devious little minx... but good riddance to the count!

...... Damn that was hard for Ahtar. His father's last words are messed up... So yeah hurry up and die already bastard.  Would Ahtar would be mad at Nora I mean they treated her like shit so he shouldn't be that much.  Great Work  

5 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

devious little minx... but good riddance to the count!

Thank you very much, the next entry is coming soon.

4 hours ago, Jayomms said:

...... Damn that was hard for Ahtar. His father's last words are messed up... So yeah hurry up and die already bastard.  Would Ahtar would be mad at Nora I mean they treated her like shit so he shouldn't be that much.  Great Work  

Thank you, Nora's and Ahtar's relationship got quite a bit more complicated now. He doesn't have the full picture of what happend, in fact he doesn't even know about Nora's involvment in the first place, but things got more complicated.

Wowee, this was intense. I gotta say, you nailed those expressions. The grief was beyond apparent in Nora's eyes. The blood and visual effects on the shots really made it feel like a whirlwind too. With all the jump cuts through Nora's memory and the party, I felt so immersed in the chaos. Really well done, Alter!

You did some pretty daring choices regarding the staging here, by intertwining the scene where Nora is sexually submitted to the Sertkis sons, and the one where her poisonning takes effect. This may confuse some readers, but the echo of the protagonist words in the sex submission and the in the ensuing assassination makes both stylish and dramatic. Great job as usual with the graphical part, in particular the expressions, outfits, blood and sperm effects. There was only some very secondary NPCs who took the lighting a bit worse than the others, but the coordination of such high actors numbers is still impressive. There is one shot where Ahtar seems to have lost his head though, upon being stabbed. Regardless of that you managed to communicate quite a lot with the stares, between the accomplices, and between Nora and her victims in the end. And I didn't notice any typos this time. Great work !

Malicia: « It's very meany to kill people, but at the same time, those dummies stabbed Nora in the leg and then walked over her before honey-honey.

               So it served them right to die from Chlamydia, yes.  »

On 11/7/2020 at 10:53 PM, Collygon said:

Wowee, this was intense. I gotta say, you nailed those expressions. The grief was beyond apparent in Nora's eyes. The blood and visual effects on the shots really made it feel like a whirlwind too. With all the jump cuts through Nora's memory and the party, I felt so immersed in the chaos. Really well done, Alter!

Thank you very much! I felt it was partially too much chaos, but glad you liked it.

On 11/8/2020 at 1:00 AM, Tirloque said:

You did some pretty daring choices regarding the staging here, by intertwining the scene where Nora is sexually submitted to the Sertkis sons, and the one where her poisonning takes effect. This may confuse some readers, but the echo of the protagonist words in the sex submission and the in the ensuing assassination makes both stylish and dramatic.

The truth is that I just had too many sex screenshots and had no space to put them. The previous entry was already beyond 200+ screenshots, this one didn't need them. It should have just been the assassination. But I still had half a sex scene and countless hours of work put into it left. 

So I decided to merge them.

On 11/8/2020 at 1:00 AM, Tirloque said:

Great job as usual with the graphical part, in particular the expressions, outfits, blood and sperm effects. There was only some very secondary NPCs who took the lighting a bit worse than the others, but the coordination of such high actors numbers is still impressive. There is one shot where Ahtar seems to have lost his head though, upon being stabbed. Regardless of that you managed to communicate quite a lot with the stares, between the accomplices, and between Nora and her victims in the end. And I didn't notice any typos this time. Great work !

Thank you very much!

On 11/8/2020 at 1:00 AM, Tirloque said:

Malicia: « It's very meany to kill people, but at the same time, those dummies stabbed Nora in the leg and then walked over her before honey-honey.

 

               So it served them right to die from Chlamydia, yes.  »

There are no good guys in this story  and everyone's motivation is kind of meany for doing almost everything.

Love the back and forth of Ahtar dying and his treatment of Nora as you’re both telling two stories at the same time, and telling a third narrative that Ahtar (I’m assuming) suspects Nora had something to do with his assassination.

The pictures near the end of Ahtar was hard to tell clearly what was going on with his lifeless body (I think he was decomposing?) as the red mist further obscured the already heavy red of the scene.

Now that's how you feed her cum!

Excellent!

On 11/13/2020 at 1:20 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Love the back and forth of Ahtar dying and his treatment of Nora as you’re both telling two stories at the same time, and telling a third narrative that Ahtar (I’m assuming) suspects Nora had something to do with his assassination.

 

The pictures near the end of Ahtar was hard to tell clearly what was going on with his lifeless body (I think he was decomposing?) as the red mist further obscured the already heavy red of the scene.

It wasn't Ahtar that was turning into ashes, rather count Sertkis and his other sons.  Ahtar not being poisoned by Nora (he's her lover/future husband after all), he could recover normally by drinking blood.

On 11/13/2020 at 1:20 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Love the back and forth of Ahtar dying and his treatment of Nora as you’re both telling two stories at the same time, and telling a third narrative that Ahtar (I’m assuming) suspects Nora had something to do with his assassination.

 

The pictures near the end of Ahtar was hard to tell clearly what was going on with his lifeless body (I think he was decomposing?) as the red mist further obscured the already heavy red of the scene.

Yes, as Tirloque already mentioned, Ahtar is Nora's boyfriend/finance Ahtar's vampire father is Azarik who died this entry. But yes, the picture at the end is not very clear, people don't know for sure who knows what, including Nora. 

The only one who is in full control of the situation is the Duchess herself.

On 11/13/2020 at 3:17 AM, WANOBI12 said:

Now that's how you feed her cum!

Excellent!

Thanks! I made use of your tutorial. 

10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

It wasn't Ahtar that was turning into ashes, rather count Sertkis and his other sons.  Ahtar not being poisoned by Nora (he's her lover/future husband after all), he could recover normally by drinking blood.

Yes, 100 % correct.

Nice story! can you give the mod of the outfit

1 hour ago, mikael569874123 said:

Nice story! can you give the mod of the outfit

Thanks, the mod is called [NINI] Charles Rene, not sure where to find it nowadays. 

On one hand I'm a little sad that I didn't have the time to comment on your previous part (which was amazing) but on the other I'm rather glad as I got to read both parts in one go.  And all I can say is wow, Alter. That was really like watching a movie. At first I wanted to say that it was bloody and sensual but in reality there was nothing sensual about those scenes. They were filled with malice, savagery, depravity, treachery - and that made them all the more perfect. ?

I had no trouble following along with the poison in the bracelet scheme. I think you showed it rather clearly, especially with the addition of Nora trying to get water as quickly as possible in order to rid herself of the liquid that she held in her mouth.  However the dagger that we see in this part does confuse me a bit. It looks like it was used to stab the count and his sons but we don't really see who did it. I'm guessing we're not meant to know it yet? ?  I'm also curious, in his last moments it almost looked like Father realized that Nora was involved in the assassination but of course he turned into a pile of ash right afterwards so he took his suspicions to the grave.

Those huge party scenes - I'm afraid to ask how much time it took you to set everything up. It must've been an absolute nightmare but the visuals that appeared as a result are definitely worth it. 

Incredible work as always. Thank you for sharing it with us. ?

Damn! That's an amazing mix of great amount sex and violence! Love that!
Although sometimes I felt a little lost from the abrupt transition of scenes, but with a long viewing it becomes generally clear, and gives additional dynamism and drama to what is happening! Great job Alter! 
And the last scene is just amazing!
 

Was für ein verrückter Plot - bestes Kino

Das war bisher das absolute Meisterstück an Inszenierung ever!

Bin echt hin und weg.

Und ja - alle drei haben es verdient genau so zu sterben - punkt!

?