Wooow!!!! Finally something for my taste That lesbian sex scene is marvelous. Enjoyed in every picture. Nora has such lovely face I would love to kiss and lick.

Compliments for excellent episode.

Good work on the episode. ?

I was so distracted by this amazing double blowjob scene, that i absolutely did not expect this twist!
Ps: It looks like Ivar is going to survive until dawn, everyone was so excited by "big brother" appearance that almost forget about him  

Amazing job, as always, Alter Native!

6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Wooow!!!! Finally something for my taste That lesbian sex scene is marvelous. Enjoyed in every picture. Nora has such lovely face I would love to kiss and lick.

Compliments for excellent episode.

 

Thank you very much Eva! 

There is on average one lesbian scene per chapter  maybe there is more coming this chapter, we'll see.

 

5 hours ago, L0rd_Inquisitor said:

Good work on the episode. ?

 

Thank you!

 

4 hours ago, Crw said:

I was so distracted by this amazing double blowjob scene, that i absolutely did not expect this twist!
Ps: It looks like Ivar is going to survive until dawn, everyone was so excited by "big brother" appearance that almost forget about him  

Amazing job, as always, Alter Native!

 

Thank you very much!

Glad you like it.  

 What a twist! It would have been crazier if that was the vampire that turned Nora but this will do.  It almost seemed that way the way you had set up Lenora asking Nora those questions. Great Work.  

 

Edited June 20, 2021 by Jay-Omms

I had a feeling that was Harkon. Though this wasn't all my taste, I definitely am loving the difficult situation Nora and Thomas have found themselves in. They won't get out of this easily, it seems. Nice job!

Thriller, action, drama, porn and romance.. All this smart stuffed in one neat release!? I believe that you have outdone works of Stephen King and George R.R. Martin with your remarkable bestsellers. It's not easy to summarise the totality of your creativity in a few words, because so much is happening in each set of pictures.

The first thing that drew my attention in section of this chapter is the splendor of the interior and the event.
I'm especially impressed with this image, where you placed so many characters!

How did you capture such a spectacular meeting / reunion? Each character seems to be involved in their own role.?

When it comes to the part with adult contents fuelled with racy dialogues.. Some part of me shed skin seeing the way Lenora shove silver, anal rocket down between one of Nora's hot cockpits. As the plot unfolds, body-feeding romance escalate from foreplay into wild performance with violence. The way Lenora coaxes Nora to play the part of submissive mistress placed your girl in a really tight spot!?

Lucky Ivar and.. more lucky big brother! I really envy him such professional lesbian service! Just a pity we didn't see a deep throat challenge as a matter of sweet revenge but hot hug and double bj made up for this lack!

Sorry that I will not speak warmly about the mutilation and killing of characters. I'm untasted by gory butcheries, pools with blood and stuff cuz that's kind of scenes scares me. Thank you very much for another exciting and jaw-dropping piece of work!?
 

Edited June 21, 2021 by smartfon

There is indeed plenty of entertainment in your chapters now. The constant plotting of nearly everyone is a big part of the entertainment, even if this time, Nora was outsmarted by Lenora. For my part, I started being suspicious right when the vampire lord spoke, as the color was the same than Harkon's, and under that form they is no way she could've known who it really was. Great twist that being said, as you turn an entertainment (the sex scene) into another (the plot). Technically, great screens all along, with a lot of creativity mixing the poses and concealing what isn't. The fluid edits where also quite nice. A few grammatical mistakes here and there though, but nothing major ; and the length of the different parts were rather unequal. Quite a good entry overall ! ?

 

« That's what happens when you drink at parties, you end up having gone honey-honey with people you don't want. Maybe she should stop drinking all the time.

                 Also, I hope that Ivar guy managed to very hide himself, 'cause he's very handsome !  »

 

5 hours ago, smartfon said:

I believe that you have outdone works of Stephen King and George R.R. Martin with your remarkable bestsellers.

If there's something we 3D storytellers cannot currently do, it's indeed sell our work. Which is work nevertheless, while the members of our community most of the time do it unpretentiously. Do be aware that with that start, what is written as a compliment could be interpreted as not so subtle mockery.

 

Edited June 21, 2021 by Tirloque

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

If there's something we 3D storytellers cannot currently do, it's indeed sell our work. Which is work nevertheless, while the members of our community most of the time do it unpretentiously. Do be aware that with that start, what is written as a compliment could be interpreted as not so subtle mockery.

 

If you mean the bloggers on this website, you're right! I appreciate that they share their works with pure pleasure and not for profit.?
Such an approach is a fine token of modesty on their part! "Not so subtle mockery", you say. Thank you.. That's a good point, which I will certainly take into consideration. I wrote this short review just to applaud and thanks Alter Native for his efforts. Unfortunately, my excitement sometimes turns into these types of incorrect compliments. Rather, the author has good reason to mock me!

Edited June 22, 2021 by smartfon

On 6/20/2021 at 1:46 AM, Jay-Omms said:

 What a twist! It would have been crazier if that was the vampire that turned Nora but this will do.  It almost seemed that way the way you had set up Lenora asking Nora those questions. Great Work.  

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Thank you very much!

I doubt Nora's father would just show up random in a story like this. If he'd return we'd know it. Also she would have probably recognized him.

 

On 6/20/2021 at 7:25 PM, Collygon said:

I had a feeling that was Harkon. Though this wasn't all my taste, I definitely am loving the difficult situation Nora and Thomas have found themselves in. They won't get out of this easily, it seems. Nice job!

 

Thanks, I kinda agree with the taste thing, not something I would do like this today, but I did this in 2018 I think. I was pretty far ahead at some point with parts of my story.

 

 

On 6/21/2021 at 6:11 PM, smartfon said:

Thriller, action, drama, porn and romance.. All this smart stuffed in one neat release!? I believe that you have outdone works of Stephen King and George R.R. Martin with your remarkable bestsellers. It's not easy to summarise the totality of your creativity in a few words, because so much is happening in each set of pictures.

The first thing that drew my attention in section of this chapter is the splendor of the interior and the event.
I'm especially impressed with this image, where you placed so many characters!

 

Thank you very much for all the praise. I'm certainly not as good as Martin .

Just doing what I enjoy.

That was actually far away from the most NPCs I did in a scene, have a look at Chapter 4 Section 9 or Chapter 9 Section 7,8,9.

 

On 6/21/2021 at 6:11 PM, smartfon said:

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How did you capture such a spectacular meeting / reunion? Each character seems to be involved in their own role.?

 

Thank you! 

For the most part it's a lot of preperation in the CK to set the environment up and then just basic posing.

 

 

 

On 6/21/2021 at 6:11 PM, smartfon said:

When it comes to the part with adult contents fuelled with racy dialogues.. Some part of me shed skin seeing the way Lenora shove silver, anal rocket down between one of Nora's hot cockpits. As the plot unfolds, body-feeding romance escalate from foreplay into wild performance with violence. The way Lenora coaxes Nora to play the part of submissive mistress placed your girl in a really tight spot!?

Just kinda an ego thing when you have two similar character types. Maybe in a different world roles would be reversed. 

 

On 6/21/2021 at 6:11 PM, smartfon said:

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Lucky Ivar and.. more lucky big brother! I really envy him such professional lesbian service! Just a pity we didn't see a deep throat challenge as a matter of sweet revenge but hot hug and double bj made up for this lack!

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Sorry that I will not speak warmly about the mutilation and killing of characters. I'm untasted by gory butcheries, pools with blood and stuff cuz that's kind of scenes scares me. Thank you very much for another exciting and jaw-dropping piece of work!?

Well there needs to be some blood when telling a vampire story I also don't want them to be made out of sugar, but I try to keep the gore away from the sexual content. (Besides some blood, but that is Twilight level).

 

Thank you very much for your nice comment. Much appreciate it.

 

 

 

On 6/21/2021 at 11:42 PM, Tirloque said:

There is indeed plenty of entertainment in your chapters now. The constant plotting of nearly everyone is a big part of the entertainment, even if this time, Nora was outsmarted by Lenora. For my part, I started being suspicious right when the vampire lord spoke, as the color was the same than Harkon's, and under that form they is no way she could've known who it really was.

The same color was intended, but the whole brother idea was kinda unbelievable to begin with. If Nora wouldn't have been as horny as she was she'd figured it out for sure. Also if Lenora indeed had a brother and I'd pull him randomly out of a hat it would have been pretty poor storytelling...

 

On 6/21/2021 at 11:42 PM, Tirloque said:

 

Great twist that being said, as you turn an entertainment (the sex scene) into another (the plot). Technically, great screens all along, with a lot of creativity mixing the poses and concealing what isn't. The fluid edits where also quite nice.

Thank you!

Most of the fluids actually where 3D models (with some small clipping fixing in gimp).

 

On 6/21/2021 at 11:42 PM, Tirloque said:

« That's what happens when you drink at parties, you end up having gone honey-honey with people you don't want. Maybe she should stop drinking all the time.

                 Also, I hope that Ivar guy managed to very hide himself, 'cause he's very handsome !  »

Fun fact just for you, initially Ivar was supposed to become one of Nora's thralls/servants, sort of as a gift from Lenora, but then I changed too much of the story and characters and thus cut it.

However initially the scene was written with this in mind.

 

43 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

The same color was intended, but the whole brother idea was kinda unbelievable to begin with. If Nora wouldn't have been as horny as she was she'd figured it out for sure. Also if Lenora indeed had a brother and I'd pull him randomly out of a hat it would have been pretty poor storytelling...

Yeah when you think about it, that character hadn't been mentioned anywhere before. However, in the rush of the moment, that felt believable. Until you realize that under that appearance of the vampire lord, the guy could be anyone. ^^

43 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you!

Most of the fluids actually where 3D models (with some small clipping fixing in gimp).

Okay ! Seems that playing with 3D models really brings powerful possibilities, Spy is also quite adept at that. I might have to learn that one day.

43 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Fun fact just for you, initially Ivar was supposed to become one of Nora's thralls/servants, sort of as a gift from Lenora, but then I changed too much of the story and characters and thus cut it.

However initially the scene was written with this in mind.

« Ooh, a fun fact just for me ! I very deserved it, yes ! ?

               Anyway, even if you cut it, he very doesn't needs to be eaten like a tin can. He could very get forgotten, since important things happened.  »

 

 

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you very much!

I doubt Nora's father would just show up random in a story like this. If he'd return we'd know it. Also she would have probably recognized him.

 I guessed she would've figured that out by his very presents. And when she didn't I knew it had to be someone else.  

To Alter Native:

Thank you for your detailed explanations, patience and consideration!? You have a good manner with people and I really appreciate your dedication with things related to running your blog! I may be wrong, but your thoughts and point of view make you a some kind of philosopher!? "I'm certainly not as good as Martin" - you said.
In another sense, you admit that competing with him for a more 'bushy beard' is unlikely to be an option.?

In the meantime, I'd love to look at the previous chapters to see these many assemblies. (I hope they are full of beautiful women!)?

If by CK you mean Creation Kit, I would guess what kind of actions you did with this fan tool.? There was a time that.. I used CK for Oblivion, Fallout 3 and New Vegas to create new characters and to modify the appearance of the original npc.
Choice of locations, dialogues, behaviours, factions, weapons, spells, outfit (or lack thereof), and so on.. I had some fun with this but.. I'm still satisfied with the results achieved in these aforementioned games.?

Anyway! Once again, thank you for your time and sorry that I gave you feedback without using the forum tools.
 

Edited June 30, 2021 by smartfon

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

« Ooh, a fun fact just for me ! I very deserved it, yes ! ?

               Anyway, even if you cut it, he very doesn't needs to be eaten like a tin can. He could very get forgotten, since important things happened.  »

 

 

 

Yes they probably forgot about him during day and he ran off. 

However I always liked the idea of human staying willingly for the thrill, excitement, luxury and the sex of course, even if there life is endangered. 

 

1 hour ago, smartfon said:

To Alter Native:

Thank you for your detailed explanations, patience and consideration!? You have a good manner with people and I really appreciate your dedication with things related to running your blog! I may be wrong, but your thoughts and point of view make you a some kind of philosopher!? "I'm certainly not as good as Martin" - you said.
In another sense, you admit that competing with him for a more 'bushy beard' is unlikely to be an option.?

 

 Thanks. 

 

 

1 hour ago, smartfon said:

In the meantime, I'd love to look at the previous chapters to see these many assemblies. (I hope they are full of beautiful women!)?

Unfortunately now I saved all the beautiful women for this entry. ?

 

 

1 hour ago, smartfon said:

If by CK you mean Creation Kit, I would guess what kind of actions you did with this fan tool.? There was a time that.. I used CK for Oblivion, Fallout 3 and New Vegas to create new characters and to modify the appearance of the original npc.
Choice of locations, dialogues, behaviours, factions, weapons, spells, outfit (or lack thereof), and so on.. I had some fun with this but.. I'm still satisfied with the results achieved in these aforementioned games.?
 

 

Yes CK=Creation Kit, sorry, when you spend a lot of time in the modding community the slang becomes normal to you and you forget to realize that not everyone is used to it.

You can download most of my locations of the story in my Karlov Manor mod, including locations of stories that are not yet released.