> Excellent work as always 

What happen here?

No matter how hard you hide your wishes and desires or deny them to yourself, they will come out again in your dreams.

Even a vampire as old (or young) as Nora is not exempt from this.

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4 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Excellent work as always 

Thank you!

4 hours ago, killer905 said:

What happen here?

 

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Up for interpretation at this point, she is clearly dreaming.

Last time we saw that version of Nora (with the huge wings and the red back) was in Chapter 8 Section 9, another vision/dream.

9 minutes ago, Miauzi said:

No matter how hard you hide your wishes and desires or deny them to yourself, they will come out again in your dreams.

Even a vampire as old (or young) as Nora is not exempt from this.

 

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Thank you!

Yeah, that section certainly offered a lot of potential to return characters that are unlikely to ever show up again/ appear in that constellation.

3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Up for interpretation at this point, she is clearly dreaming.

Last time we saw that version of Nora (with the huge wings and the red back) was in Chapter 8 Section 9, another vision/dream.

 I see ❤️

At first I was kinda confused but then things got Hot Really Fast! That first scene.... OH MY GOAAA!!!! An Amazing Dream Indeed! 

I liked how the fact it's a dream is a twist the reader only understands after a while. Now, aside of the beautifully contrasted/lighted and the composition of the scene, in other words, the visuals, scenario-wise this chapter could basically be called a filler. People appreciate the darkness of your stories as much as their adult content. So don't let those two elements get too much apart from each other, that would be my suggestion, if I may.

« You know, it sees Nora's very wealthy and very rich. 'cause even when she awakes, she has covers. And those are very difficult to find nowadays, yes.  »

On 11/11/2023 at 11:38 PM, Jay-Omms said:

At first I was kinda confused but then things got Hot Really Fast! That first scene.... OH MY GOAAA!!!! An Amazing Dream Indeed! 

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Jay-Omms: That's RIGHT... Boys... I'm here...

 

 

Thank you glad you liked it!

On 11/20/2023 at 8:08 PM, Tirloque said:

I liked how the fact it's a dream is a twist the reader only understands after a while. Now, aside of the beautifully contrasted/lighted and the composition of the scene, in other words, the visuals, scenario-wise this chapter could basically be called a filler. People appreciate the darkness of your stories as much as their adult content. So don't let those two elements get too much apart from each other, that would be my suggestion, if I may.

 

 

Thanks!

I'd argue one immediately sees that it's a dream because Nora is walking in sun light which would usually cook her  ...

Even though this is primarily a sexy time section there is still some setup and hints at future content, however the primary goal was "filler sexy time".