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Dark Ascension Horizon, Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3


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Parts 2 and 3 are  a direct continuation from the end of Part 1 and will conclude Chapter 7. You can catch up on Part 1 here: (Chapter 7: Part 1)

 

Jenna and the Mercenary Union rush to a village in distress. While attempting to save the villagers, Jenna is confronted in a situation where she ended up having more questions than answers provided to her.


 

Part 2

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Part 3

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Dark Ascension: Horizon, Book 2

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Part 1

Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3

 

Dark Ascension, Book 1

Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs

Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections 

Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon

 

Dark Ascension, Initiates' Tales

Part 1

Part 2

 

Edited by devious-Drunna

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After finishing the last scene of part 3, I noticed that the angle and lighting of the room  did make Sero look like Kor as I now understand/see how many would mistaken Sero as Kor. (Sero was the person who made the deal with the Institute Direktor at the end of Chapter 5).

 

So I went back and make small adjustments to Sero (eyes, etc) and also brighten the lighting in the room so you could see his Mohawk better. I did not reshoot/change every picture with Sero as some had the perfect angle and lighting that I would not have gotten if I reshot them in the newly lit room.

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:scream: oh Crap.... ;):heart::D I'm so glued to the story I'm on the edge of my seat :sweat_smile: That was crazy at the end there... When She said shit I said Crap. Great Yob Done! ;):thumbsup: 

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Oh gosh! That's a great work. I literally had my breath while reading this! 

A greatamout of gorgeous sex scenes, some cool narration and story development in addition to cool layout and intriguing cliffhanger! 

Great work!

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18 hours ago, Jayomms said:

:scream: oh Crap.... ;):heart::D I'm so glued to the story I'm on the edge of my seat :sweat_smile: That was crazy at the end there... When She said shit I said Crap. Great Yob Done! ;):thumbsup: 

Thanks that was the exact reaction I was going for! I was afraid people were gonna forget that alleyway gang from way back Chapter 2!

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16 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh gosh! That's a great work. I literally had my breath while reading this! 

A greatamout of gorgeous sex scenes, some cool narration and story development in addition to cool layout and intriguing cliffhanger! 

Great work!

OMgosh relief as I was afraid the development of part 2, while not wanting give too much away in that part, would’ve been confusing.

 

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Great work!

Loved the first part, reminded me of the good old days on your blog when the order still existed.

Any chance the story is moving back in that direction soon?

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On 6/5/2020 at 3:51 PM, Alter Native said:

Great work!

Loved the first part, reminded me of the good old days on your blog when the order still existed.

Any chance the story is moving back in that direction soon?

Thanks!

I’m not sure at this time. I have a rough outline of events leading up to  Book 2 and another for Book 3. However, I have deviated or added things to the story that was not originally planned (such as DymerDyne story and Jenny’s meeting of herself), so it may happen in some form(s). :)

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So, the story is finally linking with the events of Neverine take-over. You did great at creating an oppressive, mysterious atmosphere in the first part, intertwined with erotism and conflicting psychologics impulses. Yet what is even more interesting is that the consequences were real, as it seemed like a part of Neverine's power infused into Jenna, explaining the whereabouts of the defeated monsters (and brigands some chapters ago). Great work on the technical side as well, appreciated the aesthetics of the roof scene, but all the posing and expressions, and backgrounds were fitting to the events. And all those with a more than enjoyable length ! As for having the events turn too similar to the apocalyptic ending of Book I, contrary to Alter I think that would induce a repetition ; yet having that source of power express itself from a different host in a different setting, could still be dramatic while allowing for a variety of different outcomes. Great job as usual ! :smiley:?

 

Malicia : « I very think Jenna should keep the bottles she... uh, "uses" ; otherwise some people could find it and get very ill afterwards, you see ? :classic_excl:

               Maybe that's what happened to the monsters too. 

 

                Anyway, she should also tell the grey elves she's got Chlamydia,' cause they look not friendly at all, no. million_dollar_baby.gif »

On 6/5/2020 at 12:30 AM, devious-Drunna said:

So I went back and make small adjustments to Sero (eyes, etc) and also brighten the lighting in the room so you could see his Mohawk better. I did not reshoot/change every picture with Sero as some had the perfect angle and lighting that I would not have gotten if I reshot them in the newly lit room.

Good thinking. Hopefully you reminded us he was Sero and not Kor the scene right before it, so that lessened the risk of confusion.

 

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On 6/5/2020 at 3:51 PM, Alter Native said:

 

...the order still existed.

Any chance the story is moving back in that direction soon?

You also know how much I love that Order Skirt so honestly, you’ll prob will see Order outfits return a few more times.

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

So, the story is finally linking with the events of Neverine take-over.....

It was a conscious effort since I was finishing the last few chapters of Book 1, not to have Neverine at the beginning so I would have time and space to establish the new world and not limiting it to providing only snapshots of the world as they’re actively chasing Neverine.  
 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

You did great at creating an oppressive, mysterious atmosphere in the first part, intertwined with erotism and conflicting psychologics impulses. Yet what is even more interesting is that the consequences were real, as it seemed like a part of Neverine's power infused into Jenna, explaining the whereabouts of the defeated monsters (and brigands some chapters ago).....

 

Thank you and also the others who mentioned Jenna’s psychological conflicts and mystery as that section was the longest part of the chapter I spent time on because I was i afraid it wasn’t clear what was going on with Jenna at the same time not showing too much of the cards in my hand. 

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 I, contrary to Alter I think that would induce a repetition ; yet having that source of power express itself from a different host in a different setting, could still be dramatic while allowing for a variety of different outcomes. Great job as usual ! :smiley:?

 

15 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:

You also know how much I love that Order Skirt so honestly, you’ll prob will see Order outfits return a few more times 

 

?I was a huge fan of the world the first book played in and the story line of the order. I'm not voting for just repeating old stuff, but there lots of story lines in the old world unanswered and I'd love to see a return to their home world. But that's just me ;)

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3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

 

 

?I was a huge fan of the world the first book played in and the story line of the order. I'm not voting for just repeating old stuff, but there lots of story lines in the old world unanswered and I'd love to see a return to their home world. But that's just me ;)

I still have 3 or 4 stories in rough draft/notes form from my Initiate Tales, so I may go back to those  but will release them in my Drunna’s Den Blog :)

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Oh my! I'm so enthralled by your story that I don't even know how to comment properly. I just sit there, quietly checking to see when the new chapter gets posted. ? You're really taking us on a roller-coaster here with all the events unfolding: the Institute, Jenna's split psyche and sudden battle prowess (remnants of Neverine's power, perhaps? Or some other dormant abilities awakening inside her? ?), Sero's deception (I really hope that guy gets a completely accidental blade in the back soon :classic_ph34r:). I keep trying to guess where the tale is going but every time I think I sort of got it, you throw in a twist. I love it! ?

 

I know I've said it before, but your effects and layout are ridiculously good ?. And I'm really enjoying the Mercenary Union. That organization seems to have really colorful characters and it would be great to see more adventures with them.

 

Amazing work! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! ?

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On 6/7/2020 at 8:39 PM, Devianna said:

Oh my! I'm so enthralled by your story that I don't even know how to comment properly. I just sit there, quietly checking to see when the new chapter gets posted. ? You're really taking us on a roller-coaster here with all the events unfolding: the Institute, Jenna's split psyche and sudden battle prowess (remnants of Neverine's power, perhaps? Or some other dormant abilities awakening inside her? ?), Sero's deception (I really hope that guy gets a completely accidental blade in the back soon :classic_ph34r:). I keep trying to guess where the tale is going but every time I think I sort of got it, you throw in a twist. I love it! ?

 

I know I've said it before, but your effects and layout are ridiculously good ?. And I'm really enjoying the Mercenary Union. That organization seems to have really colorful characters and it would be great to see more adventures with them.

 

Amazing work! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! ?


Thanks. I’m regards to the colorful characters, i took several inspirations in terms of dialogue writing from several people including yourself to get the feeling/flow to create some distinction of personalities among the banter  :)

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On 8/26/2020 at 7:20 PM, SpyVsPie said:

This is advanced masturbation! ?

 

Comic format is on point as usual, really amazing job.


LOL, when you say advanced masturbation....you referring that if Jenna is sexually making out with her own self, is it sex or masturbation? :P

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On 3/9/2021 at 9:03 PM, devious-Drunna said:


LOL, when you say advanced masturbation....you referring that if Jenna is sexually making out with her own self, is it sex or masturbation? :P

 

Exactly! A question for the ages. 

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