Nooice! 

I have to say, at first I was like, "Wait a sec? Nora is a badass... Why is she caving to this dude?"

Then I was like... "Ooooohhh... BBC. I get it.."

Then he got all mean and she was still kiss'n his ass, and I was like, "Surely, she's gonna rip his heart out, right?"

But then, he started playin with her pussy, so I was like, "Ok"

Then he like, fucked her ass and slammed her head into the floor!! and I was like, "Really?"

And then she walked off with him begging and I was like, "There's my girl!!"

Still, I'm a little concerned about the power he holds over her.

I'd love to see a lil, "Come to Nora" scenario ?

Great pics, great sex, and don't think I didn't notice those wonderful little cum edits!

Just brilliant as always ? 
Loved the switch between the human and the vampire body during the sex scene. It might be just a little detail, but it really enrich the story.

Heck! Delightful work by Alter, as always, every detail is at its best!
So detailed sex scenes and lighting that from time to time you even forget that this is skyrim!

8 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Nooice! 

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Jay-Omm: Oooo! Are we playing a game of who's hand is that?!

Thomas: What did you see?! What did he do to her?! 

Jay-Omm: Calm down! Don't worry she gets even. Trust me. You know this already.

Jay-Omm: You know I shouldn't show you what Nora is up to without her knowing...

Thomas: Tsk...

Great work! as you can see I've been working on content with Thomas and Jay-Omm Story is based on existing in Jays world unless you have any suggestions 

 

 

 

Oh, wow! I love it! Glad you like it.

And I'm looking forward to what you have written.

8 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

I have to say, at first I was like, "Wait a sec? Nora is a badass... Why is she caving to this dude?"

Then I was like... "Ooooohhh... BBC. I get it.."

Then he got all mean and she was still kiss'n his ass, and I was like, "Surely, she's gonna rip his heart out, right?"

But then, he started playin with her pussy, so I was like, "Ok"

Then he like, fucked her ass and slammed her head into the floor!! and I was like, "Really?"

And then she walked off with him begging and I was like, "There's my girl!!"

Still, I'm a little concerned about the power he holds over her.

I'd love to see a lil, "Come to Nora" scenario ?

 

Great pics, great sex, and don't think I didn't notice those wonderful little cum edits!

Thanks, actually they both hold power over each other. It's not just he having control over her. 

By threatening to leave Hammerfell she gets him to do what she wants but vice versa Ahtar's father also gets what he wants out of it. 

5 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Just brilliant as always ? 
Loved the switch between the human and the vampire body during the sex scene. It might be just a little detail, but it really enrich the story.

Thank you very much!  ? 

2 hours ago, Crw said:

Heck! Delightful work by Alter, as always, every detail is at its best!
So detailed sex scenes and lighting that from time to time you even forget that this is skyrim!

Thanks! I'm very happy with how the screenshots for this entry turned out.

You know, I was writing down a comment for your previous chapter, wanting to point out the emotional impact of the scene where Nora is punching out her reflection. But then I saw that you posted a new chapter and after reading this one I realized that the impact was MUCH stronger than I first thought. She really seems to despise not just Ahtar's father, but to some degree herself as well. At least due to what she had to do in order to manipulate him.

I know that you usually concentrate more on the aesthetics of your stories but I just have to mention how excellent the dialogue was in this episode. Nora practically rolling her eyes while going through the expected routine of "yes yes, you're so awesome" was a great addition. Especially the moment where she slips and says " you're so big", quickly correcting herself with " I meant your fingers". It really shows just how detached she is from the whole process (plus it was pretty funny ?). And of course Nora's narration of her plans for Father's demise and him being so caught up in his lust that he completely ignores the fact that she's being serious was a really nice touch.

I also really liked the momentary transformation of Father's hand. It was unexpected and I wonder whether it was shown to indicate him losing himself to the beast within or was it more to point out that he's an old and powerful vampire? ?

The ending spoiler has me a bit worried, though. Maybe it was just my imagination but it didn't seem like Ahtar was that thrilled with the prospect of marriage when Nora announced that they have Father's permission. It feels like she might be heading for a heartbreak and a scorned Nora is an extremely dangerous individual (more so than usual).

Really looking forward to finding out more. Gorgeous work as always, Alter. Thank you for sharing it with us! ?

what's it with you and knocking it out of the park EVERY time! great work Alter!

Great entry! I agree with much of what Devianna commented. But to add onto it, I've enjoyed seeing this vulnerable side of Nora in her past. It's a great exploration of her character. This is clearly a defining time in her life and it shows.

20 hours ago, Devianna said:

You know, I was writing down a comment for your previous chapter, wanting to point out the emotional impact of the scene where Nora is punching out her reflection. But then I saw that you posted a new chapter and after reading this one I realized that the impact was MUCH stronger than I first thought. She really seems to despise not just Ahtar's father, but to some degree herself as well. At least due to what she had to do in order to manipulate him.

Yeah, great observation!

20 hours ago, Devianna said:

I know that you usually concentrate more on the aesthetics of your stories but I just have to mention how excellent the dialogue was in this episode. Nora practically rolling her eyes while going through the expected routine of "yes yes, you're so awesome" was a great addition. Especially the moment where she slips and says " you're so big", quickly correcting herself with " I meant your fingers". It really shows just how detached she is from the whole process (plus it was pretty funny ?). And of course Nora's narration of her plans for Father's demise and him being so caught up in his lust that he completely ignores the fact that she's being serious was a really nice touch.

 

I also really liked the momentary transformation of Father's hand. It was unexpected and I wonder whether it was shown to indicate him losing himself to the beast within or was it more to point out that he's an old and powerful vampire? ?

Both, he's a dangerous old vampire and Nora plays a dangerous game, but he also wants her completely for himself without Ahtar touching her.

20 hours ago, Devianna said:

The ending spoiler has me a bit worried, though. Maybe it was just my imagination but it didn't seem like Ahtar was that thrilled with the prospect of marriage when Nora announced that they have Father's permission. It feels like she might be heading for a heartbreak and a scorned Nora is an extremely dangerous individual (more so than usual).

 

Really looking forward to finding out more. Gorgeous work as always, Alter. Thank you for sharing it with us! ?

Thank you very much!

6 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

what's it with you and knocking it out of the park EVERY time! great work Alter!

Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

2 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great entry! I agree with much of what Devianna commented. But to add onto it, I've enjoyed seeing this vulnerable side of Nora in her past. It's a great exploration of her character. This is clearly a defining time in her life and it shows.

Thank you, we're approaching the final of the Hammerfell story and we'll definitely see more of that side of Nora.

she- she just left?

Great chapter ! Once again, a lot of drama, manipulation and plotting around a sex scene. I liked how she managed to keep her cool despite the ruthless, authoritative behavior of Serkis, achieving her goal of getting his permission to marry despite her hate for him. And how Serkis did the exact contrary, agreeing to something he didn't want to, and losing all control many times. The vampire lod hands was a great addition from that point of view. Out of the usual visual quality, I'd like to highlight the liquid effect on her torso and face were extremely well done. I'm not sure if her vagina folding around the fingers was ingame or not, but the result was quite natural as well. The only drawbacks I see is the typos (Sentinal instead of Sentinel in the very first screens, temped instead of tempted towards the end). They're minor, but considering the immersion breaking they induce, they should be watched out by an author of your caliber. And second, the falling from Serkis arms into the water started well but ended strange in terms of posing. But overall, the quality of the expressions, posing and background is out of this world. Amazing work ! ?

On 9/25/2020 at 2:51 AM, WANOBI12 said:

And then she walked off with him begging and I was like, "There's my girl!!"

Still, I'm a little concerned about the power he holds over her.

I'd love to see a lil, "Come to Nora" scenario ?

That's because you've missed some episodes. Nora is manipulating the count Serkis to a point he can't even imagine. And the most ironic part is that she even gave him a glimpse of what she prepared for him. You'll be surprised by the next chapters I think.

On 9/25/2020 at 11:28 PM, Devianna said:

I know that you usually concentrate more on the aesthetics of your stories but I just have to mention how excellent the dialogue was in this episode. Nora practically rolling her eyes while going through the expected routine of "yes yes, you're so awesome" was a great addition. Especially the moment where she slips and says " you're so big", quickly correcting herself with " I meant your fingers". It really shows just how detached she is from the whole process (plus it was pretty funny ?). And of course Nora's narration of her plans for Father's demise and him being so caught up in his lust that he completely ignores the fact that she's being serious was a really nice touch.

 

I also really liked the momentary transformation of Father's hand. It was unexpected and I wonder whether it was shown to indicate him losing himself to the beast within or was it more to point out that he's an old and powerful vampire? ?

The fingers part was funny indeed, because it reveals Nora is faking it. But there are a lot of clues she's doing so, so much that it makes on wonder that Serkis isn't that bright, as there's a lot of contrast between her experienced dirty talk and her initial faked innocent simpleminded behavior. Yet, not every character would be able to catch up on that.

13 hours ago, Aristoslowpoke said:

she- she just left?

Malicia : « She left because she was very hurt behind, yes. Tabi told me she was done in the poo-poo by some meany dude too, and that it hurt so much that she never wanted to do it again.

                But you know what : that's 'cause they were no experts, no.

                If they were, they would've used this ->  before. And it would've been much better.   »