Wow, that's just great! I really love ol that ol' fashion tricks with lights and shadow! Like the shadow on a wall behind a character and stuff! 
 <= Like here! 
Considering how Skyrim process shadows and light sources I bet that was an interesting task to solve!
And yes, Jenna's boobs got bigger?

13 hours ago, Crw said:

Wow, that's just great! I really love ol that ol' fashion tricks with lights and shadow! Like the shadow on a wall behind a character and stuff! 
 <= Like here! 
Considering how Skyrim process shadows and light sources I bet that was an interesting task to solve!
And yes, Jenna's boobs got bigger?

hey thanks!

I have ENB on in CreationKit so it makes it easy testing out placing light shadows in a space. I also had to scale the person shadowed larger and clip them downward to get the right angle. The whole thing took less than a minute once I had the light source setup in CK.

i think Jens boobs were maxed out so maybe the angle makes her boobs look bigger? ?

Nice Work on the suspense build up.  

Marvelously done. Love the lesbian scene at the end.

pls pls pls pls dont kill Selenia shes so hot i absolutely love her

this is i think the first time i comment on your story and i would like to say that your overall characters bodies, lighting, and everything else remembers me of Shocky's content back in the days, hope you never stop making these and never change lighting and bodies shapes, everything is perfect as it is now

Did you change your story telling style? I am not saing that is bad but different. Compliments for very good episode.

On 4/6/2021 at 10:40 PM, Jayomms said:

Nice Work on the suspense build up.  

Thanks! I am so glad you find it suspenseful. Its always hard to tell with comic and pictures if I was able to convey spooky-ness and tension when I have been staring at the scenes, cells, and screenshots several times.

15 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Marvelously done. Love the lesbian scene at the end.

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee"

2 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee"

 

> I'm glad you did and as bisexual I can tell you that great majority of males rather loves to see lesbian sex than straight sex, just like my Prince. He can watch straight sex for hours and he isn't horny at all, but seeing me smooching with my Ivy, he has very strong erection.

> As for  ( @Tirloque)  Trilog's Malicija, she is bisexual too. Here is the proof:

Besides, some LL members like @Resdayn and my Prince claims she loves horses. Enormously. I can't tell, but you know, where there is a smoke, there is a fire, too.

Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days.

4 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee"

« I very comment 'cause your gals very need to get warned. Cassandra wouldn't have turned into a dried grandma if she had gotten expert advice before, you see ?  »

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> I'm glad you did and as bisexual I can tell you that great majority of males rather loves to see lesbian sex than straight sex, just like my Prince. He can watch straight sex for hours and he isn't horny at all, but seeing me smooching with my Ivy, he has very strong erection.

Having several females for one male is also a common phantasm among men. That might play a role in lesbian sex popularity among straight males. ?

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> As for  ( @Tirloque)  Trilog's Malicija, she is bisexual too. Here is the proof:

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Besides, some LL members like @Resdayn and my Prince claims she loves horses. Enormously. I can't tell, but you know, where there is a smoke, there is a fire, too.

« That's very not me, no, 'cause I've got green eyes.

               And about riding horses the wrong way, that can't be me either 'cause I'm a fish, and fishes don't ride horses, you know ?

                 »

16 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days.

 

« I very comment 'cause your gals very need to get warned. Cassandra wouldn't have turned into a dried grandma if she had gotten expert advice before, you see ?  »

 

 

 

> ???

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies :D

6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> ???

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies

Oh Silly Evee! 

Great work!

The the atmosphere is really well crafted!

Also such a clickbait header image .

On 4/7/2021 at 7:57 PM, Slace said:

pls pls pls pls dont kill Selenia shes so hot i absolutely love her

 

this is i think the first time i comment on your story and i would like to say that your overall characters bodies, lighting, and everything else remembers me of Shocky's content back in the days, hope you never stop making these and never change lighting and bodies shapes, everything is perfect as it is now

hey thanks for the comments! Always enjoy hearing from new people! 
I didn’t know Shocks had a comic series as well, which I will need to go an look it up!

Can’t promise anything however

On 4/7/2021 at 8:20 PM, Elf Prince said:

Did you change your story telling style? I am not saing that is bad but different. Compliments for very good episode.

-As far as style, I guess I would say evolution over time writing these comics and finding a specific look, layout, and story.  
 

-Anything specific? As much has changed in many ways since my earlier chapters in 2018!

20 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days.

 

 No worries! Once I got through all that psychological self-actualization stuff in chapter 11,  it should be easier as it’s mostly straight action stuff. But also I’m releasing the parts one at a time whereas it takes at least a month between submissions when I release 2 to 3 parts in one blog post. 

19 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> ???

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies

ok, that makes so much sense now!  Esp why Slash fanfics and shipping are so popular !

14 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great work!

The the atmosphere is really well crafted!

Also such a clickbait header image .

Thanks! 
I was going for horror movie feel  with the all wood, basement. But again, hard to tell if it works in comic format versus movie.

I actually thought about redoing the header image and insert two or three of the people Selenia comes across at the. beginning of part 3  facing  tied up Selenia. 
 

But yeah, I have noticed somewhat of a  correlation between the header images and the number of views.

-clearly visible frontal nudity versus rear nudity is one I noticed

23 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> ???

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies

That is because you are crazy witch ?

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

 

That is because you are crazy witch ?

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

But yeah, I have noticed somewhat of a  correlation between the header images and the number of views.

-clearly visible frontal nudity versus rear nudity is one I noticed

I did notice one face vs no face for my chronicles ; particularly if it's a female face.

Or by re-using too often the same header (which can be confusing for readers). ?

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 No worries! Once I got through all that psychological self-actualization stuff in chapter 11,  it should be easier as it’s mostly straight action stuff. But also I’m releasing the parts one at a time whereas it takes at least a month between submissions when I release 2 to 3 parts in one blog post. 

All caught up ! Liked the investigation ambiance on this one. The assets were familiar (lol for the Old Hroldan ), but reorganized in a unique mix, with unique lighting and disposition. Nice build-up for the protagonist « assets » (the stare of the villager going below the eyes when being distracted was funny as well ^^). Yet, for someone with long ears, her not earing Mort's associates plotting against her was a bit strange ; and same for her getting caught by surprise after using her ethereal detection powers. Nice reaction to Jenna's  reveal, though I wonder why the other delinquents don't show up (were they killed without Selenia noticing ?). Great implementation of the comic layout and onomatopoeia that being said, it flows naturally. And having Jenna as an antagonist indeed brings novelty. Anyway, nice entry !

« Even though both those gals already have Chlamydia, I still think there's going to be a problem, uh. 

               Also Jenna said I said something about her in the showers, but I very don't remember going to a shower lately, no.  »

Have to agree with what others have said about the lighting and suspenseful staging, great job!

At parts it reminded me of your Secrets Under the Stairs entry from way back when.

The fact that Jenna curses normally (sans Ys) is a funny way to mark her as being from a different reality ?

On 4/9/2021 at 9:17 AM, Tirloque said:

I did notice one face vs no face for my chronicles ; particularly if it's a female face.

 

Or by re-using too often the same header (which can be confusing for readers). ?

 

All caught up ! Liked the investigation ambiance on this one. The assets were familiar (lol for the Old Hroldan ), but reorganized in a unique mix, with unique lighting and disposition. Nice build-up for the protagonist « assets » (the stare of the villager going below the eyes when being distracted was funny as well ^^). Yet, for someone with long ears, her not earing Mort's associates plotting against her was a bit strange ; and same for her getting caught by surprise after using her ethereal detection powers. Nice reaction to Jenna's  reveal, though I wonder why the other delinquents don't show up (were they killed without Selenia noticing ?). Great implementation of the comic layout and onomatopoeia that being said, it flows naturally. And having Jenna as an antagonist indeed brings novelty. Anyway, nice entry !

 

« Even though both those gals already have Chlamydia, I still think there's going to be a problem, uh. 

 

               Also Jenna said I said something about her in the showers, but I very don't remember going to a shower lately, no.  »

ive always planned to use Old Hroldan at some point as I love the claustrophobic alleyways of the town which had that Bloodbourne game feel, but at same time not really horror setting.

On 4/10/2021 at 12:16 AM, SpyVsPie said:

The fact that Jenna curses normally (sans Ys) is a funny way to mark her as being from a different reality ?

I’m glad you caught that! It’s something I’ve been hinting

On 4/10/2021 at 12:16 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Have to agree with what others have said about the lighting and suspenseful staging, great job!

 

At parts it reminded me of your Secrets Under the Stairs entry from way back when

Thanks! The horror lighting/tension has been the main inspiration of the entire series from the beginning and still trying to perfect the horror tone/atmosphere playing around with lighting, angles, lighting, lighting, and lighting 

1 hour ago, devious-Drunna said:

I’m glad you caught that! It’s something I’ve been hinting

That can't be true, you're fycking with us here.

Jokes aside, at one point (when Selenia's eyes are adjusting to the brighter light of one room), even the narrator started replacing other letters with "i". It wasn't an "y", but I think in about one month or two you'll be in search of Eylons as well. No shyt.