Great one as always using a animation for puling the blade from Hannah's throat is an interesting idea.

Also poor Amelie. ?

 Funny you should mention Evermore.  Maylin just got back from Evermore herself and saved some children from some Pedophilic King, battled Witchmen and all the sorts of baddies.  

Some humor from Alter? Wow, that's sonerhing) Guess Nora was really to excited to see Thomas, if she forget about her:)

And some amazing shots or Molag chapel ^_^ 

And I cant speak for everyone, but I do really care about Hannah-Nora-Kristoff relationships. I'm really interested in how ot goes and curious about how it ends. ^_^

Amazing eor8as usual, Alter Native ^_^

1 hour ago, L0rd_Inquisitor said:

Great one as always using a animation for puling the blade from Hannah's throat is an interesting idea.

 

Also poor Amelie. ?

Thanks the gif compression ruins the images a bit, but it kind of works for small animations like this. 

I first used it in Chapter 8 Section 9 which I wrote before this one and it works much better there. 

As I don't have a narrator I need to show animations with multiple images and that takes up a lot of space. That's why I used the .gif.

15 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

 Funny you should mention Evermore.  Maylin just got back from Evermore herself and saved some children from some Pedophilic King, battled Witchmen and all the sorts of baddies.  

I mentioned Evermore ?? It's been a while since I wrote that entry.

52 minutes ago, Crw said:

Some humor from Alter? Wow, that's sonerhing) Guess Nora was really to excited to see Thomas, if she forget about her:)

And some amazing shots or Molag chapel ^_^ 

And I cant speak for everyone, but I do really care about Hannah-Nora-Kristoff relationships. I'm really interested in how ot goes and curious about how it ends. ^_^

Amazing eor8as usual, Alter Native ^_^

Thank Crw, much appreciated. I'm not against humor^^ there was that one time where... nevermind .

Kristoff is a bit of a throw away character in this story and I'd need to do more with him and either Hannah or Nora in order to give him more character and give him something like a story, but as said I'm not super interested in that. 

yeah i would love to see more of Hannah i think even though she's a minor character she's still kinda interesting!

7 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks the gif compression ruins the images a bit, but it kind of works for small animations like this. 

I first used it in Chapter 8 Section 9 which I wrote before this one and it works much better there. 

As I don't have a narrator I need to show animations with multiple images and that takes up a lot of space. That's why I used the .gif.

 

 

I mentioned Evermore ?? It's been a while since I wrote that entry.

 

 

 

So do you know or remember what New Lands mod I speak of east of High Rock? 

7 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

yeah i would love to see more of Hannah i think even though she's a minor character she's still kinda interesting!

We'll definitely see more of Hannah, she was supposed to stay twice in the last entries but she made it out both times so there is definitely something to love about her.  

6 hours ago, Jayomms said:

So do you know or remember what New Lands mod I speak of east of High Rock? 

East of High Rock?? That's Skyrim? West of High Rock is the sea, I'm not sure what you mean exactly.

There was a mod that tried to add parts of High Rock, but generally speaking those mods are a bit too unfinished for my taste. I think you're talking about Beyond Reach, which I think I used at some point in Chapter 7 Section 5 for the flashback scene in Skingrad. The mod is pretty good, but as said, a bit unfinished for my taste. 

Great narration once again, developing the themes of acceptance and revenge from the newborn vampires. Visually excellent as always, not only from the screenshots which are artworks by themselves (lighting, composition, viewpoints for the backgrounds and some with Nora), but also from the increased use of a close to comic layout. The gif was an interesting addition as well, though the blood effect on the blade was somewhat underwhelming compared to the excellent one on the skins and clothes. There were some typos here and there, and the transition between Nora telling Kristoff they have to discuss and the close-up of the vaginal plug left me wondering for a few seconds ^^). Like the "servants' hear" aspect from Nora's contact towards her lowest employees at the start though, it's an excellent way to a ruler to be aware of what's going on below. Overall,  interesting chapter story-wise, graphically excellent and of course greatly erotic. We even get a touch of humor... Excellent work !

Malicia : « Hannah says she doesn't want to become meany, but trying to stab at people isn't a good way to do it, no. She should very take example on prettier and more intelligent people instead, yes. 

                Though I very understand how it feels to have one gal get all the boys while you're just sitting there, uh.  »

6 hours ago, Alter Native said:

We'll definitely see more of Hannah, she was supposed to stay twice in the last entries but she made it out both times so there is definitely something to love about her.  

East of High Rock?? That's Skyrim? West of High Rock is the sea, I'm not sure what you mean exactly.

There was a mod that tried to add parts of High Rock, but generally speaking those mods are a bit too unfinished for my taste. I think you're talking about Beyond Reach, which I think I used at some point in Chapter 7 Section 5 for the flashback scene in Skingrad. The mod is pretty good, but as said, a bit unfinished for my taste. 

 

 

East of High Rock is what the author said. But Yeah that's the mod, it got updated in Oct. Not too bad but still unfinished so I uninstalled it.  

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Great narration once again, developing the themes of acceptance and revenge from the newborn vampires. Visually excellent as always, not only from the screenshots which are artworks by themselves (lighting, composition, viewpoints for the backgrounds and some with Nora), but also from the increased use of a close to comic layout.

Thank you very much!

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The gif was an interesting addition as well, though the blood effect on the blade was somewhat underwhelming compared to the excellent one on the skins and clothes.

There was no blood on the blade. I probably shouldn't have done it that way, but it was never meant to be blood. 

Basically Nora uses some blood magic the parry/block Hannah's stabbing. So some of that blood magic gave the dagger the glow something like a temporary enchantment or the like.

The true reason however was that I had a dark dagger on a dark background and the movement of the dagger was somewhat important in that situation, so the idea was to highlight it with that shader (my modified Jaxon's shader).

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

There were some typos here and there, and the transition between Nora telling Kristoff they have to discuss and the close-up of the vaginal plug left me wondering for a few seconds ^^) .

You're probably right on this one, the transition was neither smooth nor very clear. As said, parts of this entry were stitched together from half done fragments. 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Like the "servants' hear" aspect from Nora's contact towards her lowest employees at the start though, it's an excellent way to a ruler to be aware of what's going on below. Overall,  interesting chapter story-wise, graphically excellent and of course greatly erotic. We even get a touch of humor... Excellent work !

Thank you very much Tirloque! Much appreciated. 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Hannah says she doesn't want to become meany, but trying to stab at people isn't a good way to do it, no. She should very take example on prettier and more intelligent people instead, yes. 

Careful what you wish form we don't want her to get the wrong rolemodels. 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Though I very understand how it feels to have one gal get all the boys while you're just sitting there, uh.  »

Lack of interest is probably not her problem  she just had a good relationship and her vampire daddy probably had good reasons why he turned her...

3 hours ago, Jayomms said:

East of High Rock is what the author said. But Yeah that's the mod, it got updated in Oct. Not too bad but still unfinished so I uninstalled it.  

I see, just googled it and I think it's about beyond reach, which takes place in High rock, but in the east of High Rock. 

Never played that mod or anything, but that one city I used in chapter 7 was well done so yeah, it's probably a good mod.

Great entry! The first spoiler was incredibly dramatic. I loved all of the emotion Hannah was experiencing. You did a great job showing how conflicted she is. I have no idea what she will decide to do and I love that!

The second spoiler though I feel really shifted the tone. It felt completely unrelated to the first part. The light-hearted, humorous segment, which I would normally love reading, felt lacking after following such a captivating introduction.

Either way, both parts were excellent in their own right!

15 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great entry! The first spoiler was incredibly dramatic. I loved all of the emotion Hannah was experiencing. You did a great job showing how conflicted she is. I have no idea what she will decide to do and I love that!

 

The second spoiler though I feel really shifted the tone. It felt completely unrelated to the first part. The light-hearted, humorous segment, which I would normally love reading, felt lacking after following such a captivating introduction.

 

Either way, both parts were excellent in their own right!

Thank you very much Collygon! 

The first half was done much more recently with a clear idea in mind and part of a larger storyline, so I'm glad you preferred that part.

I agree, the second part was too stiched together and the transition could have been handled better, especially with the skipped Nora Kristoff dialogue.

Not sure I'd call it lighthearted, they are still killing a prisoner, but definitely not as emotionally heavy has the first half  .

Thanks for your response Collygon. 

Oh my....you know, sometimes your Nora seems almost human.  She has her flaws, her vices, her painful experiences and she acknowledges all of them.  And by doing so she manages to reach a sort of inner peace with herself.  There was something so tragically beautiful in the first part of this story, not just because of Hannah trying to come to terms with what happened to her but also because of Nora's narration and her offer for a 'way out'.  It seems that suicide is something even the Baroness have considered at some point in her unlife (perhaps when she was much younger, plus there was the time after battle with Erik where she just no longer cared if she lived or not).

As for the second part - is it bad that I've been laughing at it for a good few minutes? ? I like Amelie and I do feel a little bit bad for her, but that last screenshot was absolutely perfect!  I know you generally do not write humor but you definitely have a talent for it.  Some of the scenarios that you have are just the right amount of morbid, decadent and hilarious (Nora and the panther comes to mind ?).

Thomas and Nora are incredibly hot, as always. The scenes are sensual and beautiful and deadly, as always.  Yet another person (err..orc) died to Nora while having a hardon - also as always. ?  Personally I really enjoyed the contrast of the two parts, the first one being dramatic and the second one bringing us back to the image of Nora that we've gotten used to.

Thank you for the wonderful work, Alter! Looking forward to more! ?

8 hours ago, Devianna said:

Oh my....you know, sometimes your Nora seems almost human.  She has her flaws, her vices, her painful experiences and she acknowledges all of them.  And by doing so she manages to reach a sort of inner peace with herself.  There was something so tragically beautiful in the first part of this story, not just because of Hannah trying to come to terms with what happened to her but also because of Nora's narration and her offer for a 'way out'.  It seems that suicide is something even the Baroness have considered at some point in her unlife (perhaps when she was much younger, plus there was the time after battle with Erik where she just no longer cared if she lived or not).

Thank you very much Devianna, it's always a pleasure to read your long and positive comments.

The point of Nora was never to make her a comical evil character or just a sexy villainess. Instead I just wanted to create a believable vampire (+ all the deadly, devious and erotic stuff associated with that). Being a vampire that kills humans for blood and pleasure makes her an objectively bad person. However a person that lives 400 years with that attitude would never think of herself as bad. Within her value frame she's a normal, reasonable person and killing humans just doesn't count as bad. (Similar to today where we typically don't judge people for eating meat)

So in her value system killing Hannah was fine, that doesn't count/contribute, however now that Hannah is a young vampire she is partially responsible for her well being and she cares about her.

I wanted to show a sharp contrast between Hannah mortal and Hannah vampire. 

You're right about the suicide, it was mentioned in Chapter 7 Section 5 where we had the flashback of Nora as a young Neonate, a bit older then Hannah. She basically roamed around Tamriel and at one point tried to kill herself as she hated her life, she was then found by the guy we saw in the flashback and she talks about in this entry.

In a way she wants Hannah to not suffer the same fate as she did with a couple of very hard early years, until she met Eric. But I was mostly trying to convince the reader, Hannah and Nora that it's best for Hannah to stay and Nora's place.

Technically Hannah could just leave, there is nothing keeping her at Nora's place. 

Before and after Eric she was very conscious about what she was doing. She knew she was taking a huge risk, but that's something she is not afraid of. She never lost her will to live during that time.

8 hours ago, Devianna said:

As for the second part - is it bad that I've been laughing at it for a good few minutes? ? I like Amelie and I do feel a little bit bad for her, but that last screenshot was absolutely perfect!  I know you generally do not write humor but you definitely have a talent for it.  Some of the scenarios that you have are just the right amount of morbid, decadent and hilarious (Nora and the panther comes to mind ?).

 

Thomas and Nora are incredibly hot, as always. The scenes are sensual and beautiful and deadly, as always.  Yet another person (err..orc) died to Nora while having a hardon - also as always. ?  Personally I really enjoyed the contrast of the two parts, the first one being dramatic and the second one bringing us back to the image of Nora that we've gotten used to.

Thank you very much! 

Glad you liked it  .

Love the first two shots of Nora walking in the church. What ever combo lighting and cell ambient lighting you have set gave her than smooth, porcelain white skin!

On 2/4/2020 at 2:48 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Love the first two shots of Nora walking in the church. What ever combo lighting and cell ambient lighting you have set gave her than smooth, porcelain white skin!

Thanks!

It's mostly just the lightning and my ENB.

kann ja mal passieren...

..upps - sie wird schon darüber hinweg kommen

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