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Chapter 3 Section 4 - Break of Night


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The next entry of the third chapter of Nora's story. After escaping the Dawnguard Nora returns home to Vasil's castle...

 

Story Overview

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A complete summary of the first two chapters of this story as well as short character summaries can be found here.

 

 

 

 

Short summary of the previous entries.

 


On her way to the Imperial city Nora stopped at an old sepulcher at the border of Skyrim to Cyrodiil to find some rest during daytime, at which she was surprised and captured by the Dawnguard.
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Nora finally made her escape by tricking one of the Dawnguard scholars into untying her.
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She now returns to her friend's castle, the vampire Count Vasil Vondrack.

 

 

 

 


Chapter 3 Section 4 - Break of Night

 


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Wow, 118 screenshots and nothing is happening... like nothing, no story no sex no nothing...
The first scene had a bit of story, the rest is basically only filler. Originally chapter 3 was supposed to have 10 entries which was cut down to 7 with each of the entries being longer
and some stuff cut. For example this entry was section 5 & 6 from the previous outline combined, which would have resulted in two really short entries with even less stuff happening... well chapter 4 is going to be better... a lot better.

 

Btw. guys, I just noticed after 20 entries that I was constantly writing summery when I meant summary... English is not my first language, please say something when you find stupid mistakes like this.

 

 

 

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I love how you did her changing and getting dressed scene with the the hair changes an etc, that was awesome. :)  

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Aria: Damn Nora's a freak, a freak just like me xD

Great job, even though not much happend, there was plenty to see and understand.

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Nora changing hairstyles back and forth within 5 minutes... women. :crying laughter:
I don't mind the slowed pace, watching Nora tidy up and dress up is quite relaxing in it own way. Quite amusing seeing Vasil enjoying the company of men too. :)

The screenshot sequencing was just a bit confusing for me, when she plays with her slave-girl (what was her name again?) on the bed and when dressing up. A "what's she doing?" sort of confusion. It's probably just difficult to portray the small actions with static images - like Nora's small gestures, moving between rooms, inspecting something minor, etc.

I'm really keen for Chapter 4 hearing your excitement and confidence in it. On the 'summary' item - hey, I did try to hint it before! :P

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It's Amelie. ;)

 

What I'm wondering about it what's that S shaped tailed tool. Talk about a mysterious plot slowly unraveling itself... O_o

But jokes aside, that little Vasil talk was a happening by itself. Awaiting for more ! :)

 

PS : about the typos, It could be seen as pretentious to underline writing mistakes don't you think ? Besides, a good chunk of us aren't more natively english than you are, and Sumerian civilization is really cool, so... :P

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I love how you did her changing and getting dressed scene with the the hair changes an etc, that was awesome. :)

 

Thanks :)

 

Even though there wasn't really progress this entry was still awsome! :D

 

Thank you, glad you liked it.

 

Aria: Damn Nora's a freak, a freak just like me xD

 

Great job, even though not much happend, there was plenty to see and understand.

 

Thanks, I guess you can not avoid being a freak after 400 years alive.

 

 

Nora changing hairstyles back and forth within 5 minutes... women. :crying laughter:

I don't mind the slowed pace, watching Nora tidy up and dress up is quite relaxing in it own way. Quite amusing seeing Vasil enjoying the company of men too. :)

 

The screenshot sequencing was just a bit confusing for me, when she plays with her slave-girl (what was her name again?) on the bed and when dressing up. A "what's she doing?" sort of confusion. It's probably just difficult to portray the small actions with static images - like Nora's small gestures, moving between rooms, inspecting something minor, etc.

 

I'm really keen for Chapter 4 hearing your excitement and confidence in it. On the 'summary' item - hey, I did try to hint it before! :P

 

Vasil liking man too is just a consequence of the world. I think when you are as old as all these vampires you'll probably try to spice your sexual live up from time to time because you've had everything else so often. The same is true of Nora. I like to think of her as hetero but still to lesbian content from time to time. All this doesn't matter anyways for all the vampires, they just want to have fun and rules almost don't exist ;).

 

You're probably right about the sequencing of the screenshots. When you know how things look ingame you don't think about showing the rooms and how the actors get their, but you're right.

The problem is a bit that showing an actor walk to a certain room is not very exciting or interesting.

 

Thanks for the summary hint, I just didn't get it then, thank you :).

 

It's Amelie. ;)

 

What I'm wondering about it what's that S shaped tailed tool. Talk about a mysterious plot slowly unraveling itself... O_o

But jokes aside, that little Vasil talk was a happening by itself. Awaiting for more ! :)

 

PS : about the typos, It could be seen as pretentious to underline writing mistakes don't you think ? Besides, a good chunk of us aren't more natively english than you are, and Sumerian civilization is really cool, so... :P

 

Thanks :). I personally don't think of pointing out spelling mistakes as pretentious, as long as someone is not a total nazi about that... It's just that I got the summary wrong from the beginning and I technically know how to spell that word. I can't really fix spelling mistakes in the images of the story itself easily, but I am happy to correct mistakes elsewhere. 

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Thanks :). I personally don't think of pointing out spelling mistakes as pretentious, as long as someone is not a total nazi about that... It's just that I got the summary wrong from the beginning and I technically know how to sepll that word. I can't really fix spelling mistakes in the images of the story itself easily, but I am happy to correct mistakes elsewhere.

Good.

 

Then it'll be one hour of spanking by the Dawnguard officer, and I don't want to catch you skipping proofreading anymore. neostranger.gif

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PS : about the typos, It could be seen as pretentious to underline writing mistakes don't you think ? Besides, a good chunk of us aren't more natively english than you are, and Sumerian civilization is really cool, so... :P

Mmm, all in the intent! I'd thought to be indirect/subtle rather than making an outright remark of it, so I promise I meant well. :)

 

On the other hand, if you were to catch me going around copy pasting blocks of text and underlining each and every little bit of...

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Very nice, enjoyable read. I understand why you feel the need to "apologize" for not having a lot of plot take place, but you really shouldn't feel that way at all! There was a lot of character development in this which I really enjoyed. I could really feel Nora's anguish and fury for what happened to her. In addition, though I am not sure if this is what you were intending, I also could identify the melancholy she was experiencing. She lost her fangs (though they still showed in the photos? An oversight on your end or did I miss something and I am getting this all wrong?), which is not a defeat to suffer lightly. When she was interacting with the slave, she had her lips so close to the skin yet there was nothing she could do to reach the blood. So enveloped by her hunger and the situation, the epiphany that she couldn't be satiated hit her hard and she had to distract her self. First by sex than by focusing on her appearance. To me, this was really powerful character development that is easily overlooked. I think you did a brilliant job. Well done. 

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Very nice, enjoyable read. I understand why you feel the need to "apologize" for not having a lot of plot take place, but you really shouldn't feel that way at all! There was a lot of character development in this which I really enjoyed. I could really feel Nora's anguish and fury for what happened to her. In addition, though I am not sure if this is what you were intending, I also could identify the melancholy she was experiencing. She lost her fangs (though they still showed in the photos? An oversight on your end or did I miss something and I am getting this all wrong?), which is not a defeat to suffer lightly. When she was interacting with the slave, she had her lips so close to the skin yet there was nothing she could do to reach the blood. So enveloped by her hunger and the situation, the epiphany that she couldn't be satiated hit her hard and she had to distract her self. First by sex than by focusing on her appearance. To me, this was really powerful character development that is easily overlooked. I think you did a brilliant job. Well done. 

 

Thank you Collygon. Her fangs regrow when she drunk the blood of the scholar in the previous entry (second spoiler at the end). The her regrowing fangs could have been shown a bit better. But you got the idea of the scene, which was to show her tempted and loosing herself in the moment, even though it was her respect and her rules she made with Amelie that hold her back. Besides I wanted to show her creepyness since after all she is still an undead vampire and being aroused by a sleeping person's smell is quite creepy. Showing her face to the skin was more about Amelie's smell and less about not being able to reach it. A TV show would have used sniffing sounds to show this, which I am of course lacking.

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It's a mashup of several different mods with some custom edits.

- Aradia Bikini 

- The arm sleeves as well as the boots are from the luxery collection with some custom edits

- The hook is Junes hook

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Really love the progression so far kinda bummed out by the fillers but Nora is still looking good and looking forward to seeing more interactions with Amelie. Also kinda glad blind Nora is over with since that blindfold kinda bugs me.

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