Nice stuff  , Nora has sexy asshole   and sexy beast still.

Althought I thought Felldew is something from the shivering isles, damn tricky khajiits maange to get everyone  

Aria: Nora and I so need to go out for one night of fun like this.

Nice work

Just a few spots of um "bad English" but it was still awesome to read, like it always is.

I get the sense that Nora will slowly take over the minds and have the lusts of everyone wanting her in that place, then throw out that old bitch.

Although I also feel that things could get serious dark 

Who knows, well other then you Alter  

Brilliant work as always Alter Native! that body suit is from luxurious seduction if i'm not mistaken?

24 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Nora and I so need to go out for one night of fun like this.

 

Nice work

 

Just a few spots of um "bad English" but it was still awesome to read, like it always is.

 

I get the sense that Nora will slowly take over the minds and have the lusts of everyone wanting her in that place, then throw out that old bitch.

 

Although I also feel that things could get serious dark 

 

Who knows, well other then you Alter  

 

 

I doubt turning a brothel into a blood bath is beyond Nora's capabilities! tbh tex

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Nice stuff  , Nora has sexy asshole   and sexy beast still.

 

Althought I thought Felldew is something from the shivering isles, damn tricky khajiits maange to get everyone  

Thanks, I was just looking for a drug besides skooma that still exisited in the lore. 

1 hour ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Nora and I so need to go out for one night of fun like this.

 

Nice work

 

Just a few spots of um "bad English" but it was still awesome to read, like it always is.

 

I get the sense that Nora will slowly take over the minds and have the lusts of everyone wanting her in that place, then throw out that old bitch.

 

Although I also feel that things could get serious dark 

 

Who knows, well other then you Alter  

 

 

We have to see, the old lady is the owner of the Euphoria, so Nora can't just throw her out.  

I'm trying to do my best with the writing, but English is not my first language. I try to avoid typos as good as possible with spelling checkers but of course sometimes my grammar and sentences don't make sense in English.

1 hour ago, xGHoSTx said:

Brilliant work as always Alter Native! that body suit is from luxurious seduction if i'm not mistaken?

Thank you.

Yeah, I think it's from luxurious seduction, but I'm also not sure, as I did this about a year ago, but yeah should be.  

4 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, I was just looking for a drug besides skooma that still exisited in the lore. 

There are one aside of that, I think its argonian one, but skooma is the TES main drug XDD.

Felldew is something speciel, anyway Khajiits get their way  

I guess she replaces something worse the addiction  

Excellent entry, once again ^_^ 
Always amazed how well you write that part... you know... the "sex talk"  
When Nora says something like that, it sounds erotic/cool/hot, but when Rosa(or someone else of my) says it, I'm ashamed  
 

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Excellent entry, once again ^_^ 
Always amazed how well you write that part... you know... the "sex talk"  
When Nora says something like that, it sounds erotic/cool/hot, but when Rosa(or someone else of my) says it, I'm ashamed  
 

Thank you!

I think it's just you read stuff you've written yourself, you always feel different about your own writing, recording, voice etc. I think it's the same for everyone. 

I'm not sure how much I like the dirty talk during the sex scenes in my stories. They kind of do feel to silent without it, especially when you show a lot of strong emotions, but sometimes I find them silly or too much when I read other peoples work, so I'm not sure how to feel about them.

I think it also depends heavily on how much someone is into this kind of dirty talk. 

Awesome entry, Alter! It's hard to see that Nora actually learned how to do that stuff. It always just seemed so natural to her  I also did not feel like they were too long at all. I enjoyed the read! Great work!

16 hours ago, Collygon said:

Awesome entry, Alter! It's hard to see that Nora actually learned how to do that stuff. It always just seemed so natural to her  I also did not feel like they were too long at all. I enjoyed the read! Great work!

Thanks!

The idea was that she learned more then just the typical vampire seduction stuff, more like the art of Erotica and such. One of the idea of these flashback scenes is that we learn about events in her parts that gave her certain character traits that we, the reader, already know from the red headed Nora. 

One of these things is that she is good at the art of seduction, BDSM, erotic and stuff, even for a vampire and I liked the idea that she learned that at some point from a human women some time in the past.  

Even though this entry as well as the upcoming ones go a bit in a different direction there is still some of this starting idea left.

On 12/13/2018 at 3:01 AM, Jayomms said:

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I love the sex scene on the cabinet.

Super hot!

Great entry ! Loved how you played on the ambiance and on the characters conflicting interests and behaviors. Strangely, Nora definitely is an expert in human relations/negociation. ^^ Plus the erotic ambiance of the instruction and kinda voyeurism at the brothel makes the entry peculiar. And as always, very cared about graphically (the poses, including the one where she's undressing her pants impressed me). Good work !

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On 12/12/2018 at 8:57 PM, Crw said:

When Nora says something like that, it sounds erotic/cool/hot, but when Rosa(or someone else of my) says it, I'm ashamed

That's 'cause you haven't brought on that side of her, so it feels out of character. Not to mention some characters just couldn't say things the way Nora does, each one having its inhibitions, vocabulary and way of behaving (Tabrielle for example would probably freeze in situation which are just games to Nora). While we're 100% used to ear Nora dirty talking her sex partners, which goes well with her dominatrix side. 

On 12/12/2018 at 8:22 PM, Resdayn said:

There are one aside of that, I think its argonian one, but skooma is the TES main drug XDD.

 

Felldew is something speciel, anyway Khajiits get their way  

 

I guess she replaces something worse the addiction  

Felldew is indeed specific from the Shiverings, as it requires ingredients from SI. It's also more dangerous than the usual, as both withdrawal and overdose are dangerous with it. Nice point, lore specialist.

On 12/19/2018 at 4:55 AM, WANOBI12 said:

I love the sex scene on the cabinet.

Super hot!

Thank you .

On 12/19/2018 at 3:49 PM, Tirloque said:

Great entry ! Loved how you played on the ambiance and on the characters conflicting interests and behaviors. Strangely, Nora definitely is an expert in human relations/negociation. ^^ Plus the erotic ambiance of the instruction and kinda voyeurism at the brothel makes the entry peculiar. And as always, very cared about graphically (the poses, including the one where she's undressing her pants impressed me). Good work !

 

Thank you Tirloque. I think when you live long enough you just get enough experience with people to read them, even though Nora is fairly young in this part of the story, about 30 years as a vampire.

The panty pose doesn't even make sense. The lingerie she wears the scene before clearly is not meant to be worn with a panty like this, even though, admittedly I also like that shot. 

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Malicia : « So if I get long teeth I can go honey-honey with the handsome guy without paying ? That's good to know, yes.  »

You're really sympathizing a lot lately with Nora and vampires, are you sure you're not a bit jealous of Amelie?. 

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you Tirloque. I think when you live long enough you just get enough experience with people to read them, even though Nora is fairly young in this part of the story, about 30 years as a vampire.

The panty pose doesn't even make sense. The lingerie she wears the scene before clearly is not meant to be worn with a panty like this, even though, admittedly I also like that shot.

Indeed. I guess readers attention was averted somewhere else.

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

You're really sympathizing a lot lately with Nora and vampires, are you sure you're not a bit jealous of Amelie?.

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