Woah! That was brutal! There aren't many worse ways to die than that. It is also great to see more of the plot progress. HYPE for the end of chapter three!

Reading your story is quite like looking at still from a movie; Very smooth flow.

Interesting how much detail goes into something as simple as grooming (for Lady Karlov). I wouldn't have thought the wings needed washing as well. What I mean to say is, it's quite the attention to detail.

Woah! That was brutal! There aren't many worse ways to die than that. It is also great to see more of the plot progress. HYPE for the end of chapter three!

Thanks Collygon. She does not mean to kill him, just teach him a lesson about respecting her age and how to not treat a Lady . 

Reading your story is quite like looking at still from a movie; Very smooth flow.

 

Interesting how much detail goes into something as simple as grooming (for Lady Karlov). I wouldn't have thought the wings needed washing as well. What I mean to say is, it's quite the attention to detail.

Thank you! I'm actually trying to get that movie style as close as possible rather than a comic. That's why you never see any written thoughts etc. 

Damn, Brutal! Great work Alter Native!

Damn.. Nora is so badass, that death was so... shocking haha. She shows no mercy at all haha

Cant wait for the next chap

Really enjoyed this; will have to go back and read the rest!

Damn, Brutal! Great work Alter Native!

Thanks!

Damn.. Nora is so badass, that death was so... shocking haha. She shows no mercy at all haha

 

Cant wait for the next chap

She did not kill him, he the other guy was a vampire too and they don't die like this.

Really enjoyed this; will have to go back and read the rest!

Thank you! I'd recommend starting with chapter 2 and reading the summary of chapter 1.

You don't mess with her. 

Wow Brutal .

Now that was a great chapter! And so brutal... I like it! XD

Leandra: Oh I think it's better if you cut someone's head of, but maybe it's just me who doesn't like others suffering.

I'm glad she killed him; wanting or not. She must demonstrate her power and not let anyone to fuck with her. I also hope she will  fall in love with her sex toy.

You don't mess with her. 

Indeed.

Wow Brutal .

Only the second half

Now that was a great chapter! And so brutal... I like it! XD

 

Leandra: Oh I think it's better if you cut someone's head of, but maybe it's just me who doesn't like others suffering.

Thanks. 

The suffering was Nora's point, he's not going to die.

I'm glad she killed him; wanting or not. She must demonstrate her power and not let anyone to fuck with her. I also hope she will  fall in love with her sex toy.

I guess we have to wait and see what happens between Nora and Amelie.

And I was thinking she was far too compliant to be trusted.

Nice chapter. I like the drama you added inbetween characters' relationships.

Excellent! She's not messing around

Great work

And I was thinking she was far too compliant to be trusted.

 

Nice chapter. I like the drama you added inbetween characters' relationships.

You can never trust her .

 

Excellent! She's not messing around

Great work

 

Thank you

Am 16.08.2017 um 19:35 Uhr sagte Alter Native:

 

Danke Collygon. Sie will ihn nicht töten, sondern ihm nur eine Lektion erteilen, wie man ihr Alter respektiert und wie man eine Dame nicht behandelt . 

 

 

 

Vielen Dank! Ich versuche tatsächlich, diesem Filmstil so nahe wie möglich zu kommen, anstatt einem Comic. Deswegen sieht man nie geschriebene Gedanken etc.

und genau dieser Stil gefällt mir ausserordentlich gut

danke dafür