Jeez! This is a great chapter, with a lot of features in terms of lore and information. Nice sex scenes(yay!) and an intriguing ending ^_^
Of course, it’s sometimes difficult to follow the characters’s mind, for reasons....
 

great job! ^_^

upd: Do you create all the locations and girls yourself? gosh, that huge amount of work.

Damn I still haven't found the window texture you're using. I'm so in love with the glass texture... 

It's not from this pack is it? It's quite common so it has to be in one of the nexus texture packs question is which one ?.

In case you're using MO could you quickly check which window texture replacer you are using? ?

Also great story, I really do love the last screenshot it's a really good and interesting way of setting up the next chapter, makes me almost wish you hadn't written about the shadows, they are perfectly recognizable without the added text.   

12 hours ago, Crw said:

Jeez! This is a great chapter, with a lot of features in terms of lore and information. Nice sex scenes(yay!) and an intriguing ending ^_^
Of course, it’s sometimes difficult to follow the characters’s mind, for reasons....
 

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very good reasons...

great job! ^_^

upd: Do you create all the locations and girls yourself? gosh, that huge amount of work.

Story

Most of chapter 10 was finished early January, however there were  about 3 pages in this chapter that focused on the Lore that halted the completion of Chapter 10. I wanted to make sure it was cryptic, but somehow made sense. I also tried to have the lore fuse in organically and preventing  one or two panels become a giant info-dump of exposition (which still happened   )

Characters

In regards of the character models, most came from the “Ordinary Women” NPC mod. Sera is an adjusted version of Aline Preset mod, and Captain Adrianna is the Delphine mod from Bijin. Milana as mentioned before was Janina companion (which I’m still sad I killed off). Jenny was my player character that I de-aged to look more like a 19yr old.

Captain Gabrielle was the first custom NPC I created that used an imported NIF. I struggled trying to make custom NPCs as I followed every step including the crt or alt+F4 thing but would never keep the face NIF. Gabrielle was the only one that worked. I have yet to replicate that success...

Locations

All of the interior locations were either custom made, or heavily modified existing vanilla ones as I needed to move walls, furniture, and clutter out of the way or moving around to get better camera angle shots. Also so I can control the lighting and atmosphere better. 

I did  thought about for each chapter adding the names of existing mods used in my shots at the final page back in Chapter 4. Would that be something good or not necessary?

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Damn I still haven't found the window texture you're using. I'm so in love with the glass texture... 

 

It's not from this pack is it? It's quite common so it has to be in one of the nexus texture packs question is which one ?.

In case you're using MO could you quickly check which window texture replacer you are using? ?

 

Also great story, I really do love the last screenshot it's a really good and interesting way of setting up the next chapter, makes me almost wish you hadn't written about the shadows, they are perfectly recognizable without the added text.   

Last Panel

The captions on the last panel was added at the last minute before I finalized the page. It was something I was debating to do or not. That said, it was fun working with the shadow spotlight mesh. I have same 3 rooms duplicated, each with the shadow spotlight angle in a different way to get the shadows projected on the wall to look right (plus lots of setscale adjusting on the creatures)

Windows

Even though I use MO, my Skyrim folder is really messy as i have all of the vanilla BSA assets unpacked into my data and might be some others that I forgot I had unpacked into my data folder. My only guess the window textures you see in the Citadel interiors are either from Siika's mod, Darkend mod (which usues some Siika assets), or "Noble Skyrim Mod HD Texture" which I think is the one as I opened the DDS file and this is what I have below:

1 hour ago, devious-Drunna said:

I did  thought about for each chapter adding the names of existing mods used in my shots at the final page back in Chapter 4. Would that be something good or not necessary?

Thanks for the detailed explanation.
Well, about custom followers - I feel you. Sometimes it 'just doesn't work'. No matter what Todd says. 

About the last question.
Imo: This is good, but not necessary. Sry for such answer  Whatever you feel right ll be the right one ^_^

Man, in addition to being beautiful, this was a good read as well,

It hurts my brain to think about all the lore you've come up with for this ?

can't wait for the next part !!

15 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Windows

Even though I use MO, my Skyrim folder is really messy as i have all of the vanilla BSA assets unpacked into my data and might be some others that I forgot I had unpacked into my data folder. My only guess the window textures you see in the Citadel interiors are either from Siika's mod, Darkend mod (which usues some Siika assets), or "Noble Skyrim Mod HD Texture" which I think is the one as I opened the DDS file and this is what I have below:

Thanks! They were part of the Noble Skyrim HD Textures mod, I finally got some good looking windows for Nora's castle!

 



 



 



 

You managed to fill us with quite a lot of lust lore here, with a good pace and a welcome degree of rephrasing to make sure the reader followed. Liked the part were the sisters are whispering about their motivations and understanding btw. ^^The sex scene was well brought and sized, and we got a nice cliffhanger at the end, with graphics as good as ever. So despite a not so eventful script, it was a nice read, good job ! ?

On 2/10/2019 at 12:39 PM, Alter Native said:

Thanks! They were part of the Noble Skyrim HD Textures mod, I finally got some good looking windows for Nora's castle!

 

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Malicia : « It's not the windows that are important, 'cause you can always put on curtains, you see ? What's important is the dress, and those white dresses with flowers and laces are very good looking,

             yes.  »

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « It's not the windows that are important, 'cause you can always put on curtains, you see ? What's important is the dress, and those white dresses with flowers and laces are very good looking, yes.  »

That seems like a good solution until you realize that you need good curtain textures... and don't even get me started on curtains... ? 

There are not even good models for curtains in the game... 

Goblins coming XD

On 2/13/2019 at 2:35 AM, Tirloque said:

You managed to fill us with quite a lot of lust lore here, with a good pace and a welcome degree of rephrasing to make sure the reader followed. Liked the part were the sisters are whispering about their motivations and understanding btw. ^^The sex scene was well brought and sized, and we got a nice cliffhanger at the end, with graphics as good as ever. So despite a not so eventful script, it was a nice read, good job ! ?

Malicia : « It's not the windows that are important, 'cause you can always put on curtains, you see ? What's important is the dress, and those white dresses with flowers and laces are very good looking,

             yes.  »

 

 

Thanks! Yeah, I’m trying to figure out how to format different dialogue delivers such as shouting, orgasms, whispering, when to use comic bubbles or not, or describe the speech action in the caption box.

i just realized all of the whispering scenes all involve Jasmine. Also, I think so far, Lauren is the only one with an inner dialogue with herself. 

On 2/13/2019 at 5:04 AM, Resdayn said:

Goblins coming XD

That is my favorite hentai thing, tall heroine overpowered/ganged by a group of much shorter and weaker looking goblin type creatures

2 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:

That is my favorite hentai thing, tall heroine overpowered/ganged by a group of much shorter and weaker looking goblin type creatures

Hahahaha