> FANTASTIC!!! Compliments. She is damn too hot and beautiful. I don't need to tell you how much I would love to fuck her.  

Nice one with the hair pull. And I noticed Lenora changed shoes mid scene. 

Oh Lenora, you lying little c...ountess. Telling poor Thomas how Nora (I assume) reacted to her defanging, despite knowing full well that Hakon stepped in. Makes me wonder if she is actually into Thomas or if she just doesn't want to loose a useful tool/toy.

Also, I am happy to see that Vasil is still arround, since I have become quite fond of him. He seems to be the most level-headed of the bunch. Even tough this time he slammed Thomas into the floor, which I think was a reasonable reaction, given the circumstances.

One small thing I noticed, two minor typos: Pretty early in this entry Lenora is asking "Was she the trouble?" (meaning Nora). I am assuming that was supposed to mean "...worth the trouble?"

The second one is in the part between Vasil and Lenora: He calls her a "dumn whore"... so a "dumb whore" or a "damn whore" then?

Overall, a very nice entry. Looking forward to see how the story continues.

11 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> FANTASTIC!!! Compliments. She is damn too hot and beautiful. I don't need to tell you how much I would love to fuck her.  

 

Thank you!

Never thought you'd like her that much ?.

10 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Nice one with the hair pull. And I noticed Lenora changed shoes mid scene. 

Thank you, yeah I assumed people wouldn't notice and this boot version was easier to use for the scene.

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Oh Lenora, you lying little c...ountess. Telling poor Thomas how Nora (I assume) reacted to her defanging, despite knowing full well that Hakon stepped in. Makes me wonder if she is actually into Thomas or if she just doesn't want to loose a useful tool/toy.

Also, I am happy to see that Vasil is still arround, since I have become quite fond of him. He seems to be the most level-headed of the bunch. Even tough this time he slammed Thomas into the floor, which I think was a reasonable reaction, given the circumstances.

Thanks!

I think Vasil is the oldest char in my story that's still around. Since the middle of chapter 2, even before I introduced Amelie. As a count he's fairly easy to add to stories. 

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

One small thing I noticed, two minor typos: Pretty early in this entry Lenora is asking "Was she the trouble?" (meaning Nora). I am assuming that was supposed to mean "...worth the trouble?"

The second one is in the part between Vasil and Lenora: He calls her a "dumn whore"... so a "dumb whore" or a "damn whore" then?

Yeah thank you!

You right, English is not my first language, so mistakes like this are more or less unavoidable, but I'm trying my best. 

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Overall, a very nice entry. Looking forward to see how the story continues.

Thank you very much! Season finale is coming soon  .

3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

 

Yeah thank you!

You right, English is not my first language, so mistakes like this are more or less unavoidable, but I'm trying my best. 

 

 

Don't worry about the little typos. They did not diminish my enjoyment of your story in any way. I have to admit, that I have no knowledge of the technical side of posting a story like yours. So I merely pointed this out, in case you have an easy way of fixing it and feel inclined to do so. Besides, I too am not a native english speaker, so any story that I could post would likely be filled to the brim with all manner of spelling- and grammar mistakes.

p.s. Two questions: Is all of this (the events of the last part and of this one) happening in Vasil's castle? I am assuming it is, but unless I missed something it's not made clear. And second: Is the thing that "happend last week" mentioned by Lenora at the very end of this entry the assassination of count Gottfried? Or something else, that is not yet revealed?

11 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

Thank you!

Never thought you'd like her that much ?.

> She is very sexy. Was excited seeing her in the sex with Thomas whom I don't like.

Not the richest episode in terms of story, but still entertaining ; with a very immersive way to describe the decadence some vampires can reach when mixing blood and intercourse. Good job in making the sequence peculiar in that regard (the biting between vampires reminds me of a mix between the old Underworld series, and the recent Vanitas no Carte), Excellent work on the photography as well, with rich, contrasted and saturated colors for us to feast. Now scenario-wise, I wonder if Thomas really thinks Nora as lost, or if the aim was precisely to break the alliance between Lenora and Vasil. We will see. Meanwhile, nice entry.

« It was very interesting to see Thomas tearing someone's clothes just to honey-honey. Lots of gals want that uh.

                 Except they want it to be done to them. Nora's not gonna like that, no.  »

On 9/12/2021 at 4:48 AM, EvalovesEP said:

> FANTASTIC!!! Compliments. She is damn too hot and beautiful. I don't need to tell you how much I would love to fuck her.  

« You very shouldn't.

             Or she's gonna try to pull out your teeth, and steal your boyfriend next.  »

9 hours ago, Tirloque said:

« You very shouldn't.

             Or she's gonna try to pull out your teeth, and steal your boyfriend next.  »

 

> Nah, she'd love me very passionately and we'd ask my Ivy to join us.

14 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Nah, she'd love me very passionately and we'd ask my Ivy to join us.

«  »

30 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

«  »

> For Malicija

On 9/12/2021 at 7:44 PM, HM1919 said:

p.s. Two questions: Is all of this (the events of the last part and of this one) happening in Vasil's castle? I am assuming it is, but unless I missed something it's not made clear. And second: Is the thing that "happend last week" mentioned by Lenora at the very end of this entry the assassination of count Gottfried? Or something else, that is not yet revealed?

Yes all recent events took place in Vasil's castle. This was explained in the very beginning of the Chapter (Section 1), but I understand that something like this is easy to miss when doing these stories every 3 weeks... it's just hard to remember stuff that you read 4 month ago.

Lenora instructed Thomas and Nora to assassinate Count Gottfried, this was more or less the contents of Section 1, however this information is not yet know to everyone nor does it seem to be provable to the Duchess. 

On 9/13/2021 at 11:29 PM, Tirloque said:

Not the richest episode in terms of story, but still entertaining ; with a very immersive way to describe the decadence some vampires can reach when mixing blood and intercourse.

Thanks, I decided to split this and the previous entry into two seperate sections. In the initial draft this + the prison dialogue was one section having both story content and some sexy time. 

On 9/13/2021 at 11:29 PM, Tirloque said:

Good job in making the sequence peculiar in that regard (the biting between vampires reminds me of a mix between the old Underworld series, and the recent Vanitas no Carte), Excellent work on the photography as well, with rich, contrasted and saturated colors for us to feast.

Thank you very much!

On 9/13/2021 at 11:29 PM, Tirloque said:

« It was very interesting to see Thomas tearing someone's clothes just to honey-honey. Lots of gals want that uh.

                 Except they want it to be done to them. Nora's not gonna like that, no.  »

Don't think Nora would be happy if Thomas would tear her nice clothes up, she usually spends a lot of money on them... 

57 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Don't think Nora would be happy if Thomas would tear her nice clothes up, she usually spends a lot of money on them... 

 

> Agree with Alter. I feel sorry for Malicija because she knows nothing about nice and glamour dresses. She used to dress up in pelts and horse skin She needs this magic

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks, I decided to split this and the previous entry into two seperate sections. In the initial draft this + the prison dialogue was one section having both story content and some sexy time. 

Ahhhh, so that's why there was no sexy time in the previous entry, it was split in two in fact !

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Don't think Nora would be happy if Thomas would tear her nice clothes up, she usually spends a lot of money on them... 

« You very have a point, yes.  »

4 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Agree with Alter. I feel sorry for Malicija because she knows nothing about nice and glamour dresses. She used to dress up in pelts and horse skin She needs this magic

 

« I'm sorry I've bought clothes not to be torn.

                You can very have fun tearing yours :

                 Not that that would disturb you, uh. »

^ And that's about Thomas's attitude.
Sold out Nora to get angry and worry about her later. How often do people do this... -_-
I don't really understand whether he is playing some kinda game of his own or is just trying to survive, but I do like what is happening! Probably have to wear his shoes to understand him.
Great job, Alter Native!

Nora is my virtual