Well Chapter 6 is done I guess  

I liked the victim side of the vampire things.

Flashbacks part was good to aside of one thing we talked before.

Overall was fun with all sections great work.

Looking forward for the next chapter.

Also expect lot of trouble from Kristoff in the future, he took that quite bad.

The piano scene was both beautiful and sensual. And my compliments on keeping up with the complexity of Nora's character. The moment we almost see a softer side to her we get the scene with Hannah. I have to admit - for a few seconds I really hated Nora but at the same time it means you did a great work as a writer and made the reader care about what was happening in the story. ? The little details like taking off earrings and putting them on a stand were also very well made. All in all, my greatest compliments to your work, as always. ?

P.S. I am curious about the carrying pose (where Kristoff carries Hannah) - which poser is it from? I've looked everywhere for this particular one, but seems to have missed it.

wow... although I do think Nora shoulda locked her bedroom door

29 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Well Chapter 6 is done I guess  

 

I liked the victim side of the vampire things.

 

Flashbacks part was good to aside of one thing we talked before.

 

Overall was fun with all sections great work.

 

Looking forward for the next chapter.

 

Also expect lot of trouble from Kristoff in the future, he took that quite bad.

 

 

Thanks for the comment and for your feedback!

Yeah Nora and Kristoff had a good start in the beginning of the chapter  , but things may change from now on  .

22 minutes ago, Devianna said:

The piano scene was both beautiful and sensual. And my compliments on keeping up with the complexity of Nora's character. The moment we almost see a softer side to her we get the scene with Hannah. I have to admit - for a few seconds I really hated Nora but at the same time it means you did a great work as a writer and made the reader care about what was happening in the story. ? The little details like taking off earrings and putting them on a stand were also very well made. All in all, my greatest compliments to your work, as always. ?

 

P.S. I am curious about the carrying pose (where Kristoff carries Hannah) - which poser is it from? I've looked everywhere for this particular one, but seems to have missed it.

Thank you Devianna! When judging Nora's personality it's important to keep her double standards in mind. She treats and judges humans and vampires completely different.  

The carry animation is Pair029 in the Pinup Poser /  Halo.

7 minutes ago, xGHoSTx said:

wow... although I do think Nora shoulda locked her bedroom door

I agree, that's a rookie mistake when giving parties at home .

25 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you Devianna! When judging Nora's personality it's important to keep her double standards in mind. She treats and judges humans and vampires completely different.  

 

The carry animation is Pair029 in the Pinup Poser /  Halo.

 

Dear me, that was literally the only poser which I didn't check thinking there was nothing new there. Thank you so much! That was exactly what I was looking for. ☺️

amazing work as always...loved the overall feel of this chapter.

Always a pleasure to read Alter. I loved it

Nora is so mean to others but soft to those she loves / cares for

Really like it

4 hours ago, Devianna said:

Dear me, that was literally the only poser which I didn't check thinking there was nothing new there. Thank you so much! That was exactly what I was looking for. ☺️

No problem.

Btw. in the dialogue is your glimpse at the relationship of Yvonne and Ethan you asked for. I liked the idea of them having a really normal / boring relationship as this what Yvonne never had when she was Human is looking for  . 

1 hour ago, goldust said:

amazing work as always...loved the overall feel of this chapter.

Thank you very much goldust  .

19 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Always a pleasure to read Alter. I loved it

 

Nora is so mean to others but soft to those she loves / cares for

 

Really like it

Thanks Tex!

I think once you understand the two judgments inside her, towards humans and vampires the character becomes a lot clearer and maybe even likable .

The chapter is good, the Nora Yvonne part saved it and answered the questions well an made sense. It was touching and those two were really touching. Good Yob. 

17 hours ago, Jayomms said:

The chapter is good, the Nora Yvonne part saved it and answered the questions well an made sense. It was touching and those two were really touching. Good Yob. 

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Wow, tickling a lil bit more than the ivories eh?

Super hot, and I think a more interesting reconciliation for their story.

I hope we're gonna get to see Thomas go after the ferals,

As awesome as your, pose/positioning/backgrounds are, I'd love to see some epic fighting!

Well done =)

Despite the fact that I was expecting something like this from the scene with Khristoff and Hannah, I was still amazed to the depths of my soul.
And I like workpiece to the next part, as much as I like Thomas ^_^ for some reasons he reminds me this one.

And Nora as brilliant as always ^_^
Great entry, once again ^_^

14 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Wow, tickling a lil bit more than the ivories eh?

Super hot, and I think a more interesting reconciliation for their story.

I hope we're gonna get to see Thomas go after the ferals,

As awesome as your, pose/positioning/backgrounds are, I'd love to see some epic fighting!

Well done ?

Thank you very much!

As you know this blog was never huge on action scenes. That doesn't mean there are no dramatic moments or so (like the finale of the flashback scene), but it's kind of hard to combine decent erotica with high staked action, especially if everything is supposed to be consensual. 

Chapter 7 has a couple of fights but no super crazy high staked ones, it's just not something I'm super interested in and there are other bloggers here that fill that gab quite nicely  . 

2 hours ago, Crw said:

Despite the fact that I was expecting something like this from the scene with Khristoff and Hannah, I was still amazed to the depths of my soul.
And I like workpiece to the next part, as much as I like Thomas ^_^ for some reasons he reminds me this one.

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And Nora as brilliant as always ^_^
Great entry, once again ^_^

Thanks!

I'll show a bit more of Thomas in the next chapter and we actually learn that he's something similar like a wandering mercenary, so the highwayman comparison is actually quite fitting.

Great entry, Alter! I think I've mentioned it in previous sections, but this was one of my favorite chapters for sure. Keep it up and I'm sure it will be replaced with the next chapter  

The character development was fantastic to be sure. I really liked the juxtaposition we saw between Nora's cruelty and compassion. In one moment, she and Yvonne were very gentle and romantic with one another. The next she is teaching Kristoff an important lesson (with repercussions  I hope to see play out next chapter  ).

Always a pleasure to read each update!

Love the story in the first spoiler. Too bad we have no place in the house for piano.

16 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great entry, Alter! I think I've mentioned it in previous sections, but this was one of my favorite chapters for sure. Keep it up and I'm sure it will be replaced with the next chapter  

 

The character development was fantastic to be sure. I really liked the juxtaposition we saw between Nora's cruelty and compassion. In one moment, she and Yvonne were very gentle and romantic with one another. The next she is teaching Kristoff an important lesson (with repercussions  I hope to see play out next chapter  ).

 

Always a pleasure to read each update!

Thank you very much Collygon! Starting with Chapter 5 I was focusing more and more on story, mostly in the form of connected "story chunks" such as the flashback scene or some upcoming stuff in chapter 7&8. For the future I'm trying to get rid of the no story impact entries as much as possible, which this chapter still quite had a lot of. 

12 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Love the story in the first spoiler. Too bad we have no place in the house for piano.

Thank you Eva  

@Alter Native > I don't want to be misunderstood. I didn't say that the second part was bad. On contrary. I said that I prefer the first part more.

3 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

@Alter Native > I don't want to be misunderstood. I didn't say that the second part was bad. On contrary. I said that I prefer the first part more.

I understood you perfectly well  and nothing in my comment was meant in any way offensive.

I know that you guys are not that much into the gory bloody vampire stuff of my blog and instead prefer the romantic sex scenes such as the shower scene two entries ago or this one.

Even though the second part was just dialogue, it was catering towards the latter. 

Well, a mesmerizing end for a chapter 6 that made even better than the others overall. You're getting the hang of balancing atmospheres scenes and story scenes I think. I most particularly liked the imperial city flashback, which was perfect from both points of view, and introduced a whole new foreign domain into the narration. There is also a poetic side to your erotic passages from that chapter, even before Yvonne's piano scene.

Malicia : « In the end, Nora's still being meany. She's only nice to vampires, Amelie, and panthers.  »

On 3/23/2019 at 10:19 PM, Alter Native said:

As you know this blog was never huge on action scenes. That doesn't mean there are no dramatic moments or so (like the finale of the flashback scene), but it's kind of hard to combine decent erotica with high staked action, especially if everything is supposed to be consensual.

Still I had excellent impressions of your remade chapter 1's first sections. Plus if you check ther1pper's Tales of Iron, his blog proves there are ways to combo sex with action packed scenes.

Malicia : « Consensual ? 'cause you think cutting wrists with scissors and biting trapped people on the legs and the neck, is very consensual, uh ?  »

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, a mesmerizing end for a chapter 6 that made even better than the others overall. You're getting the hang of balancing atmospheres scenes and story scenes I think. I most particularly liked the imperial city flashback, which was perfect from both points of view, and introduced a whole new foreign domain into the narration. There is also a poetic side to your erotic passages from that chapter, even before Yvonne's piano scene.

 

Malicia : « In the end, Nora's still being meany. She's only nice to vampires, Amelie, and panthers.  »

Still I had excellent impressions of your remade chapter 1's first sections. Plus if you check ther1pper's Tales of Iron, his blog proves there are ways to combo sex with action packed scenes.

 

Malicia : « Consensual ? 'cause you think cutting wrists with scissors and biting trapped people on the legs and the neck, is very consensual, uh ?  »

 

Thanks Tirloque!

The idea is to continue with these rather connected story chunks such as the Imperial City Flashback scene, for both, red and black haired Nora. Chunks in the sense of what I can do within a couple of months. I'm not ambitious enough to try something like Collygon with a five year master plan.

I'm not saying it's impossible to connect action and combat with erotica, but it's certainly a lot more difficult to do well. I personally don't like any of the "Bikini armor" grade armors. If she fights she wears something meant for fighting, if she has sex (in a kinky way) you'll also recognize it at her looks.

If I were to do a longer action/ story period I'd have her go on some kind of adventure (maybe a special job from the queen or so (she still owes her)). If you don't want to go for some vanilla style sex in a random skyrim cave things become very tricky.

I certainly couldn't do 70 % of the more adventures sex scenes I did in the past. No piano, no Mistress no nice lingerie etc. It's certainly not impossible, but a lot more difficult. There is some space for interesting content there that we'll explore very soon, but it's not infinite.

To do something where she regularly leaves her home for a (one section) adventure is technically possible but you need a good reason for her to leave the house and fight.

Some kind of war like Tales of Iron or so would be a good reason, but way to much work to do good. This random dungeon crawling is also not really an option. Which sane person would risk his or her live to loot some dungeons? It makes sense in a game, sure but imo it's not something she would ever do.

As said it's possible, but I couldn't do all the stuff I want to do. 

@Malicia: She's also really nice to Fina and some other humans

3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks Tirloque!

The idea is to continue with these rather connected story chunks such as the Imperial City Flashback scene, for both, red and black haired Nora. Chunks in the sense of what I can do within a couple of months. I'm not ambitious enough to try something like Collygon with a five year master plan.

I'm not saying it's impossible to connect action and combat with erotica, but it's certainly a lot more difficult to do well. I personally don't like any of the "Bikini armor" grade armors. If she fights she wears something meant for fighting, if she has sex (in a kinky way) you'll also recognize it at her looks.

 

If I were to do a longer action/ story period I'd have her go on some kind of adventure (maybe a special job from the queen or so (she still owes her)). If you don't want to go for some vanilla style sex in a random skyrim cave things become very tricky.

I certainly couldn't do 70 % of the more adventures sex scenes I did in the past. No piano, no Mistress no nice lingerie etc. It's certainly not impossible, but a lot more difficult. There is some space for interesting content there that we'll explore very soon, but it's not infinite.

 

To do something where she regularly leaves her home for a (one section) adventure is technically possible but you need a good reason for her to leave the house and fight.

Some kind of war like Tales of Iron or so would be a good reason, but way to much work to do good. This random dungeon crawling is also not really an option. Which sane person would risk his or her live to loot some dungeons? It makes sense in a game, sure but imo it's not something she would ever do.

 

As said it's possible, but I couldn't do all the stuff I want to do.

Well it's a matter of style and choice. But indeed, considering we've got limited freetime, it's better to favor what you really want to do over what you're not really in. I mean, if you were to make an unpaid story you didn't like, I don't see how it could be worth the effort. Yet, "action" isn't necessarily going full armor clad in an expedition, there can be danger and fights at the most unexpected places of one's daily life.

I agree about the bikini-armor part, unless in certain barbarian tribes I don't see how that could be considered as armor either.

3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

@Malicia: She's also really nice to Fina and some other humans

Malicia : « Just you wait till she burns their letters, uh.  »

This chapter was amazing as always and I really enjoyed the flashback scene.