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Chapter 6 Section 1 - Whispers of Death


Alter Native

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This is the first entry of chapter 6, now with 100% more sun.

After finishing the rework of chapter 1we can start with chapter 6.

 

For those of you interested in some of the backgrounds of my story and my characters, I have updated my blog overview page with chapter 5 and added new character descriptions for Kristoff, Valentina, Eric, Stan, Fina and Midnight.

 

Blog Overview

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Short Summary of Chapter 5

 

 


In chapter 5 Nora went to the castle of Baron Eric Beauvais in order to duel him and claim his realm for herself as she was elected to do by the vampire Queen Isabella in the previous
chapter. 
We learn in a long flashback that Eric and Nora are linked via a long history of love and friendship as well as intrigues and deceit.
Nora fails to kill the Baron in a fair duel and instead stabs him after he spares her live after her defeat.
Afterwards she gets to know the former servants and employees of Eric. As the new Baroness she re-engages the vampire employes of Eric and hires two human servants in nearby villages.
Additional summaries, up to the beginning of chapter 5 can be found on the blog summary page.




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Chapter 6 Section 1 - Whispers of Death

 

 


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I hope you guys enjoyed this slight shift of perspective, there'll be a bit more on the two characters, besides the already setup next entry.

 


 

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I think I know that Nora will have a third dinner. :D ?
Delightfully entry ^_^ Opressing sense of danger for Jasper and Hannah blazes through each picture (or it's just me :D)
Nora as always stunning, and Fina - charming ^_^

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Aria: Hmm, hey Nora you could hire me and I'll take my payment in kisses ;) ok I kid. But serious I kick Vampire butt like you kick, um lick... nevermind.

 

Great Work, I love seeing how Nora plays with her Prey before she strikes.

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

I think I know that Nora will have a third dinner. :D ?
Delightfully entry ^_^ Opressing sense of danger for Jasper and Hannah blazes through each picture (or it's just me :D)
Nora as always stunning, and Fina - charming ^_^

 

Thanks, we'll see more of them in the next entry ;).

 

4 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

That romantic scene in the water was most beautiful thing I saw in your stories. Compliments. :)

Thank you! I'd argue that there are plenty of other scenes that are better, but I see the appeal for people who are not too much into vampire things.

 

3 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Hmm, hey Nora you could hire me and I'll take my payment in kisses ;) ok I kid. But serious I kick Vampire butt like you kick, um lick... nevermind.

 

Great Work, I love seeing how Nora plays with her Prey before she strikes.

 

Thanks. I guess she's going to play a bit more with them in the next entry ;) .

 

58 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Nora with Midnight in bed 10/10

 

Otherwise this seems a fun little scenario for Nora ;) 

Don't get your hopes to high with Midnight ;) .

 

 

 

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Nice work, Alter! As soon as I saw the couple talking about getting lost, I just knew exactly where they'd end up. I'm always curious to see how Nora will handle her new "acquires" ;) I'm excited to see where chapter 6 will lead them!

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I expect there will be "meals" of many kinds before the night is done. A shame there couldn't be more courses, but it was such short notice.

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I'm waiting for it like from the starting of human civilization you know.?

And here it is, My Sweet and deadly Nora..Love you..?

By the way your new blog overview page looking awesome..

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7 hours ago, Collygon said:

Nice work, Alter! As soon as I saw the couple talking about getting lost, I just knew exactly where they'd end up. I'm always curious to see how Nora will handle her new "acquires" ;) I'm excited to see where chapter 6 will lead them!

Thanks, I was trying to give a different perspective on things. I think this was the first time to story was not focused on Nora and told from Nora's perspective.

The actual "main plot" of Chapter 6 is going to start in Section 4, you'll see.

 

7 hours ago, Glaurung26 said:

I expect there will be "meals" of many kinds before the night is done. A shame there couldn't be more courses, but it was such short notice.

Thanks, there'll be more to come as indicated by the end ;) .

 

4 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Nice Indeed :classic_biggrin: My grandmother's name was Fina too by the way God rest her soul.;)

Thank you. I like Fina a lot, you'll see a bit more of her in the upcoming episodes.

 

 

 

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2 minutes ago, death8981 said:

I'm waiting for it like from the starting of human civilization you know.?

And here it is, My Sweet and deadly Nora..Love you..?

By the way your new blog overview page looking awesome..

Thank you :). There'll be a second part to this story, with the good stuff yet to come ;) .

Most people just ignore the overview page, but I feel it's a necessary as an offer for those that didn't read all the previous entries.

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will be waiting for the second part ?.

Yap you are right about the overview page, presentation always matters.. 

And YOU ARE really good in what you are doing...:)

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8 hours ago, death8981 said:

will be waiting for the second part ?.

Yap you are right about the overview page, presentation always matters.. 

And YOU ARE really good in what you are doing...:)

Thank you very much! :thumbsup: :)

6 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

I like Fina, I sure hope were going to see more of that freckled skin ?

Thanks, she is also one of my favorite characters, so she'll get more screen time :) .

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17 hours ago, xGHoSTx said:

Devious and Sexy as all hell?! now there's a vampire i like alot!

The devious part is yet to come, ;) 

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The ambience in this chapter, and the quality of the screenshots' background... It's masterful really, you must spend a ton of time creating the environments. I also liked the realism of the vampires establishment in your world. However, I wonder about a few scenaristic details. Like the hand kiss for example : wonderful posing an setting of expressions, but shouldn't the guy have noticed how cold is Nora's hand ? Great content as always, and with an appreciable length. Thanks for bringing us content of that quality, Alter. :D

 

Malicia : « They're gonna get eaten like cat food cans !! Smiley_ummon_HFR.gif Someone warn them, call the police ! :classic_exclamation: »

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On 10/6/2018 at 8:50 PM, Tirloque said:

The ambience in this chapter, and the quality of the screenshots' background... It's masterful really, you must spend a ton of time creating the environments. I also liked the realism of the vampires establishment in your world. However, I wonder about a few scenaristic details. Like the hand kiss for example : wonderful posing an setting of expressions, but shouldn't the guy have noticed how cold is Nora's hand ? Great content as always, and with an appreciable length. Thanks for bringing us content of that quality, Alter. :D

 

Malicia : « They're gonna get eaten like cat food cans !! Smiley_ummon_HFR.gif Someone warn them, call the police ! :classic_exclamation: »

The thing with the vampire coldness is a very general problem. Technically every vampire should have the temperature of his or her surrounding environment, which can be very cold when you are in Skyrim. So from that stance nobody would find body contact with a vampire enjoyable. This is a general problem, as for example Mjoll in C1S1 should have noticed that during the kiss or Amelie and other should find sex with Nora or other vampires very unenjoyable.  

The solution? Vampire Magic/Illusion. So the hand is actually as cold as a thermostat would show it, but it feels like normal body temperature. At some point you have to go magic anyway, because with just blood you couldn't even upkeep your normal everyday movemets/life. Think of how much a normal human eats a day. Physically spoken, you had to provide the same amount of energy via blood, which results in absurd amounts of blood to be drunken every week by every vampire. 

So they drink blood as food to fuel their undead vampire magic, are as cold as their surroundings to have the thermodynamics work, but feel warm and enjoyable because magic. When a vampire touches another vampire they feel as cold as they really are, which is one of the reasons why vampires are drawn to humans as sex partners, I think this was hinted at some point somewhere on my blog ?.

Let me know if there are other problems or discrepancies you notice, I try to keep my vampire world somewhat logic and clean.

 

Thanks for the commend on the environment, Nora's castle is completely  custom build. 

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