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Dark Ascension Horizon: Chapter 12, Part 1


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Jenna seemingly recovered quickly from her ordeal to the surprise of everyone around her. While the City of Korinth is still dealing with the aftermath of the mysterious explosion that wiped out a large district, incinerating hundreds of people to ash, Kor stops by to check on Jenna with a special gift he brought for her.

 

 

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Dark Ascension: Horizon, Book 2

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Part 1

Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3

Chapter 8

Chapter 9 "SPECIAL"

Chapter 10
Chapter 11: Parts 1 and 2
Chapter 11: Part 3
Chapter 11: Parts 4 and 5

Chapter 12: Part 1

 

Dark Ascension, Book 1

Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs

Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections 

Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon

 

Dark Ascension, Initiates' Tales

-From the Drunna’s Den Blog-

Part 1

Part 2

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I apologize for the short and delayed entry. Things have gotten very busy in life that I am finding myself exhausted by the days end.

 

There are still so much of this story that needs to be told, but at the same time it is taking longer to get things moving/done. So while I still plan on releasing more of the story, it may be one part at a time rather than 2 or 3 parts at a time.

 

Also. I am almost caught up reading everyone's wonderful stories within the past 2+ months.

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Great work! Always happy to see more of Jenna.

I think this was even one of your few sfw entries (besides some nsfw dirty talk).

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Jenna's possession with the evil spirit seems to be good for her! She became quite a badass black widow-operative type! 
Really loves that new thing of her ^_^ yea... possessed girls are my kink :D
Great story Drunna! 

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Nice work, really like the futuristic/ cyberpunk cityscape (it really got a chance to shine here) and it's always impressive to be able to take in game assets like all the dwemer stuff and repurpose it in a way that doesn't make the viewer immediately go "oh look a bunch of dwemer stuff".

 

I do find myself getting a but distracted by Sylvanas but as long as Thrall ad Anduin don't show up I guess it will all be alright in the end ?.

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On 3/8/2021 at 4:40 AM, Alter Native said:

Great work! Always happy to see more of Jenna.

I think this was even one of your few sfw entries (besides some nsfw dirty talk).


It is,  but not to worry as one or two of the parts of within Chapter 12 will have some bobbies :)
 

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On 3/8/2021 at 6:39 AM, Jayomms said:

:O Ooooh Scary... :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup:

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I have some stuff set for the rest of Chapter 12 that will make things creepier :P

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14 hours ago, Cema said:

Nice gun effects !


Thanks!

After,  @Tirloque mentioned the subquality gun effects in an earlier chapter, I went back to see what I did with chapter one’s gun effect effect (which was better). Turned out I used an overlay instead of hand drawing the laser blast 
 

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On 3/8/2021 at 6:25 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Nice work, really like the futuristic/ cyberpunk cityscape (it really got a chance to shine here) and it's always impressive to be able to take in game assets like all the dwemer stuff and repurpose it in a way that doesn't make the viewer immediately go "oh look a bunch of dwemer stuff".

 

I do find myself getting a but distracted by Sylvanas but as long as Thrall ad Anduin don't show up I guess it will all be alright in the end ?.


Thanks! 
The city scape is actually from CreationKit as visibility of distant light sources is absurdly short ingame compared to CreationKit.

 

Admittedly, I never got into WoW even though the timing of its release was a perfect time in my personal life. So I didn’t realize how big of a character she was until I started using her. Unfortunately, im stuck using her in role of the character with “witchy” powers.

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On 3/8/2021 at 4:43 AM, Crw said:

Jenna's possession with the evil spirit seems to be good for her! She became quite a badass black widow-operative type! 
Really loves that new thing of her ^_^ yea... possessed girls are my kink :D
Great story Drunna! 


Thanks!

It was one of the reasons why I may have written Jenna a bit too naive earlier to juxtapose her character starting to a bit more sultry than innocent. 

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On 3/9/2021 at 8:11 PM, devious-Drunna said:


Thanks! 
The city scape is actually from CreationKit as visibility of distant light sources is absurdly short ingame compared to CreationKit.

 

Admittedly, I never got into WoW even though the timing of its release was a perfect time in my personal life. So I didn’t realize how big of a character she was until I started using her. Unfortunately, im stuck using her in role of the character with “witchy” powers.

Oh that's a clever way to do the city stuff. Is the light source distance something that can be adjusted with ini settings I wonder? 

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Shorter than the previous entries, but developed enough to be interesting, in particular in terms of exposition. Kor's past was well depicted, and though you avoided fights, still sported a variety of characters/city views that were remarkable. Btw, there might be a slight mistake regarding Kor, who was with long hair at the start, but was switched to the original one (with a bun) upon meeting Selenia. Liked Selenia's design (Sylvana being efficiently recycled ^^), even as a character, with her perception of Jenna's fusion with her Darkness within. That one is very enjoyable, since it makes the story from now on quite unpredictable. And quite the immersion in terms of colors and custom-made backgrounds. So even if it had less features than previous chapters, nice entry ! :smiley:?

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very noticed that Jenna's eyes got red. That's 'cause she went honey-honey with too much people, so she caught Chlamydia (just like Rose).

 

                She should go to the doctor tomorrow, yes. :classic_excl: »

 

On 3/10/2021 at 2:03 AM, devious-Drunna said:


Thanks!

After,  @Tirloque mentioned the subquality gun effects in an earlier chapter, I went back to see what I did with chapter one’s gun effect effect (which was better). Turned out I used an overlay instead of hand drawing the laser blast

A photoshop overlay then ? The result is much neater indeed !

 

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On 3/13/2021 at 1:46 PM, SpyVsPie said:

Oh that's a clever way to do the city stuff. Is the light source distance something that can be adjusted with ini settings I wonder? 


 I tried before early in book 2 when I first showed off the main city of Korinth and earlier in Book 1 when the lighting and fire of The Citadel wasn’t showing up. I think I was getting crashes (even indoor cells didn’t work).

 

So what you see now and probably future are either in creationKit  or objects scaled down to fit within the same world space grid. 
 

Edit: I am still using SkyrimLE and haven tried it with SE. 

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4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

..... Btw, there might be a slight mistake regarding Kor, who was with long hair at the start, but was switched to the original one (with a bun) upon meeting Selenia.

 

 It was addressed (tho with a possessive typo). Jenna helped him fix his hair before we left on his first day as head of the Korinth Guardsmen.  It was one or two panels before Kor ran into Selenia

 

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4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Shorter than the previous entries, but developed enough to be interesting, in particular in terms of exposition. Kor's past was well depicted, and though you avoided fights, still sported a variety of characters/city views that were remarkable. . . And quite the immersion in terms of colors and custom-made backgrounds. So even if it had less features than previous chapters, nice entry ! :smiley:?

 

Usually I would have published with at least one other Part along with it. Things in real life however have gotten much busier with me as well so i was not sure how long between publishing parts of the story that normally were 2 to 3 parts long. I wanted to release something as it was getting past two months since my last entry.

 

 

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

. . . .That one is very enjoyable, since it makes the story from now on quite unpredictable.....

 

Originally, the "reveal" at the end the last entry (Chapter 11, Part 5) was supposed to be at the end, but I decided to reveal it earlier. Main reason is that a few people, based on their comments, seemed to be getting closer to that realization therefore the shock would not be as apparent. The other reason I thought about revealing it earlier was to introduce another element of tension

 

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very noticed that Jenna's eyes got red. That's 'cause she went honey-honey with too much people, so she caught Chlamydia (just like Rose).

 

                She should go to the doctor tomorrow, yes. :classic_excl: »

 

Hmmmmmm . . . .

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6 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 

 It was addressed (tho with a possessive typo). Jenna helped him fix his hair before we left on his first day as head of the Korinth Guardsmen.  It was one or two panels before Kor ran into Selenia

 

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Oh oh, my mistake then ! I'm going to lose all credit in the eyes of my associate for sure ! ^^

6 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Usually I would have published with at least one other Part along with it. Things in real life however have gotten much busier with me as well so i was not sure how long between publishing parts of the story that normally were 2 to 3 parts long. I wanted to release something as it was getting past two months since my last entry.

Anyway, that's some kind of an audience quality test to do this. If you get an amount of likes comparable to your usual entries (featuring action or sex scenes), then it means people are getting hooked by the story itself.

6 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 

 

Hmmmmmm . . . .

 

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                She should go before it very worsens , yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

 

 

 

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On 3/14/2021 at 7:18 PM, devious-Drunna said:


 I tried before early in book 2 when I first showed off the main city of Korinth and earlier in Book 1 when the lighting and fire of The Citadel wasn’t showing up. I think I was getting crashes (even indoor cells didn’t work).

 

So what you see now and probably future are either in creationKit  or objects scaled down to fit within the same world space grid. 
 

Edit: I am still using SkyrimLE and haven tried it with SE. 

 

Well it looks great this way. That's the same sort of approach I've been taking lately- sort of like old time practical effects where as long as it looks good in the end shot that's all that matters. 

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