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Short Summary of the previous entries

 

 


In the previous entry we met Viscountess Lenora Cheyne again.

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 She was plotting to murder the vampire Count Gottfried in order to take his place. She blackmailed Nora's boyfriend and love interest into helping him by killing the vampire count for her.

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Nora realized that she had a much better chance at killing the count and decided to do it herself instead having Thomas endangered. However things go terribly wrong and only with the last minute appearance of Thomas they manage to kill the count.
 

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Knowing what she did was against the laws of the vampire realm she sent a letter to Duchess Maerwynn, Judicator of the realm and responsible for prosecuting crimes of the nobility of the realm.

 

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Afterwards Nora and Thomas returned to Lenora meeting her at a big celebration of her new title. 

 

 

 

 

My blog overview page provides summaries of previous chapters, backgrounds and characters summaries.

 

 

More Nora on my Twitter and Flickr

 

Chapter 10 Section 5 - Retribution

 

 


 

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Thanks for reading!
 

 

 

 

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Wow, wow, wow! Didn't expect that from Thomas! Am I get it right? He just changed his pants so quickly! Seems now everyone against Nora! Damn, I'm eager to know what happened next!
Great work Alter Native! 

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What a spectacle! Very well done, I must say.

I don't expect Nora to get whacked though... The high and mighty vampires seem far too pragmatic for that. I don't think they would just waste someone as capable as her. On the other hand: Put a death sentence on her head that is suspened for as long as she continues to prove useful? Make her persona non grata in the realm to ensure that she will do whatever unsavory or dangerous task she is given? That sounds far more plausible to me.

 

In any case: Great work! Looking forward to the next part.

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Daaaaaamn, what an outcome! I'm shocked at Thomas' decision, but I guess his loyalty has never been tested like this. I'm dying to see how this unfolds!

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12 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very well done. I hope Nora will not be killed and I love this picture very much.

 

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Thank you very much Eva, I also like the image. :heart:

 

11 hours ago, Crw said:

Wow, wow, wow! Didn't expect that from Thomas! Am I get it right? He just changed his pants so quickly! Seems now everyone against Nora! Damn, I'm eager to know what happened next!
Great work Alter Native! 

 

Thank you very much. We'll have to see how she is getting out of this one.

 

10 hours ago, HM1919 said:

What a spectacle! Very well done, I must say.

I don't expect Nora to get whacked though... The high and mighty vampires seem far too pragmatic for that. I don't think they would just waste someone as capable as her. On the other hand: Put a death sentence on her head that is suspened for as long as she continues to prove useful? Make her persona non grata in the realm to ensure that she will do whatever unsavory or dangerous task she is given? That sounds far more plausible to me.

 

In any case: Great work! Looking forward to the next part.

 

Thank you very much! Well... a vampire of a far higher rank got murdered by her, if the vampire realm is serious about enforcing their laws there must be consequences. Question is just how do you judge the involvement of Lenora as she is the one responsible for the murder and how do you find out about who is lying and who is telling the truth...

 

7 hours ago, Collygon said:

Daaaaaamn, what an outcome! I'm shocked at Thomas' decision, but I guess his loyalty has never been tested like this. I'm dying to see how this unfolds!

 

Thank you! Guess we'll have to see.

 

5 hours ago, Myst42 said:

Oh no... how are you gonna get Nora out of this now?

 

Don't know. We have to see ;)

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Wow, such a slow start, and such a quick escalation ! I must say I quite love the first part (particularly the first half), since it's one of the few scenes where Nora's and Thomas' intimacy gets a certain normalcy, with the characters honestly exposing their weaknesses to the other. Yet, a lot of the flavor of this entry comes from the quick dilemma succession that arose when the Duchess presented herself. It's obvious that Thomas lies in order to be later able to help Nora ; however the Duchess attitude might be even more subtle than that (depending on her goals for Lenora most probably). Loving how you heightened the stakes regardless. Technically, I amazed at how progressive you managed to get the different poses of the first sequence, but knowing you on screen quality is almost a given (how did you arrange the blanket, btw ?). Great entry ! :D?

 

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ldyMRSUy_o.png « Looks like she's gonna get jailed again. I hope they'll have no dentist this time. :classic_angel:

               I could very ask Serana to help her, but only if she promises to stop eating people like tin cans afterwards. :classic_sleep: »

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Oh boy... :O Now this is getting exciting. Make me wonder if there is someone more powerful pulling the Strings. Well Done. :D:heart:;):thumbsup:

I'm also curious about the blanket. ?

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Jay-omm: Ouch Thomas what was that?

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Thomas: You'll have to find out next chapter.

Jay-omm: Aww! That's cold Thomas!

Thomas: Like I said wait and see!

 

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17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Looks like she's gonna get jailed again. I hope they'll have no dentist this time. :classic_angel:

          

 

> That's because Thomas is

pig hair flip GIF by Tirol

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5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> That's because Thomas is

pig hair flip GIF by Tirol

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I'm very not sure. I mean I know he's a pig, but I think he said he wasn't aware of what Nora did 'cause he wants to rescue her later, you see ?

                So that they can honey-honey again afterwards, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I'm very not sure. I mean I know he's a pig, but I think he said he wasn't aware of what Nora did 'cause he wants to rescue her later, you see ?

                So that they can honey-honey again afterwards, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

> Yes, honey-honey is all he has in mind but from wrong motives. A PIIIIIIG!!! :) I never liked him. 

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6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Yes, honey-honey is all he has in mind but from wrong motives. A PIIIIIIG!!! :) I never liked him. 

ldyMRSUy_o.png« That's why I very check the motive of my boyfriends right before it.

               And when their motive is big enough, we honey-honey. ? »

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3 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

ldyMRSUy_o.png« That's why I very check the motive of my boyfriends right before it.

               And when their motive is big enough, we honey-honey. ? »

 

> You are mocking me now, because you know my sexual appetites but it is OK.  :)

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There was no mockery in Malicia's words, Eva. Sexuality is a domain where freedom should apply ; and therefore judgments shouldn't.

However, I do think my associate misunderstood what you were calling "motive". :classic_wink:

 

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> You are mocking me now, because you know my sexual appetites but it is OK.  :)

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I wasn't mocking you, no.

               It's very the truth : if the guy's motive stays small, it's all flabby and we can't honey-honey. I have to make it big before we do. :classic_sleepy: »
 

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On 8/1/2021 at 12:23 PM, Tirloque said:

Wow, such a slow start, and such a quick escalation ! I must say I quite love the first part (particularly the first half), since it's one of the few scenes where Nora's and Thomas' intimacy gets a certain normalcy, with the characters honestly exposing their weaknesses to the other.

 

Thank you! I the scene where Thomas tells Nora about his history with Lenora in C10S3 was intended to have a similar honesty, glad you noticed.

 

 

On 8/1/2021 at 12:23 PM, Tirloque said:

 

Yet, a lot of the flavor of this entry comes from the quick dilemma succession that arose when the Duchess presented herself. It's obvious that Thomas lies in order to be later able to help Nora ; however the Duchess attitude might be even more subtle than that (depending on her goals for Lenora most probably).

I guess everyone plays it's own game in that conflict, we'll have to see ;) ...

 

 

On 8/1/2021 at 12:23 PM, Tirloque said:

 

Loving how you heightened the stakes regardless. Technically, I amazed at how progressive you managed to get the different poses of the first sequence, but knowing you on screen quality is almost a given (how did you arrange the blanket, btw ?). Great entry ! :D?

 

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Thanks! The blanket is an item from GomaPero Land that I added to the scene via the Creation Kit.

 

On 8/1/2021 at 12:23 PM, Tirloque said:

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Looks like she's gonna get jailed again. I hope they'll have no dentist this time. :classic_angel:

               I could very ask Serana to help her, but only if she promises to stop eating people like tin cans afterwards. :classic_sleep: »

 

:O Wow, you have a good memory! I assumed everyone had already forgotten about that scene in chapter 3.

Not sure Serana would be a great help with her father messing around too.

 

On 8/1/2021 at 3:54 PM, Jay-Omms said:

Oh boy... :O Now this is getting exciting. Make me wonder if there is someone more powerful pulling the Strings. Well Done. :D:heart:;):thumbsup:

I'm also curious about the blanket. ?

 

 

Thank you! Seems like a lot of people are trying to pull strings.... we'll have to see who's best at it.

As already written to Tirloque, the blanket is from GomaPero Land that I added to the scene via the Creation Kit.

 

 

 

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10 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

 

 

:O Wow, you have a good memory! I assumed everyone had already forgotten about that scene in chapter 3.

Not sure Serana would be a great help with her father messing around too.

 

 

 

 

> I would love to see Nora and Serana in lesbian sex. :)

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10 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> I would love to see Nora and Serana in lesbian sex. :)

 

:love:

But that won't happen (at least not story wise).

Next lesbian sex is going to happen in Chapter 11 Section 3 ;)

 

 

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5 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

 

:love:

But that won't happen (at least not story wise).

Next lesbian sex is going to happen in Chapter 11 Section 3 ;)

 

 

 

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12 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

Thank you! I the scene where Thomas tells Nora about his history with Lenora in C10S3 was intended to have a similar honesty, glad you noticed.

 

I guess everyone plays it's own game in that conflict, we'll have to see ;) ...

It's not in the duchess interest to dispose of Nora. Yet, it's in her interest to display she asserts justice. Smiley_henri_gaud-belin_HFR.gif

12 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

Thanks! The blanket is an item from GomaPero Land that I added to the scene via the Creation Kit

So the blanket was created, but you added it via the CK in order it not to bounce when being placed close to characters ? That's a clever idea, indeed. ?

 

12 hours ago, Alter Native said:

:O Wow, you have a good memory! I assumed everyone had already forgotten about that scene in chapter 3.

Not sure Serana would be a great help with her father messing around too.

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Of course I've got a good memory. Or else, I could not be a mage, or even the prettiest and most intelligent gal of her time. :classic_sleepy: »

 

12 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Not sure Serana would be a great help with her father messing around too.

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I see you're very not aware. The Serana I know, the one with the crow outfit, you see ? Well, her father tried to kill her, Tryade and her.

                And he didn't managed at all, no. :classic_ph34r: »

 

12 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> I would love to see Nora and Serana in lesbian sex. :)


ldyMRSUy_o.png « You'd love to see anyone in lesbian honey-honey. You're very like Mrs. Ivy, uh:classic_sleep: »

 

 

 

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4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You'd love to see anyone in lesbian honey-honey. You're very like Mrs. Ivy, uh:classic_sleep: »

 

 

 

 

> My Ivy ....... ?

 

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> I miss her reply to you ;)

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Yikes... i guess this was gonna happen to Nora and Thomas eventually! Well done Alter great work!

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