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Chapter 4 Section 4 - Seduction


Alter Native

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Sometimes my ideas work out, sometimes they don't... this time they didn't. This section is kind of cheesy, you'll see it when you get there^^.

 

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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

 

 

 

Short Summary of the previous entries:

 


At the beginning of this chapter Nora arrived in High Rock in the castle of vampire Queen Isabella. She and her most important vessels hold court, with Nora being invited as a guest. 
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It doesn't take long until Nora loses interested in the vampire assembly and starts daydreaming about her past with Ahtar one of the counts of her Queen.
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Chapter 4 Section 4 - Seduction

 


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The next entry will story-wise be the only one in this chapter that's worth being called a story at least stuff is happening and not just sex.

 

 

Edited by Alter Native

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Even if this entry was mainly sex, there's a tenderness and a vulnerability shown here that I think is worth noting. I wouldn't say it's "just sex". You should give yourself more credit! :smile:

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The chapter selection box is a really pretty piece of work, good job putting it together! Was it manual HTML/CSS work to make it?

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7 hours ago, Resdayn said:

It seems Nora is not loyal type :D

 

Nice chapter :grin:!

 

She is, but she's also really naughty ;).

 

6 hours ago, ecto1 said:

Even if this entry was mainly sex, there's a tenderness and a vulnerability shown here that I think is worth noting. I wouldn't say it's "just sex". You should give yourself more credit! :smile:

 

Thank you. I just think the sex in that stupid storage room was somewhat unfitting... I mean all other higher vampires are in the assembly so there is no reason to hide that much. There are at least a million other rooms in that castle that would have been more comfortable...

 

 

3 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

The chapter selection box is a really pretty piece of work, good job putting it together! Was it manual HTML/CSS work to make it?

Thank you. Just a lot of pictures cut and placed so they form the images and have individual links.

 

57 minutes ago, bodabira 01 said:

Well I still think it's a nice chapter! :grin:

Thank you very much :).

38 minutes ago, xGHoSTx said:

i don't think im ever gonna get over how gorgeous nora is! great work Alter Native!

Thanks much appreciate it.

 

 

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3 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you. I just think the sex in that stupid storage room was somewhat unfitting... I mean all other higher vampires are in the assembly so there is no reason to hide that much. There are at least a million other rooms in that castle that would have been more comfortable...

 

Its more kinky on the storage room ;)

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I didn't think it was cheesy at all! Sure, it didn't show much; but often times there is more to learn that way. I think this is an excellent set up for the next part which you said will be more story focused. It added a lot of intrigue and foreshadowing to really hype it up. Well done!

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15 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Its more kinky on the storage room ;)

But it also fits the characters less.

 

5 hours ago, Collygon said:

I didn't think it was cheesy at all! Sure, it didn't show much; but often times there is more to learn that way. I think this is an excellent set up for the next part which you said will be more story focused. It added a lot of intrigue and foreshadowing to really hype it up. Well done!

With cheesy I ment the having sex in the storage room part. If I had to do it again, they would go to a decent bedroom ;).

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Well, it wasn't the most eventful entry you've done ; but still the quality of the lightning and colors is simply amazing. Still I'm not fan of forcing the reader to keep guessing (insertion of flashback pictures is delicate, even more in the middle of textless images), and contrast is sometimes a bit too high on skins ; but it's truly a pleasure to the eye to read your blog.

 

I most particularly like the esthetics on two images, where they reach almost poetic levels :

 

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It isn't called Of Blood and Pleasure for nothing it seems. =)

On 30/11/2017 at 6:38 PM, Alter Native said:

Thank you. Just a lot of pictures cut and placed so they form the images and have individual links.

Well it blew me up as well. Malicia wants one like that now, as well as a rendez-vous with the sexy redguard. =D

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22 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Nice one...

Thanks.

 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, it wasn't the most eventful entry you've done ; but still the quality of the lightning and colors is simply amazing. Still I'm not fan of forcing the reader to keep guessing (insertion of flashback pictures is delicate, even more in the middle of textless images), and contrast is sometimes a bit too high on skins ; but it's truly a pleasure to the eye to read your blog.

 

I most particularly like the esthetics on two images, where they reach almost poetic levels :

 

It isn't called Of Blood and Pleasure for nothing it seems. =)

Well it blew me up as well. Malicia wants one like that now, as well as a rendez-vous with the sexy redguard. =D

 

I'm not sure what you mean with flashback. None of the images is supposed to be a flashback image. Even I would mark them somewhat recognizable ;), besides Nora would have black hair in the flashback scenes. 

 

Thanks, I can't take credit for the first image, thats Raven Castle, but thanks :).

 

I can make contact for Malicia with the redguard, but I don't come up for bloodloss or deaths ;).

 

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14 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

I'm not sure what you mean with flashback. None of the images is supposed to be a flashback image. Even I would mark them somewhat recognizable ;), besides Nora would have black hair in the flashback scenes.

Okay then I confused a simple carrying scene from one place to another with a flashback, my bad. Smiley_angel_LL.gif

 

14 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, I can't take credit for the first image, thats Raven Castle, but thanks :).

 

I can make contact for Malicia with the redguard, but I don't come up for bloodloss or deaths ;).

She'll wait till she can order some EPO first then, stay tuned. :p

 

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