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Chapter 4 Section 7 - The Queen's Reward II


Alter Native

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Nora's and Queen Isabella's night continues, you find part I here.

 

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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

I have also updated the summary page with some of the new characters and some background on the vampire realm Nora is living in.

 

 

 

Short Summary of the previous entries:

 


Nora was invited to the vampire assembly of Queen Isabella in High Rock.  
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After meeting her old love Ahtar she receives a private audience with her Queen. 
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She offers her the title of a Baroness in the Queen's realm in exchange for Nora slaying the current Baron Eric Beauvais. Nora promises to so and the two skip the official banquet and instead celebrate her new title privately.
 

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Chapter 4 Section 7 - The Queen's Reward II

 

 

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This was the rest of the evening of Nora and Isabella I started two entries ago. Technically the whole scene is about 300 screenshots long and I decided to split it up into several entries. Since the last entry was so long this one is super short and basically nothing is happening.

In the original scene there was no dialogue at all and it felt a bit too thin and I tried to add something this morning. As you have just seen there is still no dialogue since basically everything I wanted to tell is already told through the screenshots itself and I don't like writing dialogue just for the sake of dialogue without any meaning. I'm also not the biggest fan of pointless uhhs and ahhs... so yeah.

 

 

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Grewat work! :smiley: .

 

Now Nora got the actual reward :smiley: .

 

I really liked this bath scene :smile: .

 

Interesting the Queen has also horns, I not really noticed it before.

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"A picture is worth a thousand words". Sometimes you don't need the dialogue, the screens convey everything on their own.

 

I'm also really enjoying the difference in character design between these two. Nora immediately looks more threatening yet Isabella has total control over her, despite looking so unassuming. I guess that's what makes her so dangerous!

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3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

 

Interesting the Queen has also horns, I not really noticed it before.

OMG me too

 

 

Very nice work my friend.

 

 

Aria: I need a chain like that

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3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Grewat work! :smiley: .

 

Now Nora got the actual reward :smiley: .

I really liked this bath scene :smile: .

Interesting the Queen has also horns, I not really noticed it before.

Thank you. The idea was that some female vampires grow horns over time like man grow beards. But I didn't pull it through completely. 

 

2 hours ago, ecto1 said:

"A picture is worth a thousand words". Sometimes you don't need the dialogue, the screens convey everything on their own.

 

I'm also really enjoying the difference in character design between these two. Nora immediately looks more threatening yet Isabella has total control over her, despite looking so unassuming. I guess that's what makes her so dangerous!

Thank you very much ecto.

I personally don't think Isabella looks unassuming though^^. 

 

4 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

 

OMG me too

Very nice work my friend.

Aria: I need a chain like that

Thank you :).

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31 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

The idea was that some female vampires grow horns over time like man grow beards. But I didn't pull it through completely. 

Interesting :smiley: 

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Right! Time to wash off that Bloody mess. :mrgreen::thumbsup: 

That was a little suspicious when Isabella cut off Karlov like that like she didn't want her to get close or something... Well I don't know....yeah ;)

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@ All: Thank you guys.

3 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Right! Time to wash off that Bloody mess. :mrgreen::thumbsup: 

That was a little suspicious when Isabella cut off Karlov like that like she didn't want her to get close or something... Well I don't know....yeah ;)

Well, these were the only two sentences worth writing down, because they actually meant something and you figured it out ;).

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18 hours ago, Alter Native said:

@ All: Thank you guys.

Well, these were the only two sentences worth writing down, because they actually meant something and you figured it out ;).

:classic_biggrin::thumbsup:

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About sex onomatopoeia, I see pros and cons to them. Cons are they're a bit sketchy, can invade unwanted parts of the picture, and can be somewhat repetitive. Pros are that they give more precision about motion (particularly about movement's speed and type), about what the characters are feeling and their personality (a woman who moans during sex is giving both a message to her partner and info about her personality IMO), create sound and create motion. :classic_smile:

 

Both ways (slideshow style vs comic style) are respectable anyway. And I think that even in mainly comics/pure images stories, there are moments where it would be wise for a comic author not to intrude the image ; and others for a textless story to introduce a bit of sound and dialog. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

 

Malicia : « I know why the queenie is mad, yes !  Norah just ruined two very nice men ; so she was forced to use plastic swords instead of real ones. No wonder she was mad. :classic_sleepy: »

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41 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I know why the queenie is mad, yes !  Norah just ruined two very nice men ; so she was forced to use plastic swords instead of real ones. No wonder she was mad. :classic_sleepy: »

 

I can see Gwynolda's influence on Malicia :smile: 

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15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

About sex onomatopoeia, I see pros and cons to them. Cons are they're a bit sketchy, can invade unwanted parts of the picture, and can be somewhat repetitive. Pros are that they give more precision about motion (particularly about movement's speed and type), about what the characters are feeling and their personality (a woman who moans during sex is giving both a message to her partner and info about her personality IMO), create sound and create motion. :classic_smile:

 

Both ways (slideshow style vs comic style) are respectable anyway. And I think that even in mainly comics/pure images stories, there are moments where it would be wise for a comic author not to intrude the image ; and others for a textless story to introduce a bit of sound and dialog. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

Malicia : « I know why the queenie is mad, yes !  Norah just ruined two very nice men ; so she was forced to use plastic swords instead of real ones. No wonder she was mad. :classic_sleepy: »

Thanks for your insight. It's probably a question of personal taste too, depending how much someone likes dirty talk.

 

@Malicia, they probably used the finest Hammerfell ivory ;).

 

 

 

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Awesome work! You did a great job setting up these shots! I can only imagine how frustrating it must have been to align everything so precisely.

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