thank you very nice and well presented story , i am looking forward for more  ?

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This... impressive.

The whole story was one BIG SWEETROLL! Literally! ?

Why do I feel so dirty now if I look at my LO ?

Beautiful story and great action scenes! ??

Damn, this is fucking great! Sweet story, сharismatic characters and a brilliant action scenes ^_^
That's how Wanobi strikes back!

Welcome Back!  ? 

Great work, and an amazing story!

Glad you're back! 

Back at it again to the storyboard? And with more fire power behind the keyboard.  Nice work! It was quite entertaining and the way she jumped that wall was truly brilliant!  Such a wonderful Story indeed.  

Nice to see you back again dude. Also can't wait for the next part.

AS usual, very good !

I was afraid the reception would be mixed, since you announced there were no sexual content in this one, but there was no reason to worry : once again the quality of the story content was top notch. Liked the twists your implemented all along , with Fjori escaping each obstacle, the bag content, and the conclusion of the chapter. That medieval slang hybrid language also gave a colored feel to it, Hats Lady would have approved. Graphically, the added effects (temporal blur, the rocks) were as good as usual, and the poses and expressions excellent. Same for the action sequences, well paced and crafted. Your ladies often share a family likeness though, but that's more of a trademark than anything. I'll also mention the constant references about the guards dialogues, we've got a man of culture here. ^^ Great work !

Malicia : « That Fjori gal is very pretty, very intelligent, and very strong. Just like me, yes. 

                  She's gonna meet that Holgeir guy again, trust me. »

On 8/16/2020 at 11:03 AM, wilson99 said:

thank you very nice and well presented story , i am looking forward for more  ?

On 8/16/2020 at 11:14 AM, donttouchmethere said:

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This... impressive.

The whole story was one BIG SWEETROLL! Literally! ?

Why do I feel so dirty now if I look at my LO ?

Beautiful story and great action scenes! ??

 

On 8/16/2020 at 11:22 AM, Crw said:

Damn, this is fucking great! Sweet story, сharismatic characters and a brilliant action scenes ^_^
That's how Wanobi strikes back!

On 8/16/2020 at 11:36 AM, djregs said:

Welcome Back!  ? 

On 8/16/2020 at 11:50 AM, Alter Native said:

Great work, and an amazing story!

Glad you're back! 

On 8/16/2020 at 1:40 PM, Jayomms said:

Back at it again to the storyboard? And with more fire power behind the keyboard.  Nice work! It was quite entertaining and the way she jumped that wall was truly brilliant!  Such a wonderful Story indeed.  

On 8/16/2020 at 3:04 PM, ther1pper said:

Nice to see you back again dude. Also can't wait for the next part.

On 8/16/2020 at 4:29 PM, Cema said:

AS usual, very good !

13 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I was afraid the reception would be mixed, since you announced there were no sexual content in this one, but there was no reason to worry : once again the quality of the story content was top notch. Liked the twists your implemented all along , with Fjori escaping each obstacle, the bag content, and the conclusion of the chapter. That medieval slang hybrid language also gave a colored feel to it, Hats Lady would have approved. Graphically, the added effects (temporal blur, the rocks) were as good as usual, and the poses and expressions excellent. Same for the action sequences, well paced and crafted. Your ladies often share a family likeness though, but that's more of a trademark than anything. I'll also mention the constant references about the guards dialogues, we've got a man of culture here. ^^ Great work !

 

Malicia : « That Fjori gal is very pretty, very intelligent, and very strong. Just like me, yes. 

 

                  She's gonna meet that Holgeir guy again, trust me. »

Thanks so much all, glad you enjoyed! ?

superb action scene and was that a Han Solo reference?

15 hours ago, Aristoslowpoke said:

superb action scene and was that a Han Solo reference?

Thanks! And indeed it was, along with a Captain Kirk Reference!!

There's no shame in my game ?

Well look who's back. My, my, my how the turntables.

I had assumed you died in some sort of pornography related computer explosion or some sort of pornography related wife attack. Nice to know you survived!

Anyway great and heartwarming start! I guess you're easing your way back in to slit throats and descents into madness ?

On 8/26/2020 at 5:50 PM, SpyVsPie said:

My, my, my how the turntables.

Paaamm, I'm not in the mood for riddles..

On 8/26/2020 at 5:50 PM, SpyVsPie said:

some sort of pornography related wife attack

Are you kidding? She loves porn!

It means i don't try to touch her so much!!

On 8/26/2020 at 5:50 PM, SpyVsPie said:

I guess you're easing your way back in to slit throats and descents into madness

Also there might be boobs!

9 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Paaamm, I'm not in the mood for riddles..

 

Are you kidding? She loves porn!

It means i don't try to touch her so much!!

 

Also there might be boobs!

Boobs?! This is a family website, sir! ?

I know I've said it before, but - WELCOME BACK! We missed you and your tales! ?

A new Skyrim game in which you're trying to do everything (especially if you have mods installed) is bound to provide a few hundred hours of entertainment, at the very least, so have fun there! ?

Absolutely loved the story, the characters, the action scenes and all the photoshoped effects. Special mention should go to the orphans with the sweetrolls scene. It was so touching and so wholesome.  And of course another special mention should go to the little book edits that you created for each spoiler.  They added just the right touch of narrative to make it truly feel like we are reliving the events of a great adventure tale. 

Thank you for sharing your work with us and I cannot wait for the next chapter! ?

On 9/19/2020 at 12:00 AM, Devianna said:

Special mention should go to the orphans with the sweetrolls scene. It was so touching and so wholesome

I can't imagine, where I would have read something, and maybe a lil "copied it" to make my stories more wholesome and touching....

No sir.... can't think of any author who could have inspired me so.....

Its you!! Get it? ?

Hello, my name is Collygon, the oblivious idiot. I DO NOT KNOW HOW I MISSED THESE! I'm very embarrassed. I thought I was following your blog and I guess I just assumed these were old entries because I never got a notification? Boy, I feel very dumb with my response to your comment on my story. Goodness...

Let's move on please.

Uhm, first of all, this was terrific! So charming and sweet. I love both characters already. Did it move fast? Sure. But that didn't feel incorrect, it felt perfectly natural. And those shots were amazing! You're always so creative with how you set up your images. The hammer in the gate handle looked flawless. I don't normally spend a lot of time looking at shots, but I always find myself enamored with yours. Gonna be reading the next two entries of yours IMMEDIATELY! I'm hooked!

3 hours ago, Collygon said:

this was terrific! So charming and sweet. I love both characters already.

Thanks Colly! Glad you enjoyed!

3 hours ago, Collygon said:

Did it move fast?

Yeah, I find that if I don't move it along with these stories I tend to get sidetracked...         

"Squirrel!!"

..or bored, which is a really bad problem to have with one's own story ?