Wow, good job!

Love the location in the last scene. 

4 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Wow, good job!

Love the location in the last scene. 

 I figured you’d enjoy the Neve centric chapter

but the location is from AHO (though modded) which is full of gorgeous places for screenshots!

Dun dun DUUUUUUUUUN!!!!  Bombshell.... Great Work well done. 

7 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

I figured you’d enjoy the Neve centric chapter

Not only Alter. She's really looking great, and you managed to highlight her 'good' sides. Excellent job!

> I never seen any ugly female character in your stories Drunna: all of them are hot and beautiful. Compliments for that.

Your publishing rate has been on fire lately, Drunna ! This chapter felt quite less varied than the 2nd part of Ch15. Yet, good job on the lighting, and angles (truly magnifying Selenia and Neverine), and again at intertwining your plot with the sexual aspects (plus kudos for the "cannot place my finger on it" pun ^^).

« All that kissing and touching the wrong places, I very know where this is going. So I very wanna say : fyck them, yes. »

9 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

« All that kissing and touching the wrong places, I very know where this is going. So I very wanna say : fyck them, yes. »

> There are no wrong places on the bodies even if touched by same gender if both side agrees, redhead lady in the service of Trilog

1 hour ago, Evaloves4 said:

> There are no wrong places on the bodies even if touched by same gender if both side agrees, redhead lady in the service of Trilog

    « There very can be if you don't wanna catch diseases, Mrs Eva, uh.

                  »

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

    « There very can be if you don't wanna catch diseases, Mrs Eva, uh.

 

                  »

> You forgot, my friend, that three of us have extremely high water bill, an dit is not because we are watering the plants (which we do), but because we are keeping high hygienic practice  and habit due to often sex Your warning is for those who barely wash their hands, not to mention washing other parts of the body. I can tell this girl wash her intimate parts.

> Therefore she can have my in all her holes. ?

Finally caught back up! Definitely on the shorter side this time but nothing wrong with that, looking forward to part 2