This is an interesting series you've got going here, definitely caught my interest. A shame you don't plan on adding much writing; but that's okay, I followed along just fine. Great work! Looking forward to more!

Edit by Alter Native: This comment is referring to the old version of Chapter 1 Section 2

Very enjoyable to read and (especially) to watch.  Thank you.

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Thank you. There is going to be more writing in upcoming parts (section 5 and following). 

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In the first couple of sections the story features a few things like rape and creature sex that I no longer feel comfortable posting and creating

Thank you for these words. Highly appreciated.

And, of course, compliments for excellent blog entry.

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Wow I'm liking this story more and more.

Cant wait for the next part

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BloodRayne Inspired scene ^ _ ^ Amazing 
Exquisite attention to detail and lighting.
One question, rain-weathe -r in-game effect? Or modified in somehow?

Pretty badass section  

Great work.

Great remake ! Going in a completely different way that the original though, but the action scene felt quite badass vs the necromancers, and quite intense against the creature. And amazing job on the blood effects, I think you must've added some photoshopping to your usual overlays (for the blood dripping down in the air rather than on her chin, for example. Was that a resized blood template ?). Not bad for a pony !  It mixed up quite well with the ENB's rain effects, some beautiful shots here. The fight felt a bit silent however, but we know your philosophy about avoiding to intrude the image. Quite the show, regardless.

Malicia : « I've read the entry too, and she killed a lot of meany things alright, just like Tabi would.... But no panther, no. Tabi would've killed it too I think. So if Tabi can, Nora should be able to, you see ?  »

Edit by Malicia : This comment is referring to the version where Nora is the one putting her sword into things.

1 hour ago, Crw said:

BloodRayne Inspired scene ^ _ ^ Amazing 
Exquisite attention to detail and lighting.
One question, rain-weathe -r in-game effect? Or modified in somehow?

Thanks! Her combat style is actually inspired by BloodRayne and also this:

The weather and the lightnings are ingame. but are static objects placed and moved.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Pretty badass section  

 

Great work.

 

Thanks!

47 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Great remake ! Going in a completely different way that the original though, but the action scene felt quite badass vs the necromancers, and quite intense against the creature. And amazing job on the blood effects, I think you must've added some photoshopping to your usual overlays (for the blood dripping down in the air rather than on her chin, for example. Was that a resized blood template ?). Not bad for a pony !  It mixed up quite well with the ENB's rain effects, some beautiful shots here. The fight felt a bit silent however, but we know your philosophy about avoiding to intrude the image. Quite the show, regardless.

 

Malicia : « I've read the entry too, and she killed a lot of meany things alright, just like Tabi would.... But no panther, no. Tabi would've killed it too I think. So if Tabi can, Nora should be able to, you see ?  »

Edit by Malicia : This comment is referring to the version where Nora is the one putting her sword into things.

Thanks Tirloque!

Going a completely different way was the main point of the rework. It wasn't just about the screenshot quality, but also the content.

All the blood effects etc. are ingame. The one her chin is a drip model from another mod retextured and moved with Jaxons. I'm terrible at photoshopping, even though photoshopping would probably be easier^^. 

Amelie @Malicia: Still complaining?! Even though Mistress risks her life killing evil monsters so you can sleep at night?

8 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks Tirloque!

Going a completely different way was the main point of the rework. It wasn't just about the screenshot quality, but also the content.

All the blood effects etc. are ingame. The one her chin is a drip model from another mod retextured and moved with Jaxons. I'm terrible at photoshopping, even though photoshopping would probably be easier^^.

Hmm, that's ingenuous. But hey, we do what we know to. I haven't got the knowledge to use custom textures that way, so I use photoshop... But I don't think I could've have made better than you, it looks great !

8 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Amelie @Malicia: Still complaining?! Even though Mistress risks her life killing evil monsters so you can sleep at night?

Malicia : « I'm not complaining no, I was just trying to make sure you don't finish like this ->  you see ? Thank Nora for killing the ugly monster anyway. »

Woah. These were some of the coolest screenshots I've ever seen. The ambiance was incredible! And those blood effects? Holy moly! Blown away. 

Hello Wallpaper

I love this darker Nora, the way she threw that guy out and threw him a health potion oh it was perfect.

Aria: Yep, I'm not going anywhere near her, even if you payed me 10,000 Septims.

10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, that's ingenuous. But hey, we do what we know to. I haven't got the knowledge to use custom textures that way, so I use photoshop... But I don't think I could've have made better than you, it looks great !

Malicia : « I'm not complaining no, I was just trying to make sure you don't finish like this ->  you see ? Thank Nora for killing the ugly monster anyway. »

The only thing I'm somewhat able to do in photoshop is extending changing existing blood effects, but I need something to work with first. That's why I use retextured waterfalls and sprays as placeable blood sprays. 

Amelie: Mistress takes good care of Midnight so there is no reason to be worried. 

3 hours ago, Collygon said:

Woah. These were some of the coolest screenshots I've ever seen. The ambiance was incredible! And those blood effects? Holy moly! Blown away. 

Thank you Collygon  

48 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Hello Wallpaper

 

I love this darker Nora, the way she threw that guy out and threw him a health potion oh it was perfect.

 

Aria: Yep, I'm not going anywhere near her, even if you payed me 10,000 Septims.

Thanks. I'm not sure where you saw a health potion though.

Wow ! love you work.. Really I do...  Keep going..?

5 hours ago, death8981 said:

Wow ! love you work.. Really I do...  Keep going..?

Thank you!

your pictures are incredible, there's so much going on in each one, the lighting and enb really set a dark tone, but then random things pop out and grab the eye! It hurts my brain to try and figure out how you do it so I give up. I'll just enjoy ?

4 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

your pictures are incredible, there's so much going on in each one, the lighting and enb really set a dark tone, but then random things pop out and grab the eye! It hurts my brain to try and figure out how you do it so I give up. I'll just enjoy ?

Thank you very much. Getting a lot of the little things right can be a lot of work, glad people notice them. 

Thanks  

Here late because LL doesn't notify of old post edits!

The BloodRayne reminiscence is strong in this one indeed, very intense action episode. What did you use to get the lightning effects to flash?
Also - I'm quite curious how the original episode used to go. Am hoping for a 'Legacy' version post someday, as C1S1 had!

7 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

Here late because LL doesn't notify of old post edits!

The BloodRayne reminiscence is strong in this one indeed, very intense action episode. What did you use to get the lightning effects to flash?
Also - I'm quite curious how the original episode used to go. Am hoping for a 'Legacy' version post someday, as C1S1 had!

Thank you, I redid almost the whole first chapter of my blog, as I was not liking the scenes and the entry it provided. Part of it was Section 2 and 3 that badly needed a replacement. That's the reason why there isn't a legacy version. 

The old version was basically, Nora get's the letter from Harkon to kill a necromancer, as soon as she finds him he controls her mind (necromancer and Nora is undead) and rapes her a couple of times. There was also some sex with a gargoyle that eventually frees her and rapes her again. 

She flees to a nearby cave where she-.... gets raped again, this time by some evil vampires.

Eventually she falls to Blackreach and becomes the falmer of section 4. 

While I know that some people enjoy this kind of rape content (The entries were quite popular despite the low image quality.), it wasn't something I wanted to support and be associated with. Especially when it's the entry to my blog, which is completely different than the typically helpless girl getting raped over and over again (as in some other stories or posts). 

Back when I did this I was following what was popular on LoversLab, but eventually I found my own style of story and got more and more disgusted by the old entries. That's why they had to go.

Also, there is still some/ rape and or forced sex in this blog, but (imo) the framing is much different. (See something like 2.6, 4.6, 1.1, or the most recent one 6.2). For example there is almost no physical violence involved, it plays more of the vampire seduction trope. Also female enforced sexual content is perceived differently than male enforced one (it shouldn't be, but it (still) is . Also this whole vampire seduction thing can be seen as forced sex, but that is applicable to a lot of vampire stories).

Also bestiality is also something I don't like to support (even though I have two entries now that do that, but they'll stay the only one. The whole panther thing was just to well of a fit (match ?) to miss out on it), in both entries the panther added more than just the sex itself. 

So... it's gone for good and there won't be a legacy version.

The lightnings are custom objects placed in the background, using some images I found on Deviant Art. 

Epic as hell!

Great re-read

Mileena: Impressive, most impressive