thank you a super cool story you have made there and nice ladies , will wait for what's to come  ?

She burned the Archmage's room in with Liquid Fire?  I think the Archmage must just be a light-weight when it comes to holding his liquor!  

Bunny Sparkles? ?  Nice little light hearted story. 

Nice little twist too......

Mr Hoot is clearly the brains of the operation.

Unexpected family reunion. xD

Love Bunny Sparkles!

As always, I always enjoy your dialogues between juxtaposing character types!

Also, your character here  reminded  me a lot of Vilga from the Cummoner WebComic series (not sure if you heard of her, but you’ll love it)

She's a nerd! I love her!

Pretty interesting story.

? ... absolutely great.

I love the fine details of her home, by the way.

The drawings at her alchemy crafting desk, I've seen them before. Do you remember where they are from?

If "cutiess" could cause a heart attack, I would have already gotten a few of em! Thats just supre amazing and super cute, Devianna! I think I fell in love with Bunny Sparkles ^_^
And what's more, a very interesting and intriguing start! ^_^ 

Fashion advice was well applied. What's the outfit?

Nice !

14 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you a super cool story you have made there and nice ladies , will wait for what's to come  ?

Thank you, Wilson! Glad you enjoyed it ?

12 hours ago, djregs said:

She burned the Archmage's room in with Liquid Fire?  I think the Archmage must just be a light-weight when it comes to holding his liquor!  

Actually it was the hellhound puppy that made a mess out of Archmage's quarters. In a very demonic-puppy kind of way. ? Though it is also entirely possible that the Archmage did start drinking afterwards. ?

10 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Bunny Sparkles? ?  Nice little light hearted story. 

Nice little twist too......

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Hehehe, thank you, Jayomms. Glad you liked the story.  ☺️

And yes, being summoned by someone named " Bunny Sparkles" is probably very aggravating ?

9 hours ago, Balgin said:

Mr Hoot is clearly the brains of the operation.

Naturally!

Grumpy, sarcastic, judgemental owls are the best! ?

7 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

Unexpected family reunion. xD

Very unexpected! For all parties involved! ?

6 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Love Bunny Sparkles!

As always, I always enjoy your dialogues between juxtaposing character types!

Also, your character here  reminded  me a lot of Vilga from the Cummoner WebComic series (not sure if you heard of her, but you’ll love it)

I've never heard of that webcomic before, but I went to look it up now and you're right - it's great! Thank you for recommending it. ?

I can definitely see some similarities, though Bunny's personality is slightly different from Vilga's. As for Trez - he would rather not have anything to do with her at all. ?

Thank you so much for your kind comment. ?

6 hours ago, Storms of Superior said:

She's a nerd! I love her!

 

Bunny simply prefers intellectually-stimulating past time, rather than engaging in frivolous activities like her peers...yeah, ok, you're right - she's a nerd. ?

4 hours ago, ther1pper said:

Pretty interesting story.

Thank you! Glad you liked it. ☺️

2 hours ago, worik said:

? ... absolutely great.

 

I love the fine details of her home, by the way.

The drawings at her alchemy crafting desk, I've seen them before. Do you remember where they are from?

Happy you enjoyed the story! ☺️

Bunny's home is from this mod (available both for SE and LE).

https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrim/mods/91304

I'm not sure where exactly the mod author got those drawings but you can probably just pull them out of the resources directly from the mod itself. ?

2 hours ago, Crw said:

If "cutiess" could cause a heart attack, I would have already gotten a few of em! Thats just supre amazing and super cute, Devianna! I think I fell in love with Bunny Sparkles ^_^
And what's more, a very interesting and intriguing start! ^_^ 

Aww, thank you for your kind words, Crw. ?

I wasn't planning on it originally, but Bunny's design ended up being kind of adorable so I kept it. I'm glad people like her.

And you're absolutely right - there's some intrigue going on there ?

59 minutes ago, malvic said:

Fashion advice was well applied. What's the outfit?

Thanks! If you mean Bunny's outfit, it's Ram Horn Witch by Team TAL.

Not gona lie, i came here for porn, but this is really interesting to read actually, many thanks for sharing you work:)

Excellent job, Deviana! While this does follow the classic 'Deviana formula', it's still unique in it's own right too. The characters all great so far; introduced wonderfully with so much room to go already! You better not make me wait 2 months again! ;)

Definitely worth the two month wait, fantastic work again Devianna and those colors in the first spoiler are absolutely amazing, not sure it's the location or your ENB, but every single screenshot is worth admiring!

Also love the characters, great work! Looking forward for what's to come ?.
 

On 9/13/2020 at 8:54 AM, Cema said:

Nice !

Thanks! Glad you liked it ☺️

On 9/13/2020 at 10:37 AM, Spenser said:

Not gona lie, i came here for porn, but this is really interesting to read actually, many thanks for sharing you work:)

It is actually incredibly flattering and touching to find out that the reader 'came for the porn, stayed for the story' ☺️.  Thank you for your kind words and I'm happy you found this little tale entertaining.

22 hours ago, Collygon said:

Excellent job, Deviana! While this does follow the classic 'Deviana formula', it's still unique in it's own right too. The characters all great so far; introduced wonderfully with so much room to go already! You better not make me wait 2 months again!

Thank you for your comment, Colly! ?  I really like how you pointed out "Devianna formula".  I guess there is a certain style, both visually and theme-wise to all of my stories. ? I'm glad that you picked up on the fact that this tale was an elaborate introduction of the main characters.  I'll try not to make readers wait another 2 months for the update, but no promises! ? (Seriously though, hopefully it won't take as long for the next chapter to come out).

20 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Definitely worth the two month wait, fantastic work again Devianna and those colors in the first spoiler are absolutely amazing, not sure it's the location or your ENB, but every single screenshot is worth admiring!

Also love the characters, great work! Looking forward for what's to come ?.
 

Oh wow, Alter.  Considering how stunning all of your screens are, that's an extremely high praise. Thank you for that! ?

I am using the same ENB as before, but after reinstalling Skyrim, I changed my lighting mod, overall textures and tweaked everything so the graphics are a bit softer now while still staying vibrant.

And of course, thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the screenshots and enjoyed the story. ?

The wait was longer than usual, but we were rewarded with a proportionally more developed episode. I think you have a knack for creating characters, and setting up flavorful interactions between them ; and Trez' ones with Bunny Sparkles (dat name ^^) were no exception. The clash between the ruthless warrior and the refined overeducated mage brought flawless near theatrical dialogues, for our entertainment. And this one was even improved by a bit of combats (the arrow catch with two fingers being a now classical case of badassery), and of fan service. Clear and colored screens as usual. Great chapter ! ? 

PS : I noticed there's often an [/img] at the end of your spoilers. That must mean you must have a too many tags or too few in your BBcode. Deleting the one appearing as visible surplus code afterwards shouldn't break the rest of them though.

Malicia : « She has a talking owl ! That's cause Ms Devianna very likes cute owls. So she had to gift Ms. Bunny one, yes. 

                Also I dunno what formula she used, but my daedras aren't handsome like Trez, no. So I never told them about my first honey-honey. »

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The wait was longer than usual, but we were rewarded with a proportionally more developed episode. I think you have a knack for creating characters, and setting up flavorful interactions between them ; and Trez' ones with Bunny Sparkles (dat name ^^) were no exception. The clash between the ruthless warrior and the refined overeducated mage brought flawless near theatrical dialogues, for our entertainment. And this one was even improved by a bit of combats (the arrow catch with two fingers being a now classical case of badassery), and of fan service. Clear and colored screens as usual. Great chapter ! ? 

 

PS : I noticed there's often an [/img] at the end of your spoilers. That must mean you must have a too many tags or too few in your BBcode. Deleting the one appearing as visible surplus code afterwards shouldn't break the rest of them though.

 

 

Malicia : « She has a talking owl ! That's cause Mr Devianna very likes cute owls. So she had to gift Ms. Bunny one, yes. 

 

                Also I dunno what formula she used, but my daedras aren't handsome like Trez, no. So I never told them about my first honey-honey. »

Thank you for your kind comment, Tirloque.  I guess I tend to like bringing together characters with personalities that are complete opposites of one another. It's just too amusing to write for them. ? I remembered that you mentioned at some point that it's nice to see more variety of events happening in a chapter, so while my heroes still talk a lot I slowly started to include a bit more action into my tales.  I'm glad you enjoyed it. ?

I use only regular tags in each spoiler and all the spoiler images are within those tags.  Does it mean it's too few? Or can I simply omit the [/img] tag at the end? ?

Author: Dear Malicia, it just so happened that Bunny and myself like owls. It's pure coincidence, really! ? As for Trez, Bunny modified the summoning spell a little bit and added a poem to it. You should try doing it as well and maybe you'll summon somebody nice too.

Fantastic! I dunno where to start...

Loved: the random "strategically" placed shots of your protagonist!

Loved: the Owl, and the completely ignored, but, truly omniscient point of view he/she represents. (I hear his/her voice in my head as "annoyed male")

Loved: the chemistry, or lack there of, between the protagonist and her "companion"

The way these two seemed from different worlds, yet ended up with the same results, reminded me of partisan politics!

Loved: that grandma was a GILF.

Hated: that this came out a few days ago, and I am only just catching up now!

17 hours ago, Devianna said:

Thank you for your kind comment, Tirloque.  I guess I tend to like bringing together characters with personalities that are complete opposites of one another. It's just too amusing to write for them. ? I remembered that you mentioned at some point that it's nice to see more variety of events happening in a chapter, so while my heroes still talk a lot I slowly started to include a bit more action into my tales.  I'm glad you enjoyed it. ?

And I'm not alone it seems.

17 hours ago, Devianna said:

I use only regular tags in each spoiler and all the spoiler images are within those tags.  Does it mean it's too few? Or can I simply omit the [/img] tag at the end? ?

Well the tags only work if there aren't already (and some hosting sites do provided them right off the bat), and for each image individually. If you're adding the tags at the start and the end of each spoiler it does nothing, and you could perfectly omit them. If you want yoru images displayed full width however, then you must ensure there are at both ends of every image url.

For example, without the tags (just the urls) :

With the tags :

Use your browser fullscreen and you should see the difference.

17 hours ago, Devianna said:

Author: Dear Malicia, it just so happened that Bunny and myself like owls. It's pure coincidence, really! ? As for Trez, Bunny modified the summoning spell a little bit and added a poem to it. You should try doing it as well and maybe you'll summon somebody nice too.

Malicia: « Ooh, that's very clever, yes. It would be nice if Frostie could talk, all he does is cracking and melting, uh.  »

On 9/15/2020 at 5:32 PM, WANOBI12 said:

Fantastic! I dunno where to start...

Loved: the random "strategically" placed shots of your protagonist!

Loved: the Owl, and the completely ignored, but, truly omniscient point of view he/she represents. (I hear his/her voice in my head as "annoyed male")

Loved: the chemistry, or lack there of, between the protagonist and her "companion"

The way these two seemed from different worlds, yet ended up with the same results, reminded me of partisan politics!

Loved: that grandma was a GILF.

Hated: that this came out a few days ago, and I am only just catching up now!

First of all - YAY! Good to see you back, Wanobi! ?

Second - I'm glad there are so many things that you liked about this story. ☺️ All of those strategic shots were relevant to the plot. Honest!

I love the idea of Mr. Hoot sounding like 'annoyed male'.  It really suits him.

The relationship between Trez and Bunny is a complicated one. It's a bit of a 'young manager that is put in charge of a much older and much more experienced coworker', which provides for a lot of amusing (for me) and highly annoyed (for Trez) dialogues. ?

Grandma Ylsa is hot, I agree. ? And no need to worry, the comics are here so you can read them any time you like. Divines know I also still have quite a lot of catching up to do with many wonderful stories that's been posted recently ( yours including!).

Thank you again for your comment! ☺️

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

And I'm not alone it seems.

Well the tags only work if there aren't already (and some hosting sites do provided them right off the bat), and for each image individually. If you're adding the tags at the start and the end of each spoiler it does nothing, and you could perfectly omit them. If you want yoru images displayed full width however, then you must ensure there are at both ends of every image url.

 

Thank you for the advice! I have been adding the tags at the start and end, as you pointed out.  (so it was [ img ] in the beginning of spoiler and then [ /img ] in the end).  I will try omitting them next time.

This new story sounds interesting to me, looking forward for continue. 

A good-looking main character with light-funny attitude and positive charisma?, dot spoil her with sex ^^ haha haaa, from other hand i wish to see her someone experienced dominate over her too. hmmm what will you do later with her?....we will see it soon, i guess!

Good job!

Aalso feels a hand of SpyvsPie  ,nice!

On 9/23/2020 at 7:29 AM, Akretija said:

This new story sounds interesting to me, looking forward for continue. 

A good-looking main character with light-funny attitude and positive charisma?, dot spoil her with sex ^^ haha haaa, from other hand i wish to see her someone experienced dominate over her too. hmmm what will you do later with her?....we will see it soon, i guess!

Good job!

Aalso feels a hand of SpyvsPie  ,nice!

Thank you for your kind words! I'm happy you liked Bunny and her unbound optimism (though it is at times misplaced). ?

As for sex, we'll find out a bit more about her take on that in the next few episodes. ?

And you're right. As I mentioned before, SpyVsPie also uses Skyrim SE version and he was kind enough to consult me on numerous technical issues. ?

Marvelos and stuning work. All praises.