Dun dun dunnnnnnn... 

Were the tenalce thing from?

amazing like always~

Not a fan of tentacles but the story is excellent. Compliments

Oh shit, I fucking love the "eternal conflict" ambient seated in the beginning, with the idea evil that wins, always been a big fan of that kind of thing.
                                                                                        

And Jenna's flashback in response to Selenia's speech creates a sense of a "vicious circle" that is unbroken. ^_^ makes it really deep imo. ?
 

On 6/16/2021 at 5:34 PM, Jay-Omms said:

 Dun dun dunnnnnnn... 

 Yep and at this point is when ACT 3 of Book 2 kicks in!!!’

On 6/16/2021 at 10:51 PM, RJLbwb said:

Were the tenalce thing from?

 

-photoshop-

i didn’t like how they looked with the Estrus mod so decided to try if photoshop would be better. Getting them around her wasnt as hard as I expected. It was the lighting consistency that was the challenge. 

On 6/17/2021 at 7:14 AM, JessTheNerd said:

amazing like always~

 Thank you so much! 

On 6/17/2021 at 7:42 AM, EvalovesEP said:

Not a fan of tentacles but the story is excellent. Compliments

Thank you so much and importantly, your continued support!

 I did pull back on the rapey stuff since the end of book 1, but tentacle porn is my #2 hentai thing after imp gang ?

But as I write these stories, I do find myself prioritizing story and character development over sex scenes. 

19 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh shit, I fucking love the "eternal conflict" ambient seated in the beginning, with the idea evil that wins, always been a big fan of that kind of thing.
                                                                                        

 

Having evil winning does help establish urgency and stakes , and it’s more fun to write because it makes things unexpected!

I love the picture you referenced and again, finding the humor that we share the same brain. Originally. I was gonna shrink Selena and Kholbold down to like “.50” so that the two fighting would seem much larger!

19 hours ago, Crw said:

 

And Jenna's flashback in response to Selenia's speech creates a sense of a "vicious circle" that is unbroken. ^_^ makes it really deep imo. ?
 

 ??

15 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Thank you so much and importantly, your continued support!

 I did pull back on the rapey stuff since the end of book 1, but tentacle porn is my #2 hentai thing after imp gang ?

But as I write these stories, I do find myself prioritizing story and character development over sex scenes. 

 

got good tastes in hentai heh~

3 hours ago, JessTheNerd said:

got good tastes in hentai heh~

yeah. I admit it was fun photoshopping they tentacles and I might do some more and put them up as a gallery.  They weren’t stressful like my Book 1 Chapter 5 with all of those Rieklings. That one I was scared that by the time I or the poses right, the game would crash/freeze from so many rieklings on screen  

5 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

yeah. I admit it was fun photoshopping they tentacles and I might do some more and put them up as a gallery.  They weren’t stressful like my Book 1 Chapter 5 with all of those Rieklings. That one I was scared that by the time I or the poses right, the game would crash/freeze from so many rieklings on screen  

heh thats my issue I want to make gangbang stuff with tons of humanoids but my shitty pc can't handle it

Awesome! I'm loving the complexity to your story. I find myself glued to the screen to make sure I don't miss a single thing. Great job!

On 6/18/2021 at 7:46 PM, devious-Drunna said:

-photoshop-

i didn’t like how they looked with the Estrus mod so decided to try if photoshop would be better. Getting them around her wasnt as hard as I expected. It was the lighting consistency that was the challenge. 

Well good job then.

Most interesting ! Like a lot the mythological passage, and I am quite impressed by your tentacles photoshopping. One would never guess there weren't ingame, so you got the lighting, detouring, and blurring perfectly done. The minute amount of images where they were involved were unusual though, and a hint about their implementation. You had less success with the blood, however. Scenario-wise, this is getting deeper and deeper. But as such, it becomes harder and harder to predict the whereabouts ; and so the better it gets ! Some proofreading mistakes though, but quite minor. You've also got the hang of the comic layout, which is now both neat and efficient, complementing quite well the saturated color palette of your images. Great entry ! ?

« They are still kissing each other pee-pee, so Jenna's gonna get Chlamydia in the eyes again. 

                 Anyway, they're all thinking it was Jenna with the wings, but it very wasn't. I know 'cause she had boobies surgery not long ago, at the Dr Neve Erin's place. 

                 And this blonde already had big boobies. So it wasn't her, you see ?   »

Fantastic entry!

I really liked the scene building, especially of the first part, not just the fighting scene, but the overhaul atmosphere , very impressive.

Also I would have never guessed that the tentacles are shopped, only after reading yours and Tirloque's comments did I learn about that. 

Amazing job with that!

I must have missed DwymerDyne Systems before, that's really funny. Now we have to be on the lookout for Arnold ?

The tentacle photoshop was some of the best photoshopping I've seen in Skyrim screens, great job. A lot of the time stuff ends up looking like bad 90s green screen but you really have to go looking on those to notice they're not in game. The blood effect when Jenna gets hit in the back didn't quite work as well IMO.

Really loved the graveyard/ forest environment too, very atmospheric. Did you make that one? 

One thing I have been wondering- was Khol'bold's name meant to sound like Kobold or is it just a coincidence? I keep expecting him to tell me I can't take his candle. 

On 6/20/2021 at 7:26 PM, Collygon said:

Awesome! I'm loving the complexity to your story. I find myself glued to the screen to make sure I don't miss a single thing. Great job!

Thank you so much! 
im hoping I’m not going to waaay off that I’m losing people especially when going into the mythical gods type element as I fear of making things tooo complex and hard to follow. 

On 6/22/2021 at 5:43 PM, Tirloque said:

Most interesting ! Like a lot the mythological passage, and I am quite impressed by your tentacles photoshopping. One would never guess there weren't ingame, so you got the lighting, detouring, and blurring perfectly done. The minute amount of images where they were involved were unusual though, and a hint about their implementation. You had less success with the blood, however. Scenario-wise, this is getting deeper and deeper. But as such, it becomes harder and harder to predict the whereabouts ; and so the better it gets ! Some proofreading mistakes though, but quite minor. You've also got the hang of the comic layout, which is now both neat and efficient, complementing quite well the saturated color palette of your images. Great entry ! ?

 

« They are still kissing each other pee-pee, so Jenna's gonna get Chlamydia in the eyes again. 

                 Anyway, they're all thinking it was Jenna with the wings, but it very wasn't. I know 'cause she had boobies surgery not long ago, at the Dr Neve Erin's place. 

                 And this blonde already had big boobies. So it wasn't her, you see ?   »

thank you, I am finding that there will be times that photoshopping screenshot may be easier and sometimes look better (ex the electricity running through the dildos in her) than keeping to only ingame.

On 6/30/2021 at 8:57 AM, Alter Native said:

Fantastic entry!

I really liked the scene building, especially of the first part, not just the fighting scene, but the overhaul atmosphere , very impressive.

Also I would have never guessed that the tentacles are shopped, only after reading yours and Tirloque's comments did I learn about that. 

Amazing job with that!

Thanks. The world this took place is from a very, very old mod like 2014 old, called Shards of Oblivion. It’s a great atmospheric location! Obviously, I had to add in the tentacle pit and do lots of other modding to the world space.

On 8/4/2022 at 5:42 AM, SpyVsPie said:

I must have missed DwymerDyne Systems before, that's really funny. Now we have to be on the lookout for Arnold ?

 

The tentacle photoshop was some of the best photoshopping I've seen in Skyrim screens, great job. A lot of the time stuff ends up looking like bad 90s green screen but you really have to go looking on those to notice they're not in game. The blood effect when Jenna gets hit in the back didn't quite work as well IMO.

 

Really loved the graveyard/ forest environment too, very atmospheric. Did you make that one? 

 

One thing I have been wondering- was Khol'bold's name meant to sound like Kobold or is it just a coincidence? I keep expecting him to tell me I can't take his candle. 

-“forest/graveyard” if you are referring to the area Jenna and Selenia were walking (later lesbian sex) near the end, it was all created from scratch on a blank worldspace. Granted, it’s a worldspace that was created a long time ago and was first used in the opening chapters of Book 2. Made sense to reuse that same location since they were entering thr same from gates of Korinth.

-Khol’bold was just a semiRandom name I came up.

-DymerDyne name was on purpose and was featured in Book 2, Chapter 6 where Jenna and the others helped them deal with their out of control constructs. The Cyberdyne references were on the nose including the logo I made for that location (see below)