*So I hope the movie reference in Part 2 was noticeable while Part 3 had a moment that referenced a videogame trope

-I had finished writing and screenshooting Part 2 and Part 3 of Chapter 8 way back in early June, but struggled to start screenshooting Part 1. No idea why I wasn’t looking forward or procrastinating in shooting Part 1’s gangbang scene.

-So instead I spent most of June creating stuff for Chapter 9 (and returning And messing around with Fallout 4 and Skyrim:SE).  So, I  have part 1 of Chapter 9 ready before I had finished Chapter 8 - weird huh.

EDIT: Also, the delay was the result that certain effects didnt show up very well with my ENB settings. Therefore I had to go back and "enhance/add" some effects with Photoshop! Hope you like the end results!

Recent Edits to the comic since Publishing

Wow 

That clickbait thumbnail into those seas of cum... 

Felt a little bit out of character for Jenna, going from zero to hero there, but I'm also not complaining.

Also the second part was great, with some very striking visuals (and the third one as well)

Keep it up, great work!

.........?........ You really put in the work on this one! What an Amazing Yob you did! I really enjoyed this one aside from the... um... ehem... action.  Excellent Yob with the funny bits and that Killer.... um... Beast. ? 

19 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Wow 

That clickbait thumbnail into those seas of cum... 

That was the aim as I rarely do large gangbang scenes like this

Detailed reason:

19 hours ago, Alter Native said:

. . .Felt a little bit out of character for Jenna, going from zero to hero there, but I'm also not complaining.
 

Are you referring to Jenna just letting herself go and indulge herself in the moment?

19 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Also the second part was great, with some very striking visuals (and the third one as well)

 

Keep it up, great work!

Thanks so much! After seeing your more recent chapter, I noticed I was sloppy in some of the lighting (esp in the swamp area).

7 hours ago, Jayomms said:

.........?........ You really put in the work on this one! What an Amazing Yob you did! I really enjoyed this one aside from the... um... ehem... action.  Excellent Yob with the funny bits and that Killer.... um... Beast. ? 

Yeah, more work that I really wanted too hence one of the reasons why this Chapter took a while to release. Originally, I was wanting to use a different creature, but when I was looking for mods for something else, I saw this creature and immediately thought of the movie and I figured be nice to have a humorous element to the story 

2 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

That was the aim as I rarely do large gangbang scenes like this

 

Detailed reason:

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So Im a big visual pattern person where I look at things and determine trends. All of my chapters will have a consistent trend in the number of views, which I know includes repeat views. I did noticed that one or two of my chapters fell out of the pattern where they had significantly less views than others. The only two things I could figure out was either  the header blog image or the placement of the "juicy" scene within the chapter.

 

 

Can confirm that, having sex scenes definitely increases views sometimes by up to 50 % after 2 weeks. 

Using clickbait images certainly always helps so I think those are either recurring views or people coming from the sex screenshot thread where I also advertise compared to the non sex sections.

Interestingly non sex, story focues parts get more upvotes (probably from the core community.)

However in the end just do what you feel like doing, at least that's my opinion. No amount of views or upvotes is worth the time you put into creating these stories. 

Loved the bunny, and nice touch with "The Holy Hand Grenade of Antioch" 

R.

Man those guys were full!

Cant go wrong with a beauty covered in cum. Nice job!

15 hours ago, RamasesII said:

Loved the bunny, and nice touch with "The Holy Hand Grenade of Antioch" 

 

R.

-When the idea of using a cute bunny as horror creature instead of the Mihail or other traditional scary creature, I searched to see if the Holy Hand Grenade was available on Nexusmods/Workshop, then I'm definitely doing the bunny!

-I even copied word for word the description of the "Rabbit of Caerbannog" from the Monty Python script!

12 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Man those guys were full!

Cant go wrong with a beauty covered in cum. Nice job!

Yeah! I was gonna use your tutorial on creating cum textures, but I have a mouse and circle brushes so I was afraid it would not have turn out as convincing as i hoped. After googling hoping to find brushes that mimic water/cum, I found there are settings you can download to create Cum like effects using the styles feature in Photoshop (I upgraded from my old Photoshop 6.0 to the recent one).

8 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Yeah! I was gonna use your tutorial on creating cum textures, but I have a mouse and circle brushes so I was afraid it would not have turn out as convincing as i hoped. After googling hoping to find brushes that mimic water/cum, I found there are settings you can download to create Cum like effects using the styles feature in Photoshop (I upgraded from my old Photoshop 6.0 to the recent one).

Really? Thats great news!! Just picked up PS 2020 myself. Hope to have time to mess with it soon! Any info on new brushes would be much appreciated ?

Phew, massive entry here, you nearly had the content for three chapters here. But I'm not complaining, more content for us ! As for the content, not only was it massive, but quite brutal as well, would it be from the length of the first sex scene (which hopefully you turned into something consensual, easing the read a lot), or from the brutality of the murders then following (even though, for the moment you're saving your efforts by only showing us the ensuing blood). The rabbit chase and the reward choice was a hilarious intermission between those two sequences (the latter also reminding me of VLDL if you do know them). Noticed a bit of rush in the second part, with some captions being repeated and some grammar mistakes, but I think you corrected those afterwards. Great technical execution, with a good choice of angles to replicate poses further than those allowed in the game, and with a good result on added liquid effects. And scenario-wise, the Jenna/Jenny splitting is an interesting link towards Neverine. Great entry ! ?

Malicia : « So,

             - First she kills the big bunny

              - And then she kills people who honey-honey like bunnies. 

                She's very becoming a bunny-killer, yes !    »

Holy shit! This is amazing.

On 7/16/2020 at 9:09 PM, WANOBI12 said:

Really? Thats great news!! Just picked up PS 2020 myself. Hope to have time to mess with it soon! Any info on new brushes would be much appreciated ?

Custom brushes has been a new thing for me as I don’t think it was a thing with the older Photoshop programs Ive owned. I did download a suite of blood splatter brushes, which weirdly I did not use in Chapter 9, part 1.

On 7/20/2020 at 11:59 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Custom brushes has been a new thing for me as I don’t think it was a thing with the older Photoshop programs Ive owned. I did download a suite of blood splatter brushes, which weirdly I did not use in Chapter 9, part 1.

Oooooh! Did you get those from Adobe site?

On 7/17/2020 at 3:31 AM, Tirloque said:

Phew, massive entry here, you nearly had the content for three chapters here. But I'm not complaining, more content for us ! As for the content, not only was it massive, but quite brutal as well, would it be from the length of the first sex scene (which hopefully you turned into something consensual, easing the read a lot), or from the brutality of the murders then following (even though, for the moment you're saving your efforts by only showing us the ensuing blood). The rabbit chase and the reward choice was a hilarious intermission between those two sequences (the latter also reminding me of VLDL if you do know them). Noticed a bit of rush in the second part, with some captions being repeated and some grammar mistakes, but I think you corrected those afterwards. Great technical execution, with a good choice of angles to replicate poses further than those allowed in the game, and with a good result on added liquid effects. And scenario-wise, the Jenna/Jenny splitting is an interesting link towards Neverine. Great entry ! ?

 

Malicia : « So,

             - First she kills the big bunny

              - And then she kills people who honey-honey like bunnies. 

 

                She's very becoming a bunny-killer, yes !    »

 

the quest reward was pulled from Viva La Dirt League. Originally it was to address my perplexed thoughts in MMOs I used to play (Conan, Tera, AION etc.) where low tier female armor fully covered the body, but as you got to higher and more elite armor, the material got less and less -hence why it was originally called elite guard armor. But i couldn’t get the writing in the buildup and surprise right and then remembered the bikini chainmail. 

On 7/20/2020 at 5:25 AM, Abandoner said:

Holy shit! This is amazing.

I’m glad you found it amazing! Thanks for your enthusiastic comments. It helps so much yo motivate me to keep on going

Gods, those movie/show references are killing me ?.  Viva La Dirt League and Monty Python are both great choices for hilarious content. Plus Oneya's reaction to Gabrielle's ways of persuasion is priceless. ?

Physical manifestations of Jenna's personalities (for the lack of better word) are kind of scary. But at the same time the vengeance that they brought with them felt really satisfying.

This chapter was huge and I'm absolutely impressed by the amount of work, time and patience that must've went into it.  ? And what is more astounding, even with such a large scope of work you still paid attention to small details (such as adding all the information onto holographic screens and creating a neon sign for Hunter Lodge). This was a wonderful, exciting, funny and slightly terrifying chapter.  Amazing job! Thank you for sharing it with us. ?

P.S. We are going to completely ignore the fact of how late this comment is. Ok? Ok! Shhh, nobody saw anything. This comment has been here all along.

On 9/26/2020 at 3:33 AM, Devianna said:

Gods, those movie/show references are killing me ?.  Viva La Dirt League and Monty Python are both great choices for hilarious content. Plus Oneya's reaction to Gabrielle's ways of persuasion is priceless. ?

 

Physical manifestations of Jenna's personalities (for the lack of better word) are kind of scary. But at the same time the vengeance that they brought with them felt really satisfying.

 

This chapter was huge and I'm absolutely impressed by the amount of work, time and patience that must've went into it.  ? And what is more astounding, even with such a large scope of work you still paid attention to small details (such as adding all the information onto holographic screens and creating a neon sign for Hunter Lodge). This was a wonderful, exciting, funny and slightly terrifying chapter.  Amazing job! Thank you for sharing it with us. ?

 

P.S. We are going to completely ignore the fact of how late this comment is. Ok? Ok! Shhh, nobody saw anything. This comment has been here all along.

Hey I apologize for not responding to your comment much earlier. I will say that your comment did make me smile when reading it as helps so much in continuing to power through working on these stories to get them up. As you know, this is hard work and not easy especially with life going on and I wanna say that your comments have helped me so much!

Also im glad you enjoyed the references I made!

Hey just was wondering what is the name of the mod that adds Jenna's order of sisters armor as in the armor the second copy of her wears when she shows up to sero's office?