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Chapter 9 Section 11 - Burning Desire


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Short Summary of the previous entries

 

 

 

Like the previous entry is one is not too depended on previous knowledge. 
As a quick reminder, it's been a year since we last saw Hannah, she's a young vampire turned by Nora's Thrallmaster and now living in the Manor.

 

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My blog overview page provides summaries of previous chapters, backgrounds and characters summaries.

 

 

Chapter 9 Section 11 - Burning Desire

 


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Thanks fore reading!

Stay tuned, a new version of Karlov Manor is coming towards the end of the week!

 

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Jay-Omms

Posted

:smiley::heart:;):thumbsup:

Spoiler

Jay-omm: Making some changes to the manson Thomas?

Thomas: Well Nora does a few surprises.

Jay-omm: Like your new foot to face fetish?

Thomas: FUCK OFF!!!

Jay-omm: Ha ha haa! Great! See when the new renovations are done. Ha ha...111544866_MySkrimStories160.jpg.c6ab97f0fa28ab03a7f5b2ec96de36fa.jpg

Thomas: Asshole...

 

AltNameByeee

Posted

Setting up for the next chapter, I presume? I like the return to the stormcloaks and the village. That's actually something I felt has not been explored much yet. I'm sure there are some interesting implications in a village knowingly being watched over by a vampire. Great set up with an already intriguing ensemble of new characters.

Crw0

Posted

Someone wants to die on the throne, someone - on a heap of gold, and Nora with a dick inside her. :D The very first scene have such a strong romantic vibes, that I almost hear Nora's voice. I'm curious how she's sound? Something between Monica Bellucci and Ruby Rose?
Oh, are we really gonna see Hannah in action? I mean the bloody acton? ^_^
Great work sa usual Alter Native ^_^

Kin Tsuchi

Posted

Who needs sleep anyway =D 

Well now I'm looking forward to see how Hannah will do the job  ???

Alter Native

Posted

On 1/21/2021 at 5:33 AM, Jayomms said:

:smiley::heart:;):thumbsup:

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Jay-omm: Making some changes to the manson Thomas?

Thomas: Well Nora does a few surprises.

Jay-omm: Like your new foot to face fetish?

Thomas: FUCK OFF!!!

Jay-omm: Ha ha haa! Great! See when the new renovations are done. Ha ha...111544866_MySkrimStories160.jpg.c6ab97f0fa28ab03a7f5b2ec96de36fa.jpg

Thomas: Asshole...

 

 

Haha, at least the renovations are done now. ;)

 

On 1/21/2021 at 10:11 PM, Collygon said:

Setting up for the next chapter, I presume? I like the return to the stormcloaks and the village. That's actually something I felt has not been explored much yet. I'm sure there are some interesting implications in a village knowingly being watched over by a vampire. Great set up with an already intriguing ensemble of new characters.

Setting up for something yes, but the next chapter and the one after will be about something very different :grimace:, but yes, I'll get back to this.

There's a reason there is a High Rock section built in Karlov Manor ;) .

 

 

On 1/22/2021 at 10:50 AM, Crw said:

Someone wants to die on the throne, someone - on a heap of gold, and Nora with a dick inside her. :D The very first scene have such a strong romantic vibes, that I almost hear Nora's voice. I'm curious how she's sound? Something between Monica Bellucci and Ruby Rose?

Sorry, don't know either of them. But in my had she sounds calm and seductive for the most part.

 

On 1/22/2021 at 10:50 AM, Crw said:

Oh, are we really gonna see Hannah in action? I mean the bloody acton? ^_^
Great work sa usual Alter Native ^_^

And yes, there'll be bloody Hannah action in the next entry ;).

 

8 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Who needs sleep anyway =D 

Well now I'm looking forward to see how Hannah will do the job  ???

Haha, thank you.

I'm also looking forward to that.

 

 

Tirloque

Posted

Impressive how you manage to renew this, even Nora's daily life games and whereabouts are entertaining. The sun/curtain ones where interesting as an interaction, and visually as well (with the beautiful ENB sunrays without a doubt being the hidden Alter motivator for this ^^). And I didn't expect the marauder's intrusion to end that way, which is good. Shouldn't Nora have some men guarding her home btw ? Entering the manor seemed rather easy. And can't wait to see Hanna's first steps in your larger vampire world. Great entry ! :D?

 

Malicia : « That thing she did, getting close to a guy like if you wanted to honey but you just want them to do something ? That's very hard to do, yes.

 

                She should write a book about it. I'd very buy it. :classic_lightbulb: »

Alter Native

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On 1/25/2021 at 11:57 AM, Tirloque said:

Impressive how you manage to renew this, even Nora's daily life games and whereabouts are entertaining. The sun/curtain ones where interesting as an interaction, and visually as well (with the beautiful ENB sunrays without a doubt being the hidden Alter motivator for this ^^).

Thank you very much! And yes indeed, having a nice sunny scene like this was part of the motivation. In fact that whole room was built for this and the previous section and I think it's the only time it's been used in my story so far.

 

 

On 1/25/2021 at 11:57 AM, Tirloque said:

And I didn't expect the marauder's intrusion to end that way, which is good. Shouldn't Nora have some men guarding her home btw ? Entering the manor seemed rather easy.

 

You kind of have a point I agree... The idea always was that she has those magical gargoyle statues guarding the home, not actual soldiers or something like this. Problem is how can the gargoyles detect actual intruders vs humans coming there and being allowed there? 

 

So I agree, to some degree, but maybe this guy got just lucky or he used some side window in a very hard to reach place to begin with anticipating some sort of guarding system....

 

On 1/25/2021 at 11:57 AM, Tirloque said:

And can't wait to see Hanna's first steps in your larger vampire world. Great entry ! :D?

Yeah me too, the next entry will feature Hannah, with a long absence after that which I regret a bit.

 

On 1/25/2021 at 11:57 AM, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « That thing she did, getting close to a guy like if you wanted to honey but you just want them to do something ? That's very hard to do, yes.

                She should write a book about it. I'd very buy it. :classic_lightbulb: »

 

I'm doing my best documenting all of her doings, that's probably as much as you'll get in that direction. Doubt she'll ever write a book about it.

 

 

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