Wow the beginning half of the story is very telling. You know the saying a picture says a thousand words? With this chapter the reader really feels what Jonas is going through with that saying portrayed here. Well done  

this epsiode is great!

On 9/24/2023 at 12:15 PM, Jay-Omms said:

Wow the beginning half of the story is very telling. You know the saying a picture says a thousand words? With this chapter the reader really feels what Jonas is going through with that saying portrayed here. Well done  

Thank you very much! 

Glad you like it.

On 9/24/2023 at 12:48 PM, Nonseen said:

this epsiode is great!

Thank you!

great episode

Well, that was quite the unexpected entry. In themes (vampires' bonding with humans, and their prior family bond evolving, how to give birth to a newborn vampire in your setting, the ferals' differences), and content. Still quite the care to be noticed for Jonas' hideout as well. That was also quite the character development for Jonas, with his love for non vampires making him more human, while his rather gruesome art ink supply making him both ruthless and atypical towards vampires. Now, while the entry in itself was quite moving, it's unusual for Nora to seem to let go of her objectives, but I guess she might've pushed Jonas to turn Leah so they could move and join her sometimes later. Regardless, interesting entry in more than one way. ?

« Well, I was expecting the Leah gal to get eaten like a tin can, instead the guys with the conjunctivitis got stabbed and she got ill.

                Still, Nora still buried them afterwards, so I guess she was kinda jealous.  »

On 9/25/2023 at 10:32 PM, ObeyMrWalrus said:

great episode

 

Thank you!

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, that was quite the unexpected entry. In themes (vampires' bonding with humans, and their prior family bond evolving, how to give birth to a newborn vampire in your setting, the ferals' differences), and content. Still quite the care to be noticed for Jonas' hideout as well. That was also quite the character development for Jonas, with his love for non vampires making him more human, while his rather gruesome art ink supply making him both ruthless and atypical towards vampires. Now, while the entry in itself was quite moving, it's unusual for Nora to seem to let go of her objectives, but I guess she might've pushed Jonas to turn Leah so they could move and join her sometimes later. Regardless, interesting entry in more than one way. ?

 

Thank you very much!

Yes, Nora might be ambitious, however, it's important to keep in mind that they know each other for centuries and are actual friends for centuries. He showed up several times already throughout the entire blog including the very first episode and it's fair to assume that their friendship is true and genuine. 

So her advice and support for a friend was more than just trying to take advantage of the situation.  

Damn, that's truly wonderful chapter, Alter! 

I'm not sure, but I think we never saw how the "turning" works in your stories, so I'm pretty curious, and at the same time it would be interesting to see how Leah will change.

You know, I love the transitions ^_^

10 hours ago, Crw said:

Damn, that's truly wonderful chapter, Alter! 

I'm not sure, but I think we never saw how the "turning" works in your stories, so I'm pretty curious, and at the same time it would be interesting to see how Leah will change.

You know, I love the transitions ^_^

Thank you!

We've never seen it that explicitly, but in the past Hannah, was turned, Nora and Nora's girlfriend Yvonne in one of the Imperial City flashbacks, 
However I've never shown it that explicitly.