Great work I'm liking the desperation they're facing. Keeps you on the edge wondering what are they gonna do next. 

11 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Great work I'm liking the desperation they're facing. Keeps you on the edge wondering what are they gonna do next. 

Thank you! 

Well done! This is developing into quite the complex set of events. Thomas' hopelessness really enforces the gravity of the situation; it's rare to see his confidence so shaken. Keep it up!

Oh wow, that's great job, for sure! As always, work with light and shadows are amazing.

I'm curious you using some specific lightsource? Is it CK-custom?

Marvelous as always.

I admire how you manage to turn choices into dilemmas, each significant choice in a vampire nobility's career coming with its share of risks and secrets ; evolving into some sort of chess survival game. Eliminating an opponent often comes at a price in terms of collateral damage. And with Nora believing the Duchess should enter the secret, she makes a risky bet as well ; as she could certainly use the occasion to take down Lenora... but also her temporary accomplices. Nora proving her loyalty towards her is a good move in that sense.

Technically, I see you used the occasion to extend the pass in your new custom location. All interiors are absolutely great, and the photography remains into dark reds, blacks and bright contrasting flesh tones even during the flashback. Good implementation of the sex scene and fights as well, achieving a steady pace in terms of content. The confrontation between Thomas and Lenora wasn't perfectly fluid though, but nothing major. The amount of grammar mistakes is also decreasing.

Anyway, the scenario of your works is really becoming quite flavorful ; and you do vary more the content types compared to your first chapters. Very good entry ! ?

  « That thing Nora does, waking statues by kissing them on the head, that's very handy, yes.

                 I wish I could do that with my teddies.

                 Also, Thomas only goes honey-honey with meany gals. The good ones he kiss them bye-bye on the neck.  »

11 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

  « That thing Nora does, waking statues by kissing them on the head, that's very handy, yes.

                 I wish I could do that with my teddies.

 

                 

 

                 Also, Thomas only goes honey-honey with meany gals. The good ones he kiss them bye-bye on the neck.  »

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19 hours ago, Collygon said:

Well done! This is developing into quite the complex set of events. Thomas' hopelessness really enforces the gravity of the situation; it's rare to see his confidence so shaken. Keep it up!

Thank you!

This entry was kind of the explanation why the events in the last entries unwinded the way they did.

10 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh wow, that's great job, for sure! As always, work with light and shadows are amazing.

I'm curious you using some specific lightsource? Is it CK-custom?

Thank you!

All locations in this entry were custom edits of other mods and I did indeed mostly change the lightning of it.

Besides that I can only recommend custom light for getting good lightning. 

For the Lenora-Thomas part Nora was not present so I could use her with custom light attached to her as a "torch" basically allowing me to finetune the light better.

But of course you can only do that if your char is not part of the scene.

10 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Marvelous as always.

Thank you Eva, glad you like it and to see you around on this blog.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I admire how you manage to turn choices into dilemmas, each significant choice in a vampire nobility's career coming with its share of risks and secrets ; evolving into some sort of chess survival game. Eliminating an opponent often comes at a price in terms of collateral damage. And with Nora believing the Duchess should enter the secret, she makes a risky bet as well ; as she could certainly use the occasion to take down Lenora... but also her temporary accomplices. Nora proving her loyalty towards her is a good move in that sense.

Thank you! 

This is a bit of my philosophy behind these kinds of stories. In the end most of my characters are some sort of evil, ambitious and selfish and I don't like the idea of them "winning" without sacrificing anything.

Glad some people noticed and understood the complexity of the situation, which is always difficult to do in these kinds of screenshot stories. 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Technically, I see you used the occasion to extend the pass in your new custom location. All interiors are absolutely great, and the photography remains into dark reds, blacks and bright contrasting flesh tones even during the flashback. Good implementation of the sex scene and fights as well, achieving a steady pace in terms of content. The confrontation between Thomas and Lenora wasn't perfectly fluid though, but nothing major. The amount of grammar mistakes is also decreasing.

Thank you! 

I as already explained to Crw I only edited existing locations, none of them are part of Karlov Manor, so the location credit goes to the original authors.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Anyway, the scenario of your works is really becoming quite flavorful ; and you do vary more the content types compared to your first chapters. Very good entry ! ?

Thank you!

Parts of this entries were created years back when I noticed my content getting stale, around the time chapter 5&6 were posted so your feedback is always appreciated and used in my next entries, but it might be years until we see it.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

  « That thing Nora does, waking statues by kissing them on the head, that's very handy, yes.

                 I wish I could do that with my teddies.

 

                 

 

                 Also, Thomas only goes honey-honey with meany gals. The good ones he kiss them bye-bye on the neck.  »

Yes you're right. But this time you missed a detail, Nora called the police, like you suggested a couple of entries back  .

yeah, always thought Lenora was a vindictive little bitch! i hope the duchess does side with them for their sakes!

44 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Thank you! 

This is a bit of my philosophy behind these kinds of stories. In the end most of my characters are some sort of evil, ambitious and selfish and I don't like the idea of them "winning" without sacrificing anything.

Glad some people noticed and understood the complexity of the situation, which is always difficult to do in these kinds of screenshot stories. 

Story first !

I take due note of the locations being "only" customized though. Still, the result is there.

44 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Yes you're right. But this time you missed a detail, Nora called the police, like you suggested a couple of entries back  .

« I'm very glad she finally listened to expert advice, yes. 

               But I had advised that before they went crazy and killed everybody. Now I'm not so sure I'd call the police in their stead, no.  »

16 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

yeah, always thought Lenora was a vindictive little bitch! i hope the duchess does side with them for their sakes!

Careful what you wish for  .

Such a big opposite tone from the previous chapter which i love. WHile the previous chapter was pretty action packed, with boss music playing in my mind as i was reading that chapter - this one, its all silent, no music, taking in the aftermath of what happened.

I really love the quiet moments in this chapter of just shots of Nora around the study. I also love her silently walking through the remains of their rampage, which while silent and quiet, one could imagine the insane chaos the night before (especially that you showed more dead than actually killed in the previous chapter )