Things are really going from bad to worse for them.... Just when they got there clothes back and things moved on they get catched again .

Though this time only for a short time.

Also why does the story always stop when Neve shows up ?

Not fair.

God damn rapists got what they deserve.  Love this episode very much.

... ,,, 

On 4/18/2021 at 1:59 PM, Alter Native said:

Things are really going from bad to worse for them.... Just when they got there clothes back and things moved on they get catched again .

Though this time only for a short time.

 

Also why does the story always stop when Neve shows up ?

Not fair.

I was trying to write it so that they were captured, but these guys were no match for them but both Selenia and Jenna also needed a good sexual release and decided to use these guys.

The world stops when Neverine enters a room! ?
 

The ending shot of Neverine was supposed to be a cliffhanger “dun dun dun” moment....as this is the first time you see Neverine invading Jenna’s and Gabrielle’s established space. 

17 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

God damn rapists got what they deserve.  Love this episode very much.

 
Thanks! Even though Jenna was going to let them go but they got what they deserved

16 hours ago, Jayomms said:

... ,,, 

?????

Hah! Great Entry Drunna! I was really surprised how it turns out, and their little talk in the end really put a smile on my face

I have to agree with (damn, I'm gonna need a stamp of those words ^^) Crw, the last exchanges between Jenna and Selenia were the kind of natured kidding that you would seen between old friends. So Jenna's dark powers truly lead to unknown situations, since after Selenia first dominated the darkness, she's been aware it was there, and was willingly helped by it when escaping their raptors. It'll be interesting to see how far Jenna will go in terms of control. Anyway, nice direction all along, with good effects against the darkness & with the exploding heads. All that while maintaining erotic events, your own custom world, and your scenario consistency. Excellent entry ! ?

PS : noticed that Selenia in fact did hear the conspirators talking about here. Nice touch. ^^

« I very knew going honey-honey too much was bad for your health, but I didn't know you could die that quickly. Those guys were really unlucky, uh. »

On 4/21/2021 at 4:10 AM, Crw said:

Hah! Great Entry Drunna! I was really surprised how it turns out, and their little talk in the end really put a smile on my face

On 4/24/2021 at 12:32 PM, Tirloque said:

I have to agree with (damn, I'm gonna need a stamp of those words ^^) Crw, the last exchanges between Jenna and Selenia were the kind of natured kidding that you would seen between old friends

Thanks guys! 
Again it’s inspiration from @Devianna and @SpyVsPie and their character dialogues. The initial meetup of Mort’s gang was never part of the story and even when finishing this part, part of me regretted introducing them previously and the situation of being captured. 
 

At same time it did allow for further establishing connection between Jenna and Selenia.

On 4/24/2021 at 12:32 PM, Tirloque said:

...So Jenna's dark powers truly lead to unknown situations, since after Selenia first dominated the darkness, she's been aware it was there, and was willingly helped by it when escaping their raptors. It'll be interesting to see how far Jenna will go in terms of control. Anyway, nice direction all along, with good effects against the darkness & with the exploding heads. All that while maintaining erotic events, your own custom world, and your scenario consistency. Excellent entry ! ?

 

Thanks! 
wanted to add that danger element where Jenna could snap at any moment  and darkness take over, resulting in Jenna hurting or killing someone close to her.

On 4/24/2021 at 12:32 PM, Tirloque said:

 

PS : noticed that Selenia in fact did hear the conspirators talking about here. Nice touch. ^

Yeah. I had a big grin when you mentioned that in the last part. 
However  it seems I didn’t make it clear in this section that Selenia and Jenna were toying with the captors. I think I forgot to add a panel Selenia stating she was also still horny from her peril by possessed Jenna. 
 

On 4/24/2021 at 12:32 PM, Tirloque said:

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« I very knew going honey-honey too much was bad for your health, but I didn't know you could die that quickly. Those guys were really unlucky, uh. »

Not really unlucky as Jenna did give them a chance to let them go

-maybe unlucky that if all the victims , they got the one with Dark powers 

On 4/25/2021 at 3:04 PM, devious-Drunna said:

 

 

Thanks guys! 
Again it’s inspiration from @Devianna and @SpyVsPie and their character dialogues. The initial meetup of Mort’s gang was never part of the story and even when finishing this part, part of me regretted introducing them previously and the situation of being captured. 
 

At same time it did allow for further establishing connection between Jenna and Selenia.

Wow it's always humbling to hear stuff like that! Likewise you (and CrW and Tirloque and Wanobi) have inspired me to try to improve my comic format and editing.

Really great job with the blood effects in this one (andI hope Selenia doesn't find replacements for her missing armor pieces. She looks a bit less Sylvanasy this way )

On 4/28/2021 at 1:28 AM, SpyVsPie said:

 

Wow it's always humbling to hear stuff like that! Likewise you (and CrW and Tirloque and Wanobi) have inspired me to try to improve my comic format and editing.

 

Really great job with the blood effects in this one (andI hope Selenia doesn't find replacements for her missing armor pieces. She looks a bit less Sylvanasy this way )

it was also to avoid those awkward clipping issues due to her bulky armor