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Chapter 1 Section 4 - The Queen of Darkness


Alter Native

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This is the forth part of the first chapter of Nora's Story.

 

Story Overview

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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

Short Summary of the previous entries

 

 


Nora received a letter from Harkon in which he asked her to take care of a couple of necromancers in his realm.

 

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She followed his request and during the battle with the necromancers and their summoned monstrosity she got badly wounded. Due to her extensive use of blood magic, she also lost a lot of blood, which made her fall unconscious after the battle.

 

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In this vulnerable state she got captured by a group of feral vampires whose leader tried to make her death as slow and painful as possible.

 

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Nora managed to kill the feral vampire, but got heavily wounded and fell deep into Skyrim's underground, to Blackreach, close to death.

 

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Chapter 1 - Section 4

 
 


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This marks the end for first chapter 1 of Nora's story and is the only part that was kept of the initial entries I posted back in January 2017. I hope you guys enjoyed them nonetheless. 

Edited by Alter Native

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Yeap, your text line are very understandable and the pictures are explainable by themselves.

 

Love the screenshots.

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Like you said, you definitely missed a good opportunity to develop a stronger character arc by taking the easy way out with the character.  If you'd like help developing a scene or a character, I'd love to help you in private via PMs.  I've been writing a few books so I'd love to help you with development if you're looking.  That said:

 

I did enjoy the chapter.  I was only confused by why the character was naked to begin with.  Unless it's just really dark shadows, it looks like she's wearing armor in the first few pictures.

 

Having the newer human naked (sorry I dont remember any names) actually makes sense if she's being held captive.  You can make the narrative that either a) she's a nudist (given what looks like tribal tattoos, this is within the realms of possibility) or B) that she had her armor and lost it when she was captured.

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Like you said, you definitely missed a good opportunity to develop a stronger character arc by taking the easy way out with the character.  If you'd like help developing a scene or a character, I'd love to help you in private via PMs.  I've been writing a few books so I'd love to help you with development if you're looking.  That said:

 

I did enjoy the chapter.  I was only confused by why the character was naked to begin with.  Unless it's just really dark shadows, it looks like she's wearing armor in the first few pictures.

 

Having the newer human naked (sorry I dont remember any names) actually makes sense if she's being held captive.  You can make the narrative that either a) she's a nudist (given what looks like tribal tattoos, this is within the realms of possibility) or B) that she had her armor and lost it when she was captured.

 

Thanks for your comment. Meara is a follower from TES general and I was recreating her appearance based on this screenshot (not done by me)

 

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She is consistently wearing the skirt and is held captive for a couple of days by the falmer and she most likely lost her armor when she was captured  ;).

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Interesting, but a little confused did a Snow Elf free her then give her those bit of clothing because in the last image it showed just a face.

 

 

Only thing that confused me Alter

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