I really like the way you balance the screenshots with the dialogue. You use just enough dialogue to give coherence to the story you're telling and let the lovely screenshots fill in the rest.

Great work, Nora is quite the complex character it seems.

I really like the way you balance the screenshots with the dialogue. You use just enough dialogue to give coherence to the story you're telling and let the lovely screenshots fill in the rest.

Thank you. I don't really enjoy writing dialogues but like telling stories and taking screenshots... that should explain the balance

Great work, Nora is quite the complex character it seems.

Thanks. She can actually be a decent person from time to time.

Great work on the composition, the screens are really beautifully coloured and the exotic nobility ambiance is really good. A very enjoyable read.

 

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Thank you very much Tirloque.

as always great work Alter Native! already looking forward to you next post!

 

I really like the way you balance the screenshots with the dialogue. You use just enough dialogue to give coherence to the story you're telling and let the lovely screenshots fill in the rest.

 

Thank you. I don't really enjoy writing dialogues but like telling stories and taking screenshots... that should explain the balance

Lol well it works for you! Keep it up.

Great work on all the poses. I love the idea with the towel you had. 

as always great work Alter Native! already looking forward to you next post!

Thanks!

Great work on all the poses. I love the idea with the towel you had. 

Thanks you towel scene was an easy way to show Nora's relationship to her servant.

Great work as always! I know you say "mostly world building... development" as an assumption that it may be "boring" but it was far from it. You did a wonderful job and it shows a lot for you as a story teller to include character history. Keep it up!

I enjoyed these Hammerfell flashback part of the story .

You did great job with them.

Great work as always! I know you say "mostly world building... development" as an assumption that it may be "boring" but it was far from it. You did a wonderful job and it shows a lot for you as a story teller to include character history. Keep it up!

Thanks, the problem is that a 400 year old vampire has a lot of character history to tell^^. It's more like an easy way to tell different stories with the same character without having to connect them in circuitously.

I enjoyed these Hammerfell flashback part of the story .

 

You did great job with them.

Thank you.

Wow simple love it..