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Merchant's troubles: The Contract


Devianna

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Hello, dear readers.

 

The next part of Kiki’s adventures will take a bit longer to finish as there are a few things I need to adjust and rewrite. In the meantime, I’d like to introduce you to a different character of mine. When I need to take a break from the main tale I sometimes write shorter, loosely connected stories. One such story is presented below. If you enjoy it and would like to see more, let me know in the comments and I’ll try to share some of them. ?

 

Warning: the following episode contains bureaucratic humor and NSFW content. ?


 

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hehe very nice story, love to see more of her. she is cute and funny, and quick witted... good combo.

 

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cant wait for more

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'Could i get this in writing please?'

 

This is one of the formulations where i get very very suspicious that something is up… and you didn't disappoint! ?

 

I'll be giggling the rest of the day...

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Very interesting and funny entry. The girl from the merchant guild is cute. Compliments for the story.

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8 hours ago, RamasesII said:

hehe very nice story, love to see more of her. she is cute and funny, and quick witted... good combo.

 

R.

 

 

cant wait for more

Thank you! I'm glad you liked Taisia and her little adventure. I think I'll share some more of her escapades in the near future. ?

 

8 hours ago, Kythana said:

'Could i get this in writing please?'

 

This is one of the formulations where i get very very suspicious that something is up… and you didn't disappoint! ?

 

I'll be giggling the rest of the day...

Miss D'Lune is first and foremost a business lady! One cannot go around pleasuring orcs willy-nilly without a proper contract! ?

Happy I could make you giggle. ?

 

4 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very interesting and funny entry. The girl from the merchant guild is cute. Compliments for the story.

Thank you for your kind words, Eva. ?

I agree, Taisia is adorably cute. ?

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29 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

@Devianna > Shall we see ore of her and is this kind of independent story from Kiki and Vul-Vul?

Taisia's adventures are separate from Kiki's, but they all happen in the same universe (and roughly the same time) and there are certain figures that both stories will have in common. As readers seem to like the little merchant, I'm thinking of publishing her stories from time to time. It also helps me to get a break from Kiki's main tale and not get burned out. ?

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Taisia is very lovely. I like her face. Not sure I understood her character well but I have a feeling she is a bit sarcastic and mean. Regardless of that, she captured my heart.

Very good entry. Compliments.

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thank you very nice and funny story cool lady signing contracts without legal adviser gets you a blowjob not bad ? ?

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1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Taisia is very lovely. I like her face. Not sure I understood her character well but I have a feeling she is a bit sarcastic and mean. Regardless of that, she captured my heart.

Very good entry. Compliments.

Oh wow! Thank you for such an insightful comment, Elf Prince. ? You brought up an excellent point - something I haven't really considered. Taisia isn't mean, per se, but she is a bureaucrat. So everything that she does is essentially for her own (and the guild's) benefit.  I guess you could say she is not necessarily a 'good' person, but she is a clever and funny one. ?

And thank you for your kind words! ?

 

1 hour ago, wilson99 said:

thank you very nice and funny story cool lady signing contracts without legal adviser gets you a blowjob not bad ? ?

Haha, well the 'oral-pleasure-services' were used as a trick to bind the blacksmith to the contract. On one hand he ended up making armor for an organization that he doesn't like, but on the other he got a cute girl attend to his carnal needs.  I guess even he doesn't know whether he won or lost in that deal. ?

Glad you liked it! ?

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Great job! I love Taisa and her look, she just appears super classy I like it a lot :thumbsup:.

That's why the sex scene felt a bit too out of character for me... I understand that in your story characters are a bit naive, in an intentional funny sense, but imo that felt too much for her...

Maybe if you just wanted to include a sex scene, she could have just gone home afterwards with a loving husband or friend waiting for her...

Nonetheless love this story from a technical perspective. Your screenshots have improved so much over the last year :thumbsup:

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47 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Great job! I love Taisa and her look, she just appears super classy I like it a lot :thumbsup:.

That's why the sex scene felt a bit too out of character for me... I understand that in your story characters are a bit naive, in an intentional funny sense, but imo that felt too much for her...

Maybe if you just wanted to include a sex scene, she could have just gone home afterwards with a loving husband or friend waiting for her...

Nonetheless love this story from a technical perspective. Your screenshots have improved so much over the last year :thumbsup:

First and foremost, thank you Alter Native for the comment and the compliments. I'm slowly learning how to tweak my Skyrim so it looks more pleasant. ?

 

And second - this is why the comments are important, as they really help me realize just how different each reader's perception might be of my stories.  I do not know whether you're familiar with MMORPGs such as Ragnarok Online or Lineage 2, but the idea of Taisia came from the merchant classes in those games. They are super cute, very classy and extremely brutal when it comes to making money. So getting someone to make a deal by using persuasion/diplomacy/threats/seduction is completely in character for Tai. The next little story with her will hopefully clear up some things. Curiously enough @Elf Prince also brought up a good point about Taisia's personality, as he cannot quite place her. It didn't even occur to me that she might end up such a confusing character. ?

 

P.S. The screenshot with a short bio for her does state that she likes orcs, by the way. So there might've been a bit of a personal preference in how she dealt with the blacksmith. ?

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31 minutes ago, KillinCuzICan said:

If only all business dealings were as...satisfying...as this one. Nice story!

Thanks! Taisia does prefer a more friendly and hands-on approach to her negotiations. ?

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Arght, just when Kiki was about to finally get intimate with her scholar conclude her quest, you deny her by publishing another story ! Such a cruel author... ?

 

Jokes aside, refreshing setup for an entertaining entry. Though she is a woman, Taisia isn't without similarities with Vulcun in her vocabulary and approach, in more mischievous, and less refined maybe. Nonetheless, colored screens, convincing posing and Jaxoning, successful implementation of Wanobi's techniques, and humorous punchlines all along for a quite pleasing result. Good job ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « You're very pretty and clever, Ms Taisia, and I was very impressed with your undressing technique It looked very expert, and I'd be very glad to learn it, yes.

               

               But you've got the same problem than me when kissing pee-pees : they get very broken afterwards, and it's not fun. Maybe we need to ask Cecilde. Or Ms Cleo. million_dollar_baby.gif »

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2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Arght, just when Kiki was about to finally get intimate with her scholar conclude her quest, you deny her by publishing another story ! Such a cruel author... ?

 

Jokes aside, refreshing setup for an entertaining entry. Though she is a woman, Taisia isn't without similarities with Vulcun in her vocabulary and approach, in more mischievous, and less refined maybe. Nonetheless, colored screens, convincing posing and Jaxoning, successful implementation of Wanobi's techniques, and humorous punchlines all along for a quite pleasing result. Good job ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « You're very pretty and clever, Ms Taisia, and I was very impressed with your undressing technique It looked very expert, and I'd be very glad to learn it, yes.

               

               But you've got the same problem than me when kissing pee-pees : they get very broken afterwards, and it's not fun. Maybe we need to ask Cecilde. Or Ms Cleo. million_dollar_baby.gif »

In my defense, postponing Kiki's next chapter allows me to get more practice with the screenshots, effects and improve on her story. (plus I needed a break ?)

 

You're correct about the similarities between Taisia and Vulcun, as both of them are very well-read and courteous.  It is also not surprising that Tai is less refined though, seeing as Vul-Vul has had centuries of practice, while the little merchant is in her early twenties. And I'm so glad you noticed that I've used @WANOBI12's tutorials (special thanks to him for all the wonderful work and explanations) ?.

 

Also, I'm really happy you picked up on the punchlines as I can now see that this type of humor is very particular (that's why I even put it in the "warnings"). Still, judging by the overall reactions a few more stories about Taisia are in order (depending on which ones I'll finish first: hers or Kiki's). ?

 

Taisia: Thank you, Malicia. You're too kind! Next time you're in Solitude, stop by our guild and we'll do lunch and some shopping. Oh, and there's this new wine that we just got imported, you absolutely must try it! And I'll tell you all about my clothing removal technique. ?

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Ooh, nice! I really like this story, hope we see more of her in the future. The potential with the setup is practically limitless and very original, not to mention my daily dose of bureaucratic humor has not been getting met since Futurama got cancelled:

 

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So was the bunny that distracted her the same one Kiki was playing with? ?

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2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Ooh, nice! I really like this story, hope we see more of her in the future. The potential with the setup is practically limitless and very original, not to mention my daily dose of bureaucratic humor has not been getting met since Futurama got cancelled:

 

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So was the bunny that distracted her the same one Kiki was playing with? ?

Thank you, Spy! Glad you liked it and I agree - there is a shortage of bureaucratic humor here on LL ?.  I've got a few ideas for Taisia stories, so I think we'll see more of her soon.

P.S. Someday the bunny mystery will be solved (and I'm impressed that you picked up on it as it was just a tiny mention). ?

P.P.S. Futurama was awesome! ?

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This was great!

What a refreshing side story with a unique, but right at home in Skyrim take!!

I really enjoyed it!! (even though I had to look up a few of those big words!)

Seems to me Ms. D'Lune could easily work her way to the top of the guild with her can do attitude, (and will do assets!)

Although making daddy proud may be out ?

Also she's hot ?

6 hours ago, Devianna said:

And I'm so glad you noticed that I've used @WANOBI12's tutorials (special thanks to him for all the wonderful work and explanations) ?.

Wow awesome!, I didn't think anyone read that shit!

Nicely executed as well!

Does my heart good!

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Oh my, i think i fell in love 

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That was great fun o read this! You are really talented in writing cool and funny things ^_^

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6 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

This was great!

What a refreshing side story with a unique, but right at home in Skyrim take!!

I really enjoyed it!! (even though I had to look up a few of those big words!)

Seems to me Ms. D'Lune could easily work her way to the top of the guild with her can do attitude, (and will do assets!)

Although making daddy proud may be out ?

Also she's hot ?

Wow awesome!, I didn't think anyone read that shit!

Nicely executed as well!

Does my heart good!

Hehe, sorry for the big words (and a lot of text) ?.

You propose a very interesting idea about Ms. D'Lune making her way up the guild leadership ladder... veeeery interesting indeed. ??

I'm happy you liked this story and seriously - thank you so much for your tutorials. ? Even without having Photoshop following your instructions was enough to produce something recognizable (I'm still learning, so it's a work in progress).

 

4 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh my, i think i fell in love 

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That was great fun o read this! You are really talented in writing cool and funny things ^_^

Aww, thank you Crw. ? I simply try to write things that would be enjoyable to read and that could make people laugh at least a bit. Of course adding cute girls and hot guys into the comics helps with the increasing the entertainment value. ?

Tai is such a darling, isn't she? ☺️ Here are a few extra shots of her:
 

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On 7/3/2019 at 1:10 AM, Devianna said:

 

P.S. Someday the bunny mystery will be solved (and I'm impressed that you picked up on it as it was just a tiny mention). ?

 

I like to think of myself as the Sherlock Holmes of Skyrim based erotica. 

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59 minutes ago, ther1pper said:

Suckered hard.

Yeah, the blacksmith really did get 'sucked' into that contract, didn't he. ?

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Great job with this one ?

 

Taisa certainly an interesting lady to have, I loved how she managed make the deal ?

 

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1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Great job with this one ?

 

Taisa certainly an interesting lady to have, I loved how she managed make the deal ?

 

Thank you, Resdayn! ?

Lady Taisia can get rather creative with her deal-making techniques. ☺️

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