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Dark Ascension Horizon: Chapter 12, Part 2


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Selenia is still recovering from the shock when she encountered Jenna's dark aura which significantly intensified. As Selenia heads off to her contract, the Direktor of the Institute is busy dealing with several problems of her own. The Direktor's problems are further  exacerbated with the return of the MISTRESS - Neverine.
 

But Neverine brings news that she has discovered the key to unlock the Marker at the Monastery, allowing Agatha to tap into the power from the Dark Abyss . . .

 

 

Part 2

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Dark Ascension: Horizon, Book 2

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Part 1

Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3

Chapter 8

Chapter 9 "SPECIAL"

Chapter 10
Chapter 11: Parts 1 and 2
Chapter 11: Part 3
Chapter 11: Parts 4 and 5

Chapter 12: Part 1

Chapter 12: Part 2

 

Dark Ascension, Book 1

Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs

Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections 

Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon

 

Dark Ascension, Initiates' Tales

-From the Drunna’s Den Blog-

Part 1

Part 2

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Didn't get a notification on this one. Might be worth republishing to see if that helps ? (especially since you got a bit buried by random nonsense and people bumping old junk for some reason anyway). 

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Not notification either. Yet, great format, and a refreshing « villains » point of view for that chapter. I particularly appreciated Neverine being both sensual/rewarding and brutally violent/revengeful, it gives her a fitting erotic yet dangerous antagonist image. The progressive development of the scene, in a continuum from the early entries reminder, to the secondary characters exposition, and to Neverine's schemes was also a clever way to present things. Not to mention the broken skull + bodily fluids effects, and the now mastered comic layout. You're getting good at this ! :smiley:?

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « That old lady is getting her pee-pee kissed by the blond with the lizard tongue. When she'll wake up, she'll be even older, uh -> 200px-SR-creature-Draugr_Female.jpg  :classic_sleep: »

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On 3/25/2021 at 2:01 PM, SpyVsPie said:

Didn't get a notification on this one. Might be worth republishing to see if that helps ? (especially since you got a bit buried by random nonsense and people bumping old junk for some reason anyway). 

 

On 3/25/2021 at 4:27 PM, Tirloque said:

Not notification either.


 

Is there something on my end in settings that I need to make sure is correct?

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2 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:

 


 

Is there something on my end in settings that I need to make sure is correct?

 

I have had good luck by editing an entry, then going to the bottom and unticking the publish box (to make it private) then going back to the main entry page (not the edit page) and from the "entry actions" drop down menu selecting publish.

 

I tried a few ways of doing it and this specific sequence of events seemed to be the one that works.

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41 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

 

I have had good luck by editing an entry, then going to the bottom and unticking the publish box (to make it private) then going back to the main entry page (not the edit page) and from the "entry actions" drop down menu selecting publish.

 

I tried a few ways of doing it and this specific sequence of events seemed to be the one that works.


Ok. Just tried those steps, hopefully this will work!

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2 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:


Ok. Just tried those steps, hopefully this will work!

 

Looks like it worked ?

 

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Great work. 
Didn't get the notification either the first time you posted it, but now that you refreshed it, I did get the notification. Not sure what's going on there.

 

About the story. Glad to see Neve again, I was already missing her. It's been a while since we saw her like that, book 1 I think?

Can't wait to see her and Jenny together. 

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I got the notification the second time you posted as well (but not the first time).

 

Really enjoyed Tarkas and his reaction to being denied the right to possess the voluptuous eylon ?.  Also the scene with Direktor's reaction to Neverine redecorating her office with gore was priceless! ?

 

Somehow I really doubt the Direktor will get all that power that she's been promised.  ?

 

Wonderful job with the layout and the effects and pretty much everything else!

Really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds! ?

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Well, it seems everyone have that notification problem... Well anyway, I hope that this will never happen again to anyone ^_^ 
Great job on that one, Druuna! Pretty glad to see Neve in action once again! Tho i dednt expect that bloody turn, it rally fits her.
And that las cliffhanger-pic with creepy statye is just WOW!

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Neverine is back! She's so badass, I love her. That gore looked so grotesque.

 

Really loving how this is developing. One of my favorite things about your story is how tense everything feels. The dark atmosphere you've cultivated perfectly prevents any way of knowing what lies ahead. Well done!

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On 3/25/2021 at 4:04 AM, EvalovesEP said:

Love the work. Screen with head crushing is greatly done. All compliments for the whole story.

Hey! Great to hear from you and glad you enjoyed my entry!

 

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On 3/25/2021 at 4:27 PM, Tirloque said:

Not notification either. Yet, great format, and a refreshing « villains » point of view for that chapter. I particularly appreciated Neverine being both sensual/rewarding and brutally violent/revengeful, it gives her a fitting erotic yet dangerous antagonist image. The progressive development of the scene, in a continuum from the early entries reminder, to the secondary characters exposition, and to Neverine's schemes was also a clever way to present things. Not to mention the broken skull + bodily fluids effects, and the now mastered comic layout. You're getting good at this ! :smiley:?

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « That old lady is getting her pee-pee kissed by the blond with the lizard tongue. When she'll wake up, she'll be even older, uh -> 200px-SR-creature-Draugr_Female.jpg  :classic_sleep: »

Thanks for the compliments! You know it never occurred to me the layering of tension in this section. Always enjoyed your insights in things esp when even I did not catch what I did :)

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On 3/26/2021 at 8:06 PM, Alter Native said:

Great work. 
Didn't get the notification either the first time you posted it, but now that you refreshed it, I did get the notification. Not sure what's going on there.

 

About the story. Glad to see Neve again, I was already missing her. It's been a while since we saw her like that, book 1 I think?

Can't wait to see her and Jenny together. 


thanks! When I was taking screenshots of Neverine, esp with the shadows and lighting, I was telling myself that you were gonna love some of these shots I made of Neve!

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On 3/25/2021 at 4:04 AM, EvalovesEP said:

Love the work. Screen with head crushing is greatly done. . . .

 

 

On 3/25/2021 at 4:27 PM, Tirloque said:

Not to mention the broken skull  . . . .


I had spent some time photoshopping the skull crush scene and originally I had the skull broken in half down the middle so that one side kinda went under the other half. I forgot about the blood effects so  when I added the blood effects, it covered up the work I did with the two halves of the skull overlapping each other ?

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On 3/27/2021 at 1:33 AM, Devianna said:

I got the notification the second time you posted as well (but not the first time).

 

Really enjoyed Tarkas and his reaction to being denied the right to possess the voluptuous eylon ?.  Also the scene with Direktor's reaction to Neverine redecorating her office with gore was priceless! ?

 

Somehow I really doubt the Direktor will get all that power that she's been promised.  ?

 

Wonderful job with the layout and the effects and pretty much everything else!

Really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds! ?

Thanks!

I wanted to show the Direktor’s indifferences to the lives of others as the head of the Institute, she is almost above everyone else. 
I also wanted to address the Tarkas thing as I forgot about him further down the chapters. :P

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On 3/27/2021 at 5:08 AM, Crw said:

Well, it seems everyone have that notification problem... Well anyway, I hope that this will never happen again to anyone ^_^ 
Great job on that one, Druuna! Pretty glad to see Neve in action once again! Tho i dednt expect that bloody turn, it rally fits her.
And that las cliffhanger-pic with creepy statye is just WOW!

Yeah, because the story is so Jen focused, I never did get a chance to show off more or develop Neve as much. I was hoping this chapter gave a bit more characterization of Neverine. 

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On 3/27/2021 at 5:08 AM, Crw said:

Tho i dednt expect that bloody turn, it rally fits her.
 

 

On 3/28/2021 at 12:37 AM, Jayomms said:

Nice! Heads are poppin in this one. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup: 


thanks. The head pop scene was a later idea and I think I was inspired by someone else’s story where a persons heart was pulled out from their throat (it was either @Crw or @Alter Native  story).

 

I wanted an out of nowhere, WTF scene like that :)

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2 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 


thanks. The head pop scene was a later idea and I think I was inspired by someone else’s story where a persons heart was pulled out from their throat (it was either @Crw or @Alter Native  story).

 

I wanted an out of nowhere, WTF scene like that :)

It was SpyVsPie ;)

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22 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

It was SpyVsPie ;)

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Not that one. THere was a scene where someone reaches down someone else's throat and pulls out their heart. It was a blog entry sometime last year :P

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23 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:

Not that one. THere was a scene where someone reaches down someone else's throat and pulls out their heart. It was a blog entry sometime last year :P

 

Oh that was definitely Alter's Nora in the Hammerfell chapters. :sweat_smile: 

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On 3/28/2021 at 1:04 PM, Collygon said:

Neverine is back! She's so badass, I love her. That gore looked so grotesque.

 

Really loving how this is developing. One of my favorite things about your story is how tense everything feels. The dark atmosphere you've cultivated perfectly prevents any way of knowing what lies ahead. Well done!

 

Thanks! I try my best to keep tension stuff going esp with the upcoming Part 3 of Chapter 12 which Im hoping the horror style tension atmosphere will work. Im finding with lighting, it is always not that easy :(

 

But Yes, I need to put in time more so in showing how much of a badass Neverine is as well! :)

 

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On 4/4/2021 at 3:26 AM, Mr. Otaku said:

Holy shit a lot of work went into this, amazing stuff.

 

Thanks! Surprisingly, its writing the dialogue and story that seems to slow me down the most  :P

I think once i get dialogues and such written, i can easily get into a rhythm creating scenes and custom cells, it flies by very quick.

It is when I dont have all of the dialogue written that things slows me down as i am guessing which screenshots, poses, and angles to use and hope for the best

 

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