Great job once again, Alter! Amazingly hot and expanded sex scene, with some twists! And the heart-out trick is reatly performed! 
Tho I didn't expect a M&M scene,but I guess it showed cultural features of vampires of Hammerfel  

I had a feeling as soon as I saw you were playing Dark Souls 3 I was like Oh... You must of put out a new chapter! This one had some Gay touch to it.  Can't remember if this was your first time or not. ? Great Quality Story as always! 

Some proper gay content, I see! We don't get enough of that here. Solid entry, overall. Some very brutal scenes in this one, though I guess they were tame by your standards ;) Could I suggest maybe adding a refresher on who is talking at the beginning of entries? It can sometimes be difficult to figure out whose color is whose, at least for me. It's not a huge deal, as it can be figured out, but maybe an index of some kind would help? Either way, great work!

@ All:

There's Nora ripping out a heart out through a girls throat and another guy getting impaled and burned but everybody is focusing on the MM gay content  

Let's clearify a thing or two about this blog and my vampire world... 

I show quite a bit of lesbian content on this blog, about 1 entry each chapter like with Llaila this chapter, Diana in the previous one, Amelie, Lenora, Queen Isabella, Yvonne etc.

Now of course one could just say: This is kind of an erotic story blog in magical Christmas land, where all the guys are straight and all the girls are Bi and are constantly starved for sex. Technically that works, it's an erotic fantasy story in the end and you can do whatever you want.

However I want a more or less realistic ratio of sexual preferences with most of my characters being straight (technically we only know of Valentina as being Lesbian for sure, the rest is presumably straight ), including Nora.

But since we see a world of ancient, bored and decadent vampires with blood affecting their sex drive (how convenient for an erotic story) having occasional same sex intercourse is pretty normal in my world and in some cases "expected"/ the social norm.

We mostly see Nora having sex with guys and seeking relationships with guys (Yvonne in chapter 6 was the only same sex relationship we know of (Amelie doesn't count, cause Nora is not really interested in her romantically)), but as said, occasionally there's some Lesbian action as well.

Now if the cause for that is boredom, decadence and an increased sex drive due to blood consumption the effect should affect everyone, male and female the same way. Meaning in there's just as much lesbian sex as there is MM sex in my world. 

However since we are seeing the story through Nora's eyes we mostly only see the FF and the MF part of that world (How convenient for an erotic story blog ). Nonetheless I occasionally want to acknowledge, that the other half is present as well in my world. But since we are stuck with Nora this is only possible if someone tells Nora about it (like Thomas could tell about a friend he has for example) or if Nora witnesses it directly, which is what happend here. 

Before that we already saw MM sex in chapter 3 Section 6 where Nora entered Vasil's bedroom without permission as well as in Chapter 2 Section 10 during the party (I wasn't courageous enough to show more of it back then, but it's still visible on the live version with Vasil and his brother.)

So yeah.. that's why it's there... initially I wanted to do much more of it in this entry, but I lost interest during shooting as I'm personally not interested in that kind of content, but I'm glad some people enjoyed it  

7 hours ago, Crw said:

Great job once again, Alter! Amazingly hot and expanded sex scene, with some twists! And the heart-out trick is reatly performed! 
Tho I didn't expect a M&M scene,but I guess it showed cultural features of vampires of Hammerfel  

Thanks!

See the message above if you haven't already. Glad you enjoyed the story  .-

2 hours ago, Jayomms said:

I had a feeling as soon as I saw you were playing Dark Souls 3 I was like Oh... You must of put out a new chapter! This one had some Gay touch to it.  Can't remember if this was your first time or not. ? Great Quality Story as always! 

Thanks! Same as for Crw. 

I've been playing the Cinders mod for DS3, pretty good so far with different/new items and a lot of new enemy placements which mixes things up quite a bit. Highly recommend that mod.

55 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Some proper gay content, I see! We don't get enough of that here. Solid entry, overall. Some very brutal scenes in this one, though I guess they were tame by your standards Could I suggest maybe adding a refresher on who is talking at the beginning of entries? It can sometimes be difficult to figure out whose color is whose, at least for me. It's not a huge deal, as it can be figured out, but maybe an index of some kind would help? Either way, great work!

No I don't think the violence was tame for my standards. I think it's pretty brutal even for this blog... I'm well aware of the degree of violence this blog has occasionally  

Thanks for your suggestion with the name tags/ legend. Technically the blog overview page serves as a legend, but the overview page is not helpful on an entry like this. If there are too many characters I tend to write the names at least once, but I see that this one was a bit confusing. 

Also see the upper part of this comment for some more details on the gay content. 

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks! Same as for Crw. 

I've been playing the Cinders mod for DS3, pretty good so far with different/new items and a lot of new enemy placements which mixes things up quite a bit. Highly recommend that mod.

I'm not surprised by the violence, it's expected. The MM got my attention only because it's not the norm in your blog. It doesn't bother me and if my cousin was here with me and sees that he would love to see more and ask why don't you do more.  And as for the Cinders mod I have it already got it last month on the 22nd but I have not played it yet. 

brilliant work as always alter! i must admit Nora's body count is really high both by her hand and by "just being there"

7 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

brilliant work as always alter! i must admit Nora's body count is really high both by her hand and by "just being there"

Thank you very much!

She was probably just missing that after her time in Morrowind. 

Wow, that chapter ! Massive content at multiple points of view : first the Al-Mahan background shots which are artworks by themselves, then the unexpected violence of the decadent vampires, then the multi-pronged sex sequence all along that blood bath. Extremely entertaining read overall, with pure erotism alternating with the violent twists you inserted, the latter pacing the first quite well. All of that while maintaining very high technical standards (even with the blood and cum effects, which I suspect were both ingame). Scenario-wise we get another occasion of seeing how good Nora is at manipulating people, even when they're vampires ; and another example of the sex-crazing effects it has on males. The heart gouging sequence as well as the MM sex were unexpected btw, which is good ; but while the second is after all logical, the first one isn't too realistic (the neck would come with the heart in fact). But the effect was excellent. Amazing work, Alter !

Malicia : « ... She just took her heart in her mouth !!

                Nora's completely crazy ! You don't do that to good people, no ! All because she wanted to get the other guy all for herself !

                She needs to be put in a box  ->

                Then locked into a stone floor like this ->

               Then we'll wait for a very long time, and she'll get just as nice as Serana, yes.   »

On 5/7/2020 at 1:55 AM, Alter Native said:

There's Nora ripping out a heart out through a girls throat and another guy getting impaled and burned but everybody is focusing on the MM gay content  

Classic-gay content ain't so popular, even on LL -_- dunno why. 
I guess that the whole thing here is that you managed to surprise everyone with that   And thats cool! Imo.
 

On 5/7/2020 at 1:55 AM, Alter Native said:

This is kind of an erotic story blog in magical Christmas land, where all the guys are straight and all the girls are Bi and are constantly starved for sex

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Wow, that chapter ! Massive content at multiple points of view : first the Al-Mahan background shots which are artworks by themselves, then the unexpected violence of the decadent vampires, then the multi-pronged sex sequence all along that blood bath.

Thank you very much! It was lacking any sort of real story and I was expecting to be called out on that, but maybe you have given up on that a long time ago ?.

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Extremely entertaining read overall, with pure erotism alternating with the violent twists you inserted, the latter pacing the first quite well. All of that while maintaining very high technical standards (even with the blood and cum effects, which I suspect were both ingame). Scenario-wise we get another occasion of seeing how good Nora is at manipulating people, even when they're vampires ; and another example of the sex-crazing effects it has on males.

Thanks, I think blood is affected both genders equally. Part of the motivation for this entry was the fact that this is basically the first time in many decades where she's on her own again without Ahtar outside the monastery. 

She certainly didn't have these blood orgies while being there and afterwards she was hiding from any sorts of consequences of the murder she did in Morrowind. So I think it was appropriate to go nuts, even for her/my standards. 

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The heart gouging sequence as well as the MM sex were unexpected btw, which is good ; but while the second is after all logical, the first one isn't too realistic (the neck would come with the heart in fact). But the effect was excellent. Amazing work, Alter !

You're probably right about that, but it was a kill move in another video game and it seemed kind of fitting for vampires. But good point!

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « ... She just took her heart in her mouth !!

 

                Nora's completely crazy ! You don't do that to good people, no ! All because she wanted to get the other guy all for herself !

 

                She needs to be put in a box  ->

 

                Then locked into a stone floor like this ->

 

               Then we'll wait for a very long time, and she'll get just as nice as Serana, yes.   »

Yes, I think that's a good plan, but we have to be careful. Some people return worse from prison then when they went in. We have to make sure she doesn't get even more crazy when she comes out again.

Maybe there are better strategies?

12 hours ago, Crw said:

Classic-gay content ain't so popular, even on LL -_- dunno why. 
I guess that the whole thing here is that you managed to surprise everyone with that   And thats cool! Imo.

I think it's pretty clear why it's less popular, given the average demographic of this website  .

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you very much! It was lacking any sort of real story and I was expecting to be called out on that, but maybe you have given up on that a long time ago ?.

But there was a scenario, only its twists and content did only apply to the scene itself. There were twists, uncertainties, all intertwined with sensual content. So it was entertaining, and isn't our goal just that ?

And considering the Alikr sequence as a whole, there was some nice bits of story as well. Don't be harsher than the critic himself !

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

You're probably right about that, but it was a kill move in another video game and it seemed kind of fitting for vampires. But good point!

If that was Mortal Kombat then it's probably not a good source for realism concerns. ^^ But hey, I was just mentioning it, the truth is that this moment was both gory and unexpected, which made it a nice twist in terms of entertainment.

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Yes, I think that's a good plan, but we have to be careful. Some people return worse from prison then when they went in. We have to make sure she doesn't get even more crazy when she comes out again.

Malicia :

Breathtaking as always, though warning about gay content would have been appreciated. 

Oh, come on, Nora! Jona specifically asked you NOT to kill her! Sure the request might've gotten a bit lost in translation, but still it's easy to guess that she was not saying "I'd really like my heart to be pulled out of my throat." ?

Joking aside, I guess there's 'decadence' and then there's 'Lady Karlov's levels of decadence'.  I love how perfectly the name of the episode "Lust for Life" fits with the overall theme. Nora seems to lose herself in all of the sensations that she's missed for three decades: blood, power, sex, the feeling of being truly alive (well, the vampiric equivalent of that word). It also depicts just how differently she used to view mortals, seeing them as nothing more than either useful tools, toys or food.  The present-day Baroness Karlov shows at least some compassion for the humans in her care (like Fina).

Visually the whole entry is stunning. Damon became almost a vampire version of Hercules (especially with Nora praising him for slaying Cerberus).  And this particular screenshot can be easily turned into an ancient Greek painting. ?

I'm very curious about the continuation of the Hammerfell story-line. From her conversation on the balcony we learn that Nora was planning on marrying Ahtar. But since we know from the current events that it didn't happen I wonder what caused the two of them to drift apart. ?

Overall, absolutely marvelous work! Thank you for continuing to share it with us! ?

P.S. Oh, right. I guess I almost forgot to mention what everyone else already pointed out - two very hot vampires indulging in some brotherly love.  All I can say to that is: WOOHOO!!!???  Errr, I mean...ahem...it was good...yeah... you can totally do more of those....I wouldn't mind at all...

On 5/8/2020 at 11:47 PM, Tirloque said:

But there was a scenario, only its twists and content did only apply to the scene itself. There were twists, uncertainties, all intertwined with sensual content. So it was entertaining, and isn't our goal just that ?

Yes indeed, however I try to give most of the erotic scenes in this blog their own spin, glad it worked out this time.

22 hours ago, DonClop said:

Breathtaking as always, though warning about gay content would have been appreciated. 

Thanks.

Tbh. there's a bunch of other stuff like the ripped out heart etc. that need warnings instead of the gay content. 

I'm well aware that this is not very popular, but in the end it's just shows dicks and asses put together... If there were three more guys and Nora naked in the middle of all of them it'd be premium content. 

As said, in the end it's just human body parts and no big deal imo.

But thanks, I appreciate your feedback.

13 hours ago, Devianna said:

Joking aside, I guess there's 'decadence' and then there's 'Lady Karlov's levels of decadence'.  I love how perfectly the name of the episode "Lust for Life" fits with the overall theme. Nora seems to lose herself in all of the sensations that she's missed for three decades: blood, power, sex, the feeling of being truly alive (well, the vampiric equivalent of that word). It also depicts just how differently she used to view mortals, seeing them as nothing more than either useful tools, toys or food.  The present-day Baroness Karlov shows at least some compassion for the humans in her care (like Fina).

Yes, you're totally right, well observed Devianna. 

She has a lot to catch up on due to her humble life in the years before.

When it comes to humans in my vampire world there is a difference between thralls (=food & more, dispensable) and servants (like Fina, or the girl in the red dress last entry). The later ones serve a real purpose at the court, be it cleaning and cooking or translating etc....

And of course you're treating your servants well, keep them happy and make sure they don't feel threatened by you or other vampires.

13 hours ago, Devianna said:

 

Visually the whole entry is stunning. Damon became almost a vampire version of Hercules (especially with Nora praising him for slaying Cerberus).  And this particular screenshot can be easily turned into an ancient Greek painting. ?

Thank you!

I actually had some of the greek heros in mind when designing his character. I was more thinking about Achill, but Hercules makes more sense due to the best slaying, but well observed.

In general I am trying to give Dina's bloodline a bit of a greek vibe. That way they don't feel completely out of place in Hammerfell but still foreign enough to keep the Redguards suspicious. 

13 hours ago, Devianna said:

Overall, absolutely marvelous work! Thank you for continuing to share it with us! ?

 

P.S. Oh, right. I guess I almost forgot to mention what everyone else already pointed out - two very hot vampires indulging in some brotherly love.  All I can say to that is: WOOHOO!!!???  Errr, I mean...ahem...it was good...yeah... you can totally do more of those....I wouldn't mind at all...

 

Thank you very much!
Let's see  

50 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Yes indeed, however I try to give most of the erotic scenes in this blog their own spin, glad it worked out this time.

 

Thanks.

Tbh. there's a bunch of other stuff like the ripped out heart etc. that need warnings instead of the gay content. 

I'm well aware that this is not very popular, but in the end it's just shows dicks and asses put together... If there were three more guys and Nora naked in the middle of all of them it'd be premium content. 

As said, in the end it's just human body parts and no big deal imo.

But thanks, I appreciate your feedback.

Yes, you're totally right, well observed Devianna. 

She has a lot to catch up on due to her humble life in the years before.

When it comes to humans in my vampire world there is a difference between thralls (=food & more, dispensable) and servants (like Fina, or the girl in the red dress last entry). The later ones serve a real purpose at the court, be it cleaning and cooking or translating etc....

And of course you're treating your servants well, keep them happy and make sure they don't feel threatened by you or other vampires.

 

 

Thank you!

I actually had some of the greek heros in mind when designing his character. I was more thinking about Achill, but Hercules makes more sense due to the best slaying, but well observed.

In general I am trying to give Dina's bloodline a bit of a greek vibe. That way they don't feel completely out of place in Hammerfell but still foreign enough to keep the Redguards suspicious. 

 

Thank you very much!
Let's see  

To be fair, all the blood carnage was from the start, and it this point, this is something that is usual on the series. And while i understand your position,and i am not against gay stuff(everyone have their own preferences), but warning would be appreciated,because hey, what it was Lion King? Be prepared?xD

8 hours ago, DonClop said:

To be fair, all the blood carnage was from the start, and it this point, this is something that is usual on the series. And while i understand your position,and i am not against gay stuff(everyone have their own preferences), but warning would be appreciated,because hey, what it was Lion King? Be prepared?xD

Yeah you have a point it's uncommon on this blog and it probably won't happen any time soon again. But then... it's like three screenshots and not that big of a deal.

14 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Yeah you have a point it's uncommon on this blog and it probably won't happen any time soon again. But then... it's like three screenshots and not that big of a deal.

Hey, iam just one person, and considering most here are ok,no need to worry about that and yeah, you kinda have a point. Three screenshots and i survived xD

So Im reading your story and was thinking...

....oh wow, I like how he has the girl sucking on Nora's finger...really hot.....I gotta ask him how he did that pose

.....nice angle of the second finger sucking pic...that girl kinda looks like one of my past characters

......ok, lots of fingers, Nora gonna have her suck her toes next?

.....whoa, whole arm? different way of a fisting scene

.........

.........

.......HOLY SHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job keeping things fresh and interesting Alter! Love the balanced lighting as it keeps taht dark tone but at the same time, every detail of the background is clear.

On 5/13/2020 at 8:41 AM, devious-Drunna said:

So Im reading your story and was thinking...

 

....oh wow, I like how he has the girl sucking on Nora's finger...really hot.....I gotta ask him how he did that pose

 

.....nice angle of the second finger sucking pic...that girl kinda looks like one of my past characters

 

......ok, lots of fingers, Nora gonna have her suck her toes next?

 

.....whoa, whole arm? different way of a fisting scene

 

.........

 

.........

 

.......HOLY SHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job keeping things fresh and interesting Alter! Love the balanced lighting as it keeps taht dark tone but at the same time, every detail of the background is clear.

 Got to keep my readers and my vampires entertained!

Thanks! 

(The pose is just two individual halo poses put together.) 

6 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 Got to keep my readers and my vampires entertained!

Thanks! 

(The pose is just two individual halo poses put together.) 

 

 

 

Nice! Were they actual, matched up pose pairs or two different poses that you found to work? Because I would have an easier time finding a needle in a barn full of haystacks than Halos massive amount of poses

4 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Nice! Were they actual, matched up pose pairs or two different poses that you found to work? Because I would have an easier time finding a needle in a barn full of haystacks than Halos massive amount of poses

Yeah ?, Halo Poser is a bit messy. 

I have a tag based systems to sort through all the poses, so you can just type sth. like "standing" + "weapon" and you get all standing weapon poses...

I wanted to share this for quite some time, but there's always something else I have to do more urgently... I'll probably do so after I'm done with the new version of Karlov Manor.