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Chapter 1 Section 3 Remake - Cast into Darkness


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This is the follow up episode of Chapter 1 Section 2 that got released at the same time and is part of the rework of Chapter 1.
Check out the previous entry first if you haven't.

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Short Summary of the previous entries

 

 

 


Nora received a letter from Harkon in which he asked her to take care of a couple of necromancers in his realm.


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She followed his request and during the battle with the necromancers and their summoned monstrosity she got badly wounded. Due to her extensive use of blood magic, she also lost a lot of blood, which made her fall unconscious after the battle.

 

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An overview over all existing chapters and it's character can be found here.

 


Of Blood and Pleasure on Tumblr and Flickr

 

Chapter 1 Section 3 - Cast into Darkness

 

 

 


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That's it with the rework of Chapter 1 I hope you guys liked it. As already announced in the previous entry section 2 and 3 are quite different from the original version. For the most part she gets to do some cool fighting and afterwards she gets down without loosing her dignity.
I'm not super happy with the ending with the three male vampires. They had to be part of the story so Nora could cut their dicks in C2S4, but the whole scene feels a bit forced. Everything would have worked better with just the women.
Have to admit I was kind of tempted to do a bit more with the falmer theme, but it's really annoying to do something cool with creatures like falmer as you can't pose them. Besides that it'll probably come down to kind of the same story as I already did in the original version of Chapter 1 Section 4. But I'm still kind of interested. Somebody let me know if you got a good idea, that can be reasonably done within one section. 

 
 

 

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Wow nice work, I tink this is Karma for all the bad things she's done over the 600 years haha

Good job

 

Edit by Alter Native: This comment is referring to the old version of Chapter 1 Section 3

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On 1/15/2017 at 12:21 AM, Agent Tex said:

Wow nice work, I tink this is Karma for all the bad things she's done over the 600 years haha

 

Good job

I love how you found something interesting to say given the section I posted here ;). She is only 400 years old, I just changed that... not that it matters but I love to be consistent with later sections :).

 

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This almost got a bit disturbing, just how brutalized she got.  Not disturbing in a bad way, but in a "I feel this character".  I'm writing a rape scene myself for a book, and you captured the feeling in pictures that I'm trying to convey with words.  Very very well done.  I'm interested to see how she can escape her tomb and what kind of revenge she will enact.  I loved the fact that her body got both bloodier and dirtier with each scene.

 

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I gave you my vote only because I sympathized with Nora. I felt sorry for her.

My compliments for great screenshots, but not for raping.

P.S. - I didn't want to offend you and please, don't take my comment personally against you. It wasn't my intention to criticize your work but to compliment it expressing my personal view too. :)

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Yep, felt sorry for her as well... yet at the other end, she only got a taste of her own medicine. And Mjoll might be free to go now, so in some way the ending is not lost for everyone. =p

PS : in the last scenes, I've noticed her boots changed in some screens. You added the pic in the bed after shooting the rest, right ? ;)

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On 1/16/2017 at 10:55 AM, Tirloque said:

Yep, felt sorry for her as well... yet at the other end, she only got a taste of her own medicine. And Mjoll might be free to go now, so in some way the ending is not lost for everyone. =p

 

PS : in the last scenes, I've noticed her boots changed in some screens. You added the pic in the bed after shooting the rest, right ? ;)

 

Thanks for your comment and the two ones above. Mjoll should be fine by now, Nora is not returning home any time soon. ;)

I think I am consistent with her footwear. In the beginning she wears the broken stockings that she wore below her initial armor. She then finds the boots which she wears above the stockings. Afterwards the boots get stripped away in the cave scene and in the end she is barefoot.

But maybe I missed something.

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Interesting :D 

 

Althought I expect more fight with the necromancers, still nice rework of the vampire scene.

 

Lets see what you have in mind the falmer parts, that will be interesting.

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52 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Interesting :D 

 

Althought I expect more fight with the necromancers, still nice rework of the vampire scene.

 

Lets see what you have in mind the falmer parts, that will be interesting.

Thanks. After your initial comment in the last section I thought I might have expected something else from the necromancer scene ;) .

I'm not going to rework Chapter 1 Section 4 though, unless I have a good idea of what to do.

 

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Waaaait a second... You just posted 2 of them at once? omg how i missed it(

UDP: Oh, myyyy. Thats cool. And the last pic ?

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46 minutes ago, Swiftstep said:

Great teaser with the last pic.. wow.

Thanks, but it's not really a teaser, after that it leads back to the original chapter 1 back from 2017. You find it here

 

40 minutes ago, Crw said:

Waaaait a second... You just posted 2 of them at once? omg how i missed it(

UDP: Oh, myyyy. Thats cool. And the last pic ?

Thanks, yeah. Things were explained in the beginning of Section 2, but I'm aware most people just skip through it. This part (Section 3) by itself is just a bit too underwhelming so I decided to release it together with Section 2. 

 

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Excellent job. I really like this segway into the falmer arc. I remember when I first read through the falmer/vampire bit I was always a bit confused. This does a great job of setting it up! And again, those blood effects? Damn! So good.

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3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, but it's not really a teaser, after that it leads back to the original chapter 1 back from 2017. You find it here.

 

Uh, well, then it is a great way to make people read your previous stuff :)

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I have more questions then answers now haha, this is so good. Your story has always stood out being very creative but now its amazing. The detail you put, the way u do scenes oh I could only dream of doing stuff this awesome.

 

Aria: So Vampires kill other Vampires? Screw Vampires and fuck Vampires? How does this sound like home?

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On 9/15/2018 at 9:06 PM, Collygon said:

Excellent job. I really like this segway into the falmer arc. I remember when I first read through the falmer/vampire bit I was always a bit confused. This does a great job of setting it up! And again, those blood effects? Damn! So good.

The falmer part is just as confusing as it always was. I wouldn't do it again, but in the end it kicked off certain events in my story . Even up to chapter 4/5 where the queen gave Nora the right to claim the Baron title, which she only did since Nora survived the rebirth ritual, which means she was in Molag Bals favour.

 

 

On 9/16/2018 at 12:01 AM, Agent Tex said:

 

I have more questions then answers now haha, this is so good. Your story has always stood out being very creative but now its amazing. The detail you put, the way u do scenes oh I could only dream of doing stuff this awesome.

 

Aria: So Vampires kill other Vampires? Screw Vampires and fuck Vampires? How does this sound like home?

Thanks. I'm not sure about the creativity though, in the end it more or less always comes down to sex and feeding. I can't remember an entry where I didn't use the "Blood" Tag in the description.

 

@Aria Well, they are competing in some way and Nora's kind feels very elitist/raciest about themself. It's basically like a lion that doesn't want other predators in it land.

 

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11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

@Aria Well, they are competing in some way and Nora's kind feels very elitist/raciest about themself. It's basically like a lion that doesn't want other predators in it land.

Aria: I hope that she doesn't count me as a predictor, because then I'd have to kick her ass back to Molag Bal :) 

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Hmmm. I loved how you used the occasion to deepen your vampire world's lore (with the ferals theme and the domination power), and how you linked Nora's capture to her exploits of previous chapter. The direction/setup of the scenes themselves, with the different crossbow shots, were excellent. Plus the loop is completed, good job ! :D

13 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 I'm not sure about the creativity though, in the end it more or less always comes down to sex and feeding. I can't remember an entry where I didn't use the "Blood" Tag in the description.

That's why it's good to have that kind of entries in your blog. Action scenes, narrative twists turning your character's world upside down are a good way to avoid the content becoming too monotonous.

 

Malicia : « That's very right, yes : you see, I go honey-honey and then I feed too, but sometimes I eat rice instead of noodles so that it doesn't gets boring. :classic_lightbulb: »

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How Is this possible ? Every chapter you have created is great

And for my vampire beauty, I don't even have words to describe my love for her.. Love you..?? 

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2 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: I hope that she doesn't count me as a predictor, because then I'd have to kick her ass back to Molag Bal :) 

I don't think Nora and Aria are competing for the same prey ;) .

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Hmmm. I loved how you used the occasion to deepen your vampire world's lore (with the ferals theme and the domination power), and how you linked Nora's capture to her exploits of previous chapter. The direction/setup of the scenes themselves, with the different crossbow shots, were excellent. Plus the loop is completed, good job ! :D

That's why it's good to have that kind of entries in your blog. Action scenes, narrative twists turning your character's world upside down are a good way to avoid the content becoming too monotonous.

 

Malicia : « That's very right, yes : you see, I go honey-honey and then I feed too, but sometimes I eat rice instead of noodles so that it doesn't gets boring. :classic_lightbulb: »

The whole feral thing is mostly there to make my world compatible with the TES lore where vampires appear as normal enemies that are on par with every guard in Skyrim, which is completely different from my more traditional vampire picture.

So it made sense to have this in the beginning of my story to further explain the differences of this world to the TES lore. It's also going to become more relevant in future chapters. 

 

 

13 minutes ago, death8981 said:

How Is this possible ? Every chapter you have created is great

And for my vampire beauty, I don't even have words to describe my love for her.. Love you..?? 

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed.

I did this rework in the last month, whereas the upcoming chapter 6 was done mid 2017, so expect a drop in quality.

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