Great chapter! Not the outcome I expected, I feel bad for Kathrin. I'm glad she stood up for herself. Though Nora getting collared instead was excellent with the symbolic replacement of the necklace.

> Most excellent. ?

> You are the first one on LL who posted MM/F bisexual sex. I looooooooved it very much since it turns me on  And all the compliments for the rest of the story.

Awesome sauce! Great work! You sure know how to make some hot and steamy scenes. 

Well, quite the steamy entry indeed ! The whole thing was an XXL four steps sex sequence, with the perk of having some really atypical ones (didn't expect Jonas intervention at the start ^^), and of keeping the reader (and characters !) constantly wonder about Nora's whereabouts (objectives ? faking ? How much ? etc.). and from that point of view the intertwining of the sex and the use of the sex as a manipulation tool was excellent. Now, hard to avoid some moments being somewhat repetitive towards the end with a sequence that long, but the graphical qualities (fluid effects included !) largely made up for it. Great work ! ?

« Dear Mr Native,

                I read this carefully, and I very noticed details no one did :

                the guys of this story, they all taking stud potions, 'cause when they're finished, they never go flabby, no.

                So they're very cheating to make Nora look good, uh. »

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, quite the steamy entry indeed ! The whole thing was an XXL four steps sex sequence, with the perk of having some really atypical ones (didn't expect Jonas intervention at the start ^^), and of keeping the reader (and characters !) constantly wonder about Nora's whereabouts (objectives ? faking ? How much ? etc.). and from that point of view the intertwining of the sex and the use of the sex as a manipulation tool was excellent. Now, hard to avoid some moments being somewhat repetitive towards the end with a sequence that long, but the graphical qualities (fluid effects included !) largely made up for it. Great work ! ?

 

 

« Dear Mr Native,

                I read this carefully, and I very noticed details no one did :

               

                the guys of this story, they all taking stud potions, 'cause when they're finished, they never go flabby, no.

 

                So they're very cheating to make Nora look good, uh. »

 

> The picture you posted, I like very much. She looks very hot, beautiful and sluttish. My type of the girl.

On 3/23/2023 at 2:58 AM, Evaloves4 said:

> The picture you posted, I like very much. She looks very hot, beautiful and sluttish. My type of the girl.

« Since you like reading about pee-pee kissing a lot, I'm not surprised.

              I prefer to be a gal who looks very hot, beautiful and intelligent instead, yes.  »