Some good old revenge, never a bad thing

The story could do with a little more writing, imho. I got a little confused a couple of times.

Keep it up.

Yeah I agree, needs more words. But damn dont fuck with her unless u wanna lose ur manhood

I enjoyed in this episode very much. You did excellent job.

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciate it, you're probably right about the additional writing. Another reason why it was probably hard to understand is because it relates to a bunch of stuff of several different episodes from weeks ago. 

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciate it, you're probably right about the additional writing. Another reason why it was probably hard to understand is because it relates to a bunch of stuff of several different episodes from weeks ago. 

I personally think that you don't have to add more text. Your pictures are very powerful and speak by themselves. No, I'm not flattering you now. I speak sincerely. I watched this episode a 4th time and with my wives. We all liked it very much and enjoyed in it. You are the master of making screenshots. I envy you (in positive way)

Please, don't stop creating them.

 

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciate it, you're probably right about the additional writing. Another reason why it was probably hard to understand is because it relates to a bunch of stuff of several different episodes from weeks ago. 

 

 

I personally think that you don't have to add more text. Your pictures are very powerful and speak by themselves. No, I'm not flattering you now. I speak sincerely. I watched this episode a 4th time and with my wives. We all liked it very much and enjoyed in it. You are the master of making screenshots. I envy you (in positive way)

 

Please, don't stop creating them.

 

Thank you . There is no reason to stop taking screenshots. 

 

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciate it, you're probably right about the additional writing. Another reason why it was probably hard to understand is because it relates to a bunch of stuff of several different episodes from weeks ago. 

 

 

I personally think that you don't have to add more text. Your pictures are very powerful and speak by themselves. No, I'm not flattering you now. I speak sincerely. I watched this episode a 4th time and with my wives. We all liked it very much and enjoyed in it. You are the master of making screenshots. I envy you (in positive way)

 

Please, don't stop creating them.

 

100% as he said. We all love your work very much. Looking forward for new episode.

It is understandable all right, but do not let you guard down on Nora transitions. For example, you see her entering an area with two unhindered vampires, she opens her arms... and poof, the next shot the two vampires are fully tied. If going for a full illustrated story, you would need screens of the fight ; if not you must make the transition with some text, otherwise the reader must go back an forth a few times before he fully understands what happens.

Anyway, great vampiric ambience as always.

 

100% as he said. We all love your work very much. Looking forward for new episode.

 

Thank you .

It is understandable all right, but do not let you guard down on Nora transitions. For example, you see her entering an area with two unhindered vampires, she opens her arms... and poof, the next shot the two vampires are fully tied. If going for a full illustrated story, you would need screens of the fight ; if not you must make the transition with some text, otherwise the reader must go back an forth a few times before he fully understands what happens.

 

Anyway, great vampiric ambience as always.

I was probably to lazy to do the fighting scene since I dislike doing those (to little control over what's happening) and during writing I thought it'll be understandable. But you're right thank you .

Nora is quite the conflicting character. At times despicable because of how callous and evil she is, yet at other times you can't help but feel bad for her and sympathize with her suffering (as in the final few scenes of her flashback). Very interesting story, nice job.

On a side note, in the much earlier chapters I feel the story was moving a bit fast, but you've discussed that extensively already with other commenters. Looking forward to catching up with the rest of the Chapters and Sections. 

EDIT: The Falmer story is a bit confusing though. The Falmer are quite amicable despite Nora taking their captive and leaving with her for so long, hmm. The telepathy and meeting with the Falmers in the final part happened quite quickly too. Not quite sure what happened. Doesn't mean much considering how old this Chapter is, but this is just me wanting to share my thoughts.

Ah so Nora knows the Vampire Falmer Queen?

Nice work!

Das Outfit von Nora - der reinste Fetisch-Traum

das passt derart gut mit den Hörnern auf ihrem Kopf und den Flügeln

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