Chapter 6 Section 8 - Sacrificed Promises
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Short Summary of the previous section
The last couple of entries told the story of a much younger Nora in the Imperial City.
She meets Madam Cuvier, the owner of the Euphoria, one of the finest brothels and establishments in the Imperial City.
Nora starts to work for her in exchange for a favor at a later time and together with the human prostitute Yvonne and offers high paying customers the experience and eroticism of a vampire in a secure environment.
It doesn't take long until their is more between Yvonne and Nora than just the common work.
During their relationship Nora learns about Yvonne Felldew drug addiction.
Having lost hope to get rid of her addiction Yvonne cuts her own throat hoping on Nora to turn her into a vampire.
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Chapter 6 Section 8 - Sacrificed Promises
There are a couple of repeated images from last section to give the full picture of the first scene.
This marks the end of the Imperial City flashback scene and we continue with red headed Nora for the rest of this chapter as well as chapter 7. The whole Imperial City story was planned to be a lot shorter, but as usual things took much longer then initially planned.
I assume the Yvonne turning felt a bit unsatisfying to some of you with Nora deciding to not turn Yvonne and this guy popping up to save the day (or the night or whatever). I still like that decision, but things should have been better set up and hinted in the last entry. The Nora not turning Yvonne was imo set up properly (also I don't want to have a blog about a single mom ), but I kind of cheesed my way out of it by not showing the conversation between Yvonne and Ethan that left him so impressed that he turned Yvonne. Writing dialog is already kind of hard to me... and a scene like this is very difficult to get and feel right.
The Jonas ending also hinted on a couple of things that I'll tell in some future entries. I couple of month ago I changed some of the scenes and added Jonas to the final scene. He was supposed to brag about having sex with Nora while the other human is just her dinner, which was supposed to be the sex scene of this section.
I intended to show how the two got to know each other but had to move it to another chapter as it was way too long to be squeezed into this entry. Also chapter 6 was supposed to tell the story of Nora, Yvonne and how Nora becoming rich by inheriting the Euphoria.
So this is something that'll come some time in the future, probably Chapter 10 together with a couple of other Jonas-Nora flashback entries. I've some really nice ideas for their relationship (or something like this, they are both to fucked up for a decent relationship) and by now Jonas is probably my favorite male character of my blog, even though you guys have barely seen him besides this entry and chapter 1.
I hope you guys enjoyed the Imperial City flashback story nonetheless have a great week.
Edited by Alter Native
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