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Chapter 4 Section 5 - Politics


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Chapter 4 Section 5 that's already half way through chapter 4. It's probably the only section that has some actual story progression. I have some troubles with the new frames around the images, please let me know if you see frames around the individual images or not. I don't see any on Opera and on Firefox I see them just sometimes... I'm not sure when they appear and when not.

 

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A complete summary of the first three chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

 


Short Summary of the previous entries.

 


At the beginning of this chapter Nora arrived in High Rock in the castle of vampire Queen Isabella. She and her most important vessels hold court, with Nora being invited as a guest. 
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It doesn't take long until Nora loses interested in the vampire assembly and starts daydreaming about her past with Ahtar one of the counts of her Queen.
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Chapter 4 Section 5 - Politics

 

 

 


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From now on Nora's wings will only show up when they look cool. I got a bit annoyed with them in the past, especially during sex scenes.

 

 


 

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A few more typos made it through this time around, but they've got nothing on the wonderful story! So amused by the scene at the beginning, of Queen Isabella calling Nora out for the storeroom racket.

I'm not so certain how to describe it, but I really like the pacing you provide with the sequential images that move along one step at a time - as I might've already said before. Feels very natural.

Highly anticipating seeing the reunion between Baron Beauvais and Lady Karlov. :smile:

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I liked a lot the dialogs of the meeting since the queen spiced it up. That kind of ease playing with powerful subjects, plus the mystery that her veil fueled during the reunion made quite the ambience. The upcoming events looks promising, and the visuals' quality is as polished as always. Well done ! :smile:

 

About the frames, there is one around the title image (and a tiny misclick with the lower cropping as well maybe ?), but not around the others. Using FF.

 

Malicia : « psst psst ! Tell the Isabella mrs she forgot about the horns, yes. The horns... :kiss: »

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Yeah ^^^^ But not your fault my friend. This was wonderful, to see that the Vampires really are in control is very intresting. Mileena wont be happy about this although her and Nora go way back too - In my Story of course

 

Mileena: Ah thats Nora Karlov for you, thinking with her pussy then her head.

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2 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

A few more typos made it through this time around, but they've got nothing on the wonderful story! So amused by the scene at the beginning, of Queen Isabella calling Nora out for the storeroom racket.

I'm not so certain how to describe it, but I really like the pacing you provide with the sequential images that move along one step at a time - as I might've already said before. Feels very natural.

Highly anticipating seeing the reunion between Baron Beauvais and Lady Karlov. :smile:

Sorry for the typos, I can't really improve on the grammar, but I try to check the check the spelling every time. 

Thanks for all your compliments!

The reunion will be part of chapter 5 which I'll post some time in the new year. 

 

47 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I liked a lot the dialogs of the meeting since the queen spiced it up. That kind of ease playing with powerful subjects, plus the mystery that her veil fueled during the reunion made quite the ambience. The upcoming events looks promising, and the visuals' quality is as polished as always. Well done ! :smile:

 

About the frames, there is one around the title image (and a tiny misclick with the lower cropping as well maybe ?), but not around the others. Using FF.

 

Malicia : « psst psst ! Tell the Isabella mrs she forgot about the horns, yes. The horns... :kiss: »

Thank you very much! I just wanted to get rid of the wings, now they'll just come when it looks cool sort of like a mini vampire lord version of her.

The frames are kind of annoying apparently you can suppress them when you post the images without any spacing for some reason this only works 90% of the time for me on FF...

She can cover the horns with her hair, but since chapter 1 I've contentiously reduced the size of her horns.^^

23 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Yeah ^^^^ But not your fault my friend. This was wonderful, to see that the Vampires really are in control is very intresting. Mileena wont be happy about this although her and Nora go way back too - In my Story of course

 

Mileena: Ah thats Nora Karlov for you, thinking with her pussy then her head.

Thanks Tex.

Looking forward for you story then :).

 

 

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Nice and interesting section :D.

 

So can we expect of an Isabella x Nora action in the next one? ;)

 

Look forward for the next ones :D.

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Yep she looks very cool with the wings but i also have gotten annoyed at them more than once on my character! :smiley:

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56 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Nice and interesting section :D.

 

So can we expect of an Isabella x Nora action in the next one? ;)

 

Look forward for the next ones :D.

Thanks.

 Yes, there will be some action, but not just sex^^.

 

24 minutes ago, xGHoSTx said:

Yep she looks very cool with the wings but i also have gotten annoyed at them more than once on my character! :smiley:

Yeah, especially screenshots during sex, it either hides the whole action or some poses like missionary don't work at all^^.

 

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Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this part. I know I sound like a broken record, but I really like your parts that feature more writing. :smile: The dialogue was funny, informative, and it set the pace perfectly. Love it! :smiley:

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4 hours ago, Cema said:

Your vampire stories are really nice.

Thank you :).

2 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this part. I know I sound like a broken record, but I really like your parts that feature more writing. :smile: The dialogue was funny, informative, and it set the pace perfectly. Love it! :smiley:

Thank you.

I know what you mean, but I'm just not that comfortable writing really long dialogues in English. But I've improved over writing the last chapters and I've noticed that I'm consistently writing more and more dialogue with each chapter.

Keep in mind that compared to you I don't have any of the narrative elements (gestures and facial expressions) in my writing ;).

 

 

 

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2 hours ago, Alter Native said:
4 hours ago, Collygon said:

 I really like your parts that feature more writing. :smile: The dialogue was funny, informative, and it set the pace perfectly. Love it! :smiley:

 

I know what you mean, but I'm just not that comfortable writing really long dialogues in English. But I've improved over writing the last chapters and I've noticed that I'm consistently writing more and more dialogue with each chapter.

 

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