you keep reminding me of how very devious Nora truly is! awesome work alter!

Nice Work! Nora looks amazing in this chapter, her hair and that outfit was a great look. And now It's revenge time for Nora. 

Nice work! Those scenes were set up really well. And the shots without any dialogue at the start were surprisingly informative. The shots and expressions captured everything I needed to know and more. The lack of dialogue also added a layer in intrigue.

While reading the second spoiler though, I found myself a bit lost with all the different jumps. I could tell something was up with the shots on the bracelet, but found myself confused trying to recall its significance. Maybe I just forgot. Once we got the flashback to it though, the pace really picked up and I'm loving where this left off! :O

Great Work!
You do it better and better

9 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

you keep reminding me of how very devious Nora truly is! awesome work alter!

Thanks!

6 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Nice Work! Nora looks amazing in this chapter, her hair and that outfit was a great look. And now It's revenge time for Nora. 

Thank you very much! 

The Hammerfell costumes are probably my favorite part about this flashback.

6 hours ago, Collygon said:

Nice work! Those scenes were set up really well. And the shots without any dialogue at the start were surprisingly informative. The shots and expressions captured everything I needed to know and more. The lack of dialogue also added a layer in intrigue.

Thank you!

6 hours ago, Collygon said:

While reading the second spoiler though, I found myself a bit lost with all the different jumps. I could tell something was up with the shots on the bracelet, but found myself confused trying to recall its significance. Maybe I just forgot. Once we got the flashback to it though, the pace really picked up and I'm loving where this left off!

So if you didn't understand it, then 99 % of people didn't understand it either... The idea was that she is preparing the assassination by poisoning them beforehand (The poison stops the self healing of vampires).

In order to do so they need to drink it, probably together with some blood to not notice it. Now, since the poison is top secret and very few people besides the Queen and the Duchess know about it, the Duchess only gives it to Nora shortly before the assassination. So the poison =(curse of Bal) was in the fake ruby of the bracelet that she broke in front of Ahtar's father and his sons in order to poison the blood.

Now if this is the story, the question is how do you present it in an interesting way. Just telling the plan in the beginning and seeing the flawless execution afterwards didn't seem that interesting, that's why I decided to let her act first and fill in the gaps afterwards with the quick dialogue between the Duchess and Nora... but maybe this was too much... not sure.

1 hour ago, Nonseen said:

Great Work!
You do it better and better

Thank you very much! I actually did the past two entries fairly recently and this entry is a bit older, but yes this blog has come far since I started in 2016.

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

So if you didn't understand it, then 99 % of people didn't understand it either... The idea was that she is preparing the assassination by poisoning them beforehand (The poison stops the self healing of vampires).

In order to do so they need to drink it, probably together with some blood to not notice it. Now, since the poison is top secret and very few people besides the Queen and the Duchess know about it, the Duchess only gives it to Nora shortly before the assassination. So the poison =(curse of Bal) was in the fake ruby of the bracelet that she broke in front of Ahtar's father and his sons in order to poison the blood.

 

Now if this is the story, the question is how do you present it in an interesting way. Just telling the plan in the beginning and seeing the flawless execution afterwards didn't seem that interesting, that's why I decided to let her act first and fill in the gaps afterwards with the quick dialogue between the Duchess and Nora... but maybe this was too much... not sure.

Nah, I did understand that much. Once the flashback hit, I instantly figured it all out. It was the lead up to that point where I was confused. I think if that bracelet was introduced a chapter to two ago, and the flashback was to that moment, I'd have been less confused. I think the problem came from a lack of recognition. I only knew the bracelet was important because it was intentionally photographed, rather than a snippet in the back of my head pestering me to remember. I think the way you did it was very good and I enjoyed the impact of the moment of realization. I hope that makes sense and I'm sure it's just me being dumb and not catching on quick enough ^.^

6 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Nah, I did understand that much. Once the flashback hit, I instantly figured it all out. It was the lead up to that point where I was confused. I think if that bracelet was introduced a chapter to two ago, and the flashback was to that moment, I'd have been less confused. I think the problem came from a lack of recognition. I only knew the bracelet was important because it was intentionally photographed, rather than a snippet in the back of my head pestering me to remember. I think the way you did it was very good and I enjoyed the impact of the moment of realization. I hope that makes sense and I'm sure it's just me being dumb and not catching on quick enough ^.^

So maybe I'm now forgetting things, but I don't think I introduced the bracelet beforehand. 

The poison get's introduced and discussed first with Thomas in Chapter 9 Section 4, the assassination gets introduced in Chapter 9 Section 5 and I don't think I ever mention a bracelet there... but I could be wrong too, I wrote this chapter a year ago and knew the whole time that the bracelet would contain the poison.

Oh damn! Seems we going to have some bloody action in further! I mean, all of your "scenes" are bloody at some point Can't wait for it!
Guess it was pretyy complicated to set such ammout of actors in ssame scene and make it look good! When Im trying to do something like this I alwasy feel like they are static -_- But in your case it looks really great! 
And yea, hte more we learn about hamerfell vampirese the more I think that this pals know how to have fun
Great job, Alter!

Great ambiance in this one. Must've been a pain posing all those NPCs, and having them align that well for the sex scenes. The backgrounds, outfits, lighting and expressions were a constant pleasure for the eyes, and so was the layout at some moments. Also noticed what looked a some semen photoshopping mixed with slavetats textures at the end of the son's blowjob, with the first shot (the one with the liquid curve) being really well done. Some typos still, though. And while the reader understands there's some kind of poisoning going on with the blood cup she serves to the three Serhats, the exact link with the bracelet can only be guessed from the Duchess' explanation. I think it would've been clearer if you showed us the unbroken bracelet first (or maybe during the breaking). Anyway, quite the sensual yet dangerous scenes as always. And an intrigue as deadly as seductive. Awaiting for the spectacular conclusion ! 

Malicia : « You know, I've very figured why their eyes were red : it's because they're always going honey-honey and touching blood all the time, you see ?

                So they've caught AIDS, yes. 

               They should stop being meany and very start curing themselves, otherwise they gonna have problems.  »

On 10/18/2020 at 8:24 AM, Crw said:

Oh damn! Seems we going to have some bloody action in further! I mean, all of your "scenes" are bloody at some point Can't wait for it!
Guess it was pretyy complicated to set such ammout of actors in ssame scene and make it look good! When Im trying to do something like this I alwasy feel like they are static -_- But in your case it looks really great! 
And yea, hte more we learn about hamerfell vampirese the more I think that this pals know how to have fun
Great job, Alter!

Thank you!

As long as you don't have crashes large crowds are not that big of a problem.

On 10/18/2020 at 12:43 PM, Tirloque said:

Great ambiance in this one. Must've been a pain posing all those NPCs, and having them align that well for the sex scenes.

Honestly the reason the sex scene takes place in a separate room is so that I don't have to pose the crowds during that time. Otherwise, I'd have to set them up again when doing the sex scene.

On 10/18/2020 at 12:43 PM, Tirloque said:

The backgrounds, outfits, lighting and expressions were a constant pleasure for the eyes, and so was the layout at some moments. Also noticed what looked a some semen photoshopping mixed with slavetats textures at the end of the son's blowjob, with the first shot (the one with the liquid curve) being really well done.

Thank you! I think this is the only time I followed @WANOBI12 cum Photoshop tutorial and I was pretty happy with the results, even though the whole thing is quite a lot of work and using the slavetats only version already yields pretty good results. 

Not perfect, but good enough for the little work it takes to apply them.

On 10/18/2020 at 12:43 PM, Tirloque said:

Some typos still, though. And while the reader understands there's some kind of poisoning going on with the blood cup she serves to the three Serhats, the exact link with the bracelet can only be guessed from the Duchess' explanation. I think it would've been clearer if you showed us the unbroken bracelet first (or maybe during the breaking).

Yeah I understand. See the comment I made towards Collygon, also during the breaking is not that easy to do in a screenshot, maybe a comic works better for that.

On 10/18/2020 at 12:43 PM, Tirloque said:

Anyway, quite the sensual yet dangerous scenes as always. And an intrigue as deadly as seductive. Awaiting for the spectacular conclusion ! 

Thanks!

On 10/18/2020 at 12:43 PM, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « You know, I've very figured why their eyes were red : it's because they're always going honey-honey and touching blood all the time, you see ?

                So they've caught AIDS, yes. 

               They should stop being meany and very start curing themselves, otherwise they gonna have problems.  »

Yes, keep it coming, I think you're onto something here!

First of all; I know the effort for creating scenes with that many npcs ... kudos! Strangely all my npcs seem to reset after I used maybe 10 poses the same time which is really annoying. Do you have a trick here? =O

Second; I love how you managed the complot - at first I was confused about the jewelry on the ground, again and again in focus. Suprised me quiet well! All in all, great chapter ? love to see more in the future!

6 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

First of all; I know the effort for creating scenes with that many npcs ... kudos! Strangely all my npcs seem to reset after I used maybe 10 poses the same time which is really annoying. Do you have a trick here? =O

Always disable their Ai (tai) via console. That should freeze them in place. Also disable the collisions via tcl (very important) that also helps in them not moving. I usually shoot all scenes with collisions disabled and use "moveto player" to move NPCs around.

Besides that it's just a lot of patience.

6 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Second; I love how you managed the complot - at first I was confused about the jewelry on the ground, again and again in focus. Suprised me quiet well! All in all, great chapter ? love to see more in the future!

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it.

Fantastic Scenes! 

All those people!! That took some doin!!

Sex scene was epic!!

Can't wait to see her dispense some dbags!!

-Holy cow! My heart stopped when I saw the shot with all of those guests! My Skyrim would’ve crashed from that!

That said, did you have them placed in CK first then teleported there, or did you go there and “placeatme” your NPCs in?

-When Nora asked him not to be rough shoving his cock in her mouth, for a moment I thought her fear was the poison  could spread from his blood to his semen. Was that the reason or something else I missed?

13 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-Holy cow! My heart stopped when I saw the shot with all of those guests! My Skyrim would’ve crashed from that!

That said, did you have them placed in CK first then teleported there, or did you go there and “placeatme” your NPCs in?

Thanks. All guests are placed using placeatme but were previously created using the CK. 

My Skyrim tends to be pretty stable in story scenes, I can't remember the last crash I had while shooting a story. Large crowds are just really time consuming. I'm thinking about trying Billbords for my next large crowd.

13 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-When Nora asked him not to be rough shoving his cock in her mouth, for a moment I thought her fear was the poison  could spread from his blood to his semen. Was that the reason or something else I missed?

I think there are plenty of other reasons she doesn't what a guys cock in her mouth, especially if she hates the guys the cock is attached to.  

On 10/24/2020 at 9:59 AM, Alter Native said:

Thanks. All guests are placed using placeatme but were previously created using the CK. 

My Skyrim tends to be pretty stable in story scenes, I can't remember the last crash I had while shooting a story. Large crowds are just really time consuming. I'm thinking about trying Billbords for my next large crowd.

What’s your CPU and system RAM?

I was shooting a scene last night and after placing six or seven NPCs, my computer kept freezing

2 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

What’s your CPU and system RAM?

I was shooting a scene last night and after placing six or seven NPCs, my computer kept freezing

I don't think your hardware is the issue here. That scene was done on a 2014 high end laptop, but a laptop nonetheless. 

Maybe check script heavy mods of which I don't have any installed. Including sexlab. Also does you computer freeze or just Skyrim? 

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

I don't think your hardware is the issue here. That scene was done on a 2014 high end laptop, but a laptop nonetheless. 

Maybe check script heavy mods of which I don't have any installed. Including sexlab. Also does you computer freeze or just Skyrim? 

Rarely freezes. I’ll go through and see if I have un-needed stuff. Is just animation related scripts or should I also turn off mods with quest based scripts?

3 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Rarely freezes. I’ll go through and see if I have un-needed stuff. Is just animation related scripts or should I also turn off mods with quest based scripts?

I'm not sure, at this point my game is vanilla+outfits+ utility for what I need for my stories. I don't have any quests or gameplay mods.

If you are on MO you can maybe think about a story profile with only those mods running.

Also in case you are on xxl FNIS it's known to cause instabilities. 

was für ein unglaubliches Outfit das Nora trägt