also see Hannah is having lots of fun. But, I would advise her not to hide things from Mrs. Nora, 'cause she's very mean when she gets mad, uh.  :classic_angel: »

 

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On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

A shorter, yet not empty chapter. It's funny you should mention Game of Thrones, because it's indeed the same personal/political/violent/magical vibe about the story events, yet transposed in a vampire world. And so if Nora gave the invitation to Hannah, one could wonder what was her idea behind it : was it to introduce her to the mundane vampire nobility, or was she fishing for something else in the doing ? Also while the neonate isn't her daughter so to speak, she still educates her in a way close to that.

 

Thanks for the comment and sorry for my late reply :classic_angel:.

There is always a second thought with Nora, but Hannah is hardly someone she could use in any real scheme, she's too young and unpredictable. It's more a gently pushing her in a direction she thinks is right for her ;) .

On a metalevel Hannah's story at this point is mostly that of a young vampire trying to find it's place in this world and this time she somehow ended with two guys in bed which is an experience she never had before.

 

On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

Anyway, lots of great interior visuals going back to the Karlov manor, but also at Davon's castle ;

Thanks, much appreciated, at this point all locations are custom build, so your comment is much appreciated. 

 

On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

With his sons' design embodying quite well the seducing/manipulative archetype as well.  And still an adult tone on top of that. Last but not least an occasional comic layout being put to good use as well (Hanna's foot hiding something under the beg for example). So great chapter overall. :D👌

Thank you!

 

On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « That Valentina teacher, she's speaking like if not being interested in other gals was something very abnormal, uh. She's likely the one who whipped Amelie too. :classic_confused:

 

Another one of the sections where Hannah got to try herself out ;) 

 

On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

 

               Anyway, they've got nice blankets in that house.

I'll let the servants of the Manor know.

 

On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

                I also see Hannah is having lots of fun. But, I would advise her not to hide things from Mrs. Nora, 'cause she's very mean when she gets mad, uh.  :classic_angel: »

 

 Hard to convincingly lie to Nora in Hannah's position, there's just such a massive experience gap between them. 

 

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On 4/2/2024 at 10:44 PM, Alter Native said:

 

Thanks for the comment and sorry for my late reply :classic_angel:.

There is always a second thought with Nora, but Hannah is hardly someone she could use in any real scheme, she's too young and unpredictable. It's more a gently pushing her in a direction she thinks is right for her ;) .

On a metalevel Hannah's story at this point is mostly that of a young vampire trying to find it's place in this world and this time she somehow ended with two guys in bed which is an experience she never had before. (...)

Thanks, much appreciated, at this point all locations are custom build, so your comment is much appreciated. 

No worries, Alter. I'm still amazed you managed to keep up with regular publishing rates after all this time, so answering comments can wait. :classic_wink:

 

On 4/2/2024 at 10:44 PM, Alter Native said:

On a metalevel Hannah's story at this point is mostly that of a young vampire trying to find it's place in this world and this time she somehow ended with two guys in bed which is an experience she never had before.

ldyMRSUy_o.png « That looks very good. I wouldn't mind trying metalevel things too I think. million_dollar_baby.gif »

On 4/2/2024 at 10:44 PM, Alter Native said:

 

Another one of the sections where Hannah got to try herself out ;) 

 

I'll let the servants of the Manor know.

 

 Hard to convincingly lie to Nora in Hannah's position, there's just such a massive experience gap between them. 

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very hope you're talking about that Hannah gal trying a black outfit, and not about Amelie being tried out as a dummy uh. million_dollar_baby.gif

               Anyway, that's not very often someone very answers all what I said. That's very nice, yes. :classic_cool: »

 

 

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On 3/18/2024 at 12:15 PM, Tirloque said:

I also see Hannah is having lots of fun. But, I would advise her not to hide things from Mrs. Nora, 'cause she's very mean when she gets mad, uh.  :classic_angel: »

 

> Ahem, are you talking about me? :classic_angel: (It looks like Nora and I have two things in common: beauty and nasty character).:classic_laugh:

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20 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Ahem, are you talking about me? :classic_angel: (It looks like Nora and I have two things in common: beauty and nasty character).:classic_laugh:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Whereas I'm very beautiful and very poised. icegif-308.gif

 

               That's why I started giving advice to people. :classic_sleepy: »

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