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Chapter 4 Section 10 - Agony and Ecstasy


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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

 

Short Summary of the previous entries:

 


Things are coming to an end with a big ball.
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It doesn't take long until things get out of hand.
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Nora meets Lenora, Visocuntess of the Realm and Nora gets to know the secrets of the Queen of the realm.
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For quite some time I wasn't sure if I wanted to post this entry at all, since some of it's contents are a bit more on the heavy side. I'm not sure how you feel about this, but for those of you how dislike this, chapter 5 will start in two or three weeks and the focus will go to a more story based approach and a bit different content. 

 

 

Chapter 4 Section 10 - Agony and Ecstasy

 

 

 

 


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Thanks for reading :). I am not sure how I feel about this entry myself, there are some shots I like and sometimes I wonder what was going on when I created the blood textures for the spike things... :open_mouth:
Whatever, in the end we all made it out alive.

I personally like chapter 4 much better then the really mediocre chapter 3. 
For every entry in this chapter I almost always realized what I had in mind and I personally really like every entry of this forth chapter of Nora's story by itself. Nonetheless, there were some problems with the pacing of the "story" and the balance between sexual content and the non sexual content. This is something I personally feel like I greatly improved on looking at the fifth chapter.
There was just too much opportunity in chapter 4 I didn't want to miss out on. Like the vampire ball and its transition to the bloody version, the private meeting of Nora with Queen Isabella and everything that came with it and especially the Hammerfell stories that I personally really liked.

 

Thanks to all of you for staying with me and my blog for so long, it's been over a year now and there is more too come, much more :).

 
 

 


 

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Guest

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That redesigned tumbrl page looks awesome :smiley: .

 

This session was fine, but I think it was a bit too hardcore for me :tongue: .

 

It was pretty brutal. :classic_unsure:

 

Still Nora and Lenora going to be good friends ;) 

Crw0

Posted

Ooohh, I never would have thought that it could be so hot! And it's f**king hot!
Great job ^_^

Guest

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Aria: Nora has some serious kinkiness and I love it

Alter Native

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3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

That redesigned tumbrl page looks awesome :smiley: .

 

This session was fine, but I think it was a bit too hardcore for me :tongue: .

 

It was pretty brutal. :classic_unsure:

 

Still Nora and Lenora going to be good friends ;) 

Thanks, we'll have to see how long their friendship lasts... :smile:

1 hour ago, Crw said:

Ooohh, I never would have thought that it could be so hot! And it's f**king hot!
Great job ^_^

At least someone likes it ;) thank you :).

45 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Nora has some serious kinkiness and I love it

Thanks, Nora appreciates that.

Jay-Omms

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:love: Holy Moly! Where you get the spike device from?:mrgreen::thumbsup: 

Rattlesnark

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A bit more "ouch" than I'm used to as well, but a vampiress does what a vampiress likes! Excited for the next chapter, and the 'fight' we're all excited for.

ecto1

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23 hours ago, Alter Native said:

At least someone likes it ;) thank you :).

 

They weren't the only one! Really enjoyed this one a lot and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have in store! :thumbsup:

Alter Native

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On 8.3.2018 at 3:21 AM, Jayomms said:

:love: Holy Moly! Where you get the spike device from?:mrgreen::thumbsup: 

Thanks, honestly I don't remember anymore, did this some time ago. I got it somewhere on LoversLab, I think the mod did something completely else and had the spikes as well.

 

16 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

A bit more "ouch" than I'm used to as well, but a vampiress does what a vampiress likes! Excited for the next chapter, and the 'fight' we're all excited for.

It's not just a 'fight', but rather a fight ;). But there will be one thing to tell first before we get to it.

 

14 hours ago, ecto1 said:

 

They weren't the only one! Really enjoyed this one a lot and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have in store! :thumbsup:

Thanks, things will get a bit more down to earth in chapter 5, but there is probably one section you're going to like.

Guest

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Without judging fans of pain, BDSM and masochism must say will never understand how somebody can find the (sexual) pleasure in pain. Via versa: many people don't understand how can I enjoy in anal and peeing games with my luvs. :smile:

 

Neglecting my opinion about BDSM I must compliment your excellent screenshots and the story. Marvelously done as always.

bodabira 01

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Great chapter, but I have to say it was a bit too hardcore for me, but I'm always impressed at the quality of your shots! :smile:

ecto1

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6 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, things will get a bit more down to earth in chapter 5, but there is probably one section you're going to like.

It doesn't need to be full of sex to be enjoyable! I know I don't always leave comments, I guess sometimes I just feel like I don't have anything of particular value to say. But I do read all your entries and I enjoy every one! :smiley:

Tirloque

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Hmm, you went into more extreme forms of BSDM it seems, impression enforced by the blood/whip effects. I'm not sure if the submissive turn Nora takes since a few episodes is really consistent with the dominant image you built in our minds all this time though. Regardless, both were interesting (don't know if that was intended, but going deeper into symbols, Nora, with her head cilice covered in blood,  could even be looked as a form of antichrist) and with still a very good ambiance.

 

Looking forward for chapter V ! :classic_wink:


 

Tirloque

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Baroness Karlov ? A letter for you... not sure from who. It's coming from very far. Express service.

 

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Guest

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9 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Baroness Karlov ? A letter for you... not sure from who. It's coming from very far. Express service.

 

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Don't listen to Serana.

 

Gwynolda's showing will help you long run ;) 

Storms of Superior

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Wow. I'm not into vampires or bloodplay, but given the context presented here, just wow. Thanks for the hard work.

Lynx2k10

Posted

Delicious chapter! Can't hardly wait for the next chapter!

Alter Native

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22 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Without judging fans of pain, BDSM and masochism must say will never understand how somebody can find the (sexual) pleasure in pain. Via versa: many people don't understand how can I enjoy in anal and peeing games with my luvs. :smile:

 

Neglecting my opinion about BDSM I must compliment your excellent screenshots and the story. Marvelously done as always.

Thank you Eva :), see blow for some additional words.

20 hours ago, bodabira 01 said:

Great chapter, but I have to say it was a bit too hardcore for me, but I'm always impressed at the quality of your shots! :smile:

Thank you.

7 hours ago, Storms of Superior said:

Wow. I'm not into vampires or bloodplay, but given the context presented here, just wow. Thanks for the hard work.

 

@Eva, bodabira, Storm and all the other who think this scene was a bit too much

 

The shown scene, was imo far away from actual BDSM, even though SM is part of the word BDSM. What happned here was very different from what people typically associate with BDSM.
As to the level of violence and the kind of content, imo it comes down to the presentation of the content. What technically happened is relatively harmless, two adults that agree to have some consensual fun together and in the end both are happy and there are no lasting consequences of anyone of them. Compared to what happened during the party scene of last section and other secti

ons of this blog with actual rape/murder and vampires eating mortals this technically harmless. 
In reality this is much different though and I agree with everyone who things this section was to heavy.

The prespeech was there for a reason.
What matters is the way it's presented, you see every mark building up on her body her painful face after every action, the level of detail is what makes this brutal, not what actually happens. Imagine how upset the Internet would be if there was a video making it's rounds in the Internet of a dog drowning in the Themse in the middle of London. Where you'd see his struggles, his desperation to reach the land and eventually he drowns. 
Compare this to how much people care about 9 Million people dying every year on hunger (Wikipedia). It's pretty clear what's objectively worse. But the latter is just a number, you don't know anything about these people. Most people acknowledge that it's terrible but don't really care because you have no emotional connection to any of them, compared to the whining, desperate and drowning dog in the river.
This similar here. People die left and right on this blog and nobody cares, but suddenly Nora getting hurt after she asked for it is a big deal, again, I agree with you. The prespeech was there for a reason.
It's the way it's shown and the amount of detail, not what is shown. Maybe it's also because the implication is that you should somehow get sexual aroused by watching this compared to the 17th dying Stormtrooper in a Star Wars movie scene. 

 

 

16 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, you went into more extreme forms of BSDM it seems, impression enforced by the blood effects. I'm not sure if the submissive turn Nora takes since a few episodes is really consistent with the dominant image you built in our minds all this time though. Regardless, both were interesting (don't know if that was intended, but going deeper into symbols, Nora, with her head cilice covered in blood,  could even be looked as a form of antichrist) and with still a very good ambiance.

 

Looking forward for chapter V ! :classic_wink:


 

 

Concerning the "submissive" turn of Nora, I my opinion the last section were in good agreement with her character, we have just not seen her in a different environment like this. Before chapter 4 we never saw her in an environment with lots of high vampires. In the sections she was one of the youngest and weakest vampires around. Not because she has changed, but because she is now in a different environment. Think a about your boss standing in front of his boss, suddenly he's a different person. 
Before that, we mostly saw her around lower vampires and humans. Where she was the strong/dominant person, on whatever metric you want to choose. Now we saw her on one level with other vampires, such as the queen or Vasil/Ahtar. With the queen the only part were she could be seen as submissive was when the Queen collard her, but this was kind of part of the "game" they were playing. Afterwards in the bath scene the two were back on one level. During this section and the Vasil/Ahatar scene, there was at all points mutual agreement about what was going to happen (except for the dress ;)). I don't see her behavior in any way submissive in a way where she is submitting to a will of someone else without some of her control. During the panther scene she was too proud to admit that she was inexperienced in this.
You're right, she is not all the time pushing others (such as the first half of the Vasil/Ahtar scene, or pushing Lenora to beat her), but also gets pushed by others (second half of Vasil/Ahtar, collar Queen scene), but this is due to the nature of a lot of dominant (old powerful vampires) meeting each other. 

3 hours ago, Lynx2k10 said:

Delicious chapter! Can't hardly wait for the next chapter!

Thank you very much!

 

20 hours ago, ecto1 said:

It doesn't need to be full of sex to be enjoyable! I know I don't always leave comments, I guess sometimes I just feel like I don't have anything of particular value to say. But I do read all your entries and I enjoy every one! :smiley:

 

Thank you very much ecto, you're welcome :)

Alter Native

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16 hours ago, Tirloque said:

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Tirloque

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30 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

 

 

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Rofl at Nora's reaction, most excellent. ^^ Yet the patience of Amelie certainly makes-up for it, and I'm sure Malicia will be delighted from her response. :classic_biggrin:

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59 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

 

 

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Haha :smiley: , Nora's reaction is gold :classic_biggrin:

Storms of Superior

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At the time that I posted my previous comment,  I was still taking in the scene, and I didn't allow myself the opportunity to offer clarity; what I meant to say,  but fell short of,  was that,  given the context provided, the scene was actually very attractive. It's fine to allow creatures that don't actually exist to be strange for the sake of a story.  Of course it's not BDSM as it's actually practiced by the mainstream bondage culture; if I run across any bloodplay videos involving real people,  I pass them by.  

 

Thanks for sharing, sorry for the confusion (it's a daily thing for me), and keep the good work coming. 

Alter Native

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12 hours ago, Storms of Superior said:

At the time that I posted my previous comment,  I was still taking in the scene, and I didn't allow myself the opportunity to offer clarity; what I meant to say,  but fell short of,  was that,  given the context provided, the scene was actually very attractive. It's fine to allow creatures that don't actually exist to be strange for the sake of a story.  Of course it's not BDSM as it's actually practiced by the mainstream bondage culture; if I run across any bloodplay videos involving real people,  I pass them by.  

 

Thanks for sharing, sorry for the confusion (it's a daily thing for me), and keep the good work coming. 

 

I was not trying question or challenge your statement, even though I indeed misunderstood it (reading it now makes it perfectly clear what you meant, my bad). I just wanted to give my thoughts on why some people, understandably, disliked the shown scene. 

AltNameByeee

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Wow. That was a pretty intense scene. Not really my flavor, but it was still cool to read! I'm definitely hyped for Chapter 5 though!

Miauzi

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Of course this scene has to do with SM

this is not "50 shades of gray" - but SM as it is not lived out at various BDSM parties but as it is behind

closed but not locked doors


these toys are not unknown to me - but they are not my own playground - because I

also for very personal reasons does not belong to the "cut" scene


what the two women "did" there in front of the fireplace is ultimately harmless compared to completely different practices


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and yes - I was sure that Nora is a "switcherin" - here I have the confirmation

:classic_wub:

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Natürlich hat diese Szene mit SM zu tun

das ist hier nicht "50 schattierungen von grau" - sondern SM wie er zwar nicht auf diversen BDSM-Party ausgelebt wird sondern wie er hinter

geschlossenen aber nicht VERschlossenen Türen stattfindet

 

diese Spielsachen sind mir selbst nicht unbekannt - sie sind aber nicht meine eigene Spielwiese - weil ich

auch ganz persönlichen Gründen nicht zur "Cut"-Szene gehöre

 

das was die beiden Frauen da vor dem Kamin "getrieben" haben ist letztlich noch harmlos im Vergleich zu ganz anderen Praktiken

 

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und ja - ich war mir sicher das Nora eine "switcherin" ist - hier habe ich die Bestätigung

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