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Chapter 4 Section 2 - Mistress of Kings


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The second entry of the fourth chapter of Nora's story. The last time we saw her she met with the high society of vampires the realm of vampire queen Isabella. Bored by the speeches of the other vampires she started daydreaming and remembering her time in Hammerfell. During that time she was part of the Isabella's agents in order to influence the human politics of Hammerfell. While taking direct control would be possible it's often seen as more beneficial to keep out of the everyday affairs of humans and only influence politics when a correction is really necessary.

 

 

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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

 


Short Summary of the previous entries.

 


The last time we saw her she met with the high society of vampires the realm of vampire queen Isabella.

 

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Bored by the speeches of the other vampires she started daydreaming and remembering her time in Hammerfell.

 

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Chapter 4 Section 2 - Mistress of Kings

 


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I hope you enjoyed this entry. I intended to not do the actual sex scene and stay with teasing only because Nora wouldn't 'whore' for her 'job' like this even though he is a king. But in th end it felt a bit to anticlimactic and I decided to make it one of the rare exceptions where she is actually letting him touch her.

 

Edited by Alter Native

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Brilliantly creative scene! It gave a lot of information, yet withheld the most superlative of all. I'm left wondering what she read on that note, but am still enraptured by how cunning, devious, and manipulative Nora is. Great work!

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Brilliantly creative scene! It gave a lot of information, yet withheld the most superlative of all. I'm left wondering what she read on that note, but am still enraptured by how cunning, devious, and manipulative Nora is. Great work!

 

Thanks, the note is not that important, I was just trying to show her methods. There will be another final flashback section in the next entry so this is not part of a big overarching story.

 

Love the shots of the city. 

 

Thanks

 

Great Work Alternative! im already looking forward to the next one :D

 

Thank you very much.

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You did great job with the scenes! :D

 

The chapter itself was great too :).

 

I like these flashback scenes, its show Nora's past :).

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You did great job with the scenes! :D

 

The chapter itself was great too :).

 

I like these flashback scenes, its show Nora's past :).

 

 

Really nicely done, great stuff! :)

 

 

Great job as always! :D

 

Thanks guys

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Wow this was so good.

 

But I got question?

Was she reading his letters spying on him or was she reading his confessions.

 

Nora is a Dominatrix.... nice 

 

This was the from the Gray Crowl of Nocturnal yes, do u know ot het to Hammerfell?

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Wow this was so good.

 

But I got question?

Was she reading his letters spying on him or was she reading his confessions.

 

Nora is a Dominatrix.... nice 

 

This was the from the Gray Crowl of Nocturnal yes, do u know ot het to Hammerfell?

 

Thanks, she was reading the letters spying on him.

I'm sorry, but I don't really understand your last sentence sorry.

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You know, I love the way you are telling your stories. Your pictures speaks a lot and you have very few text lines. I'm not against reading the text but have no time to read long stories with text. Me, Eva and ivy aren't English speaking people and we have to translate for her. So imagine how much time we need to read long stories with hundreds of text line. It consumes the time we don't have. Therefore we keep our "Kinky sisters" episodes short. :)

 

All compliments for this episode although we aren't for BMSM sex. :)

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Even though it was deviously exotic, I must say I am amazed by the way you setup your scenes : new stages, detailed and seemingly custom animations, great colorset and lightning.

The only drawback might be scenaristic : vampire are known to manipulate people, so I wonder if approaching a king unmasked would be really legit, but it's minor.

Excellent work overall. :)

 

Malicia : « Hitting everyone with a wand... Looks fun ! Wanna be a king's mistress too, and with the same dress, yes. » :D

You know, I love the way you are telling your stories. Your pictures speaks a lot and you have very few text lines. (...) Me, Eva and ivy aren't English speaking people and we have to translate for her. :)

I guess that's an unexpected advantage of low-text styles over comics : friendlier to non-anglophones. :)
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Fun read. The pegging scene was a bit unexpected, but it said a lot of the characters and their relationship.

The only thing a bit jarring were the low resolution of the shadows (most noticeable are the ones cast by the earrings), which I suppose might be helped by upping the settings in the .ini - and maybe brute force mode with ENB. That's on the aesthetic and doesn't take much away from the story, of course. :)

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Wow this was so good.

 

But I got question?

Was she reading his letters spying on him or was she reading his confessions.

 

Nora is a Dominatrix.... nice 

 

This was the from the Gray Crowl of Nocturnal yes, do u know ot het to Hammerfell?

 

Thanks, she was reading the letters spying on him.

I'm sorry, but I don't really understand your last sentence sorry.

 

I said how do u get to Hammerfell ?

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All compliments for this episode although we aren't for BMSM sex. :)

 

Thank you very much! English is not my first language and writing all of this takes a lot of time that I try to keep as short as possible.

 

 

Even though it was deviously exotic, I must say I am amazed by the way you setup your scenes : new stages, detailed and seemingly custom animations, great colorset and lightning.

The only drawback might be scenaristic : vampire are known to manipulate people, so I wonder if approaching a king unmasked would be really legit, but it's minor.

Excellent work overall. :)

 

Malicia : « Hitting everyone with a wand... Looks fun ! Wanna be a king's mistress too, and with the same dress, yes. » :D

 

Thanks!

It depends on how you see interpret the scene. The king obviously know that she's a vampire which is part of the thrill for him and having vampires as part of the society doesn't seem to off for me tbh. (Senate etc.) but I can see your problems with it.

 

Fun read. The pegging scene was a bit unexpected, but it said a lot of the characters and their relationship.

 

The only thing a bit jarring were the low resolution of the shadows (most noticeable are the ones cast by the earrings), which I suppose might be helped by upping the settings in the .ini - and maybe brute force mode with ENB. That's on the aesthetic and doesn't take much away from the story, of course. :)

 

You're right about the shadows, I'll have a look at that. The problem ist that I just have a middle class computer and I still want to keep a decent framerate. Thanks!

 

 

I said how do u get to Hammerfell ?

 

 

This is all part of her memories. So she remembers her time im Hammerfell.

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You know, I love the way you are telling your stories. Your pictures speaks a lot and you have very few text lines. I'm not against reading the text but have no time to read long stories with text. Me, Eva and ivy aren't English speaking people and we have to translate for her. So imagine how much time we need to read long stories with hundreds of text line. It consumes the time we don't have. Therefore we keep our "Kinky sisters" episodes short. :)

 

All compliments for this episode although we aren't for BMSM sex. :)

 

My apologies to Elf Prince and Alter native. This is not his comment but mine when being logged under his avatar in order to change it. I thought I switched to mine account afterwards but I didn't.

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