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Nytraste Part 1: A Fall From Grace


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Hey folks! Sorry it took so long to get this one out! My computer broke last month and had to have the Geek Squad fix er up =(

Good to go now tho, and continuing where we left off!

Enjoy, and have a great weekend!! ?

 

P.S. Yeah I know, its long!

 

P.P.S. wow there's a sentence I've not often used in life ?

 

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Holy crap..this story took a quick and dark turn! Also, I dont know why, but my mind started to think that Darius was breaking out into song in your 3rd spoiler tag set of pictures

 

Oh and the feature pic (header) of this story post was sexy (forked tongue over the cock).

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By the Divines! Your stories are always gorgeous and imaginative, but it feels like you've outdone yourself with this one. Both in terms of visuals and the tale itself.  Mara's transformation into butterflies is breathtaking (I am afraid to ask just how long it took you to position all of them for the screenshot) and the flexibility of Vice's tail is stunning. 

 

Mara's story is romantic and heartbreaking. I wonder whether Sanguine acted on his own or was this someone else's plan all along. ?

 

Also this time special mention goes to Almont and Acacia's dialogues. They are an extremely entertaining duo. ?

 

Thank you for sharing this gem with us and we absolutely need more ?.

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Oh my gooooood. What a turnaround!!! Poor Darius. He was tricked. Mara should know it from the start seeing Sanquine and his servant. And that blind girl  is veeeeery beautiful. That blacksmith is a lucky bastard. :)

 

Most excellent as always, wanobi. You deserve much more likes, at least dozen.

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Oh. My. Gosh! 

That's just great! 

I love it! 

Here we're got everything: Sam'guine, demon girl, semi-lewd Goddess, intrigue, effects! 

Just like the doctor ordered.

Ps okay, now we have Dibella and Mara, how many Goddess we have to lewd? Kynareth?)

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Another great entry, wow I can not wait for the next one.

 

Aria: Damn you Sanguine, its like you know red babes attract danger. Better not try that with me or I'll... oh crap

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14 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I guess she liked Darius because he was ? well hung. ?

Hah! Yeah but in the end, he was just too "high strung"=)

 

13 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Aww how depressing...

Well my other idea for an ending was that they get married, move in together, and share a toothbrush!

All In all, I'd say killin' himself,  was the happy ending ?

 

11 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Holy crap..this story took a quick and dark turn!

If you think that's dark, you should check out 

 

11 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

I dont know why, but my mind started to think that Darius was breaking out into song in your 3rd spoiler tag set of pictures

It did kinda feel like a, "Hills are alive"/ "Maria", moment didn't it ?

 

11 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Oh and the feature pic (header) of this story post was sexy (forked tongue over the cock).

Gotta sell the sizzle ?

 

11 hours ago, Devianna said:

(I am afraid to ask just how long it took you to position all of them for the screenshot)

It actually took so long to position the ONE monarch in the earlier scene, that I said fuck it an just photo shopped the moths for Mara's transformation! Glad you dug it! 

 

11 hours ago, Devianna said:

Mara's story is romantic and heartbreaking. I wonder whether Sanguine acted on his own or was this someone else's plan all along. ?

Everything is as it seems, I needed to knock her up, and then I needed to get rid of the dude. Sanguine just provided a way to do it with erotica ?

 

11 hours ago, Devianna said:

Thank you for sharing this gem with us and we absolutely need more ?

Thank you for reading! And the kind words! ?

11 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Oh my gooooood. What a turnaround!!! Poor Darius. He was tricked. Mara should know it from the start seeing Sanquine and his servant. And that blind girl  is veeeeery beautiful. That blacksmith is a lucky bastard. :)

 

Most excellent as always, wanobi. You deserve much more likes, at least dozen.

Thank you Eva, glad you enjoyed ? 

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8 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh. My. Gosh! 

That's just great! 

I love it! 

Here we're got everything: Sam'guine, demon girl, semi-lewd Goddess, intrigue, effects! 

Just like the doctor ordered.

Ps okay, now we have Dibella and Mara, how many Goddess we have to lewd? Kynareth?)

Thanks Crw, glad you liked it!

 

P.S. Doctor's orders, "Lewd all Goddesses!! Stat!"

 

7 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Another great entry, wow I can not wait for the next one.

 

Aria: Damn you Sanguine, its like you know red babes attract danger. Better not try that with me or I'll... oh crap

Thanks Tex,  wonder where I got the idea for a red chick having sex? ?

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Sad story, but it feels very Sanguine-ish!  Good Job!  

 

I kinda want to meet this "Krunk" guy.  He seems like he'd be a fun time.  

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O.O Oh my god, I wasn't expecting that escalation...

 

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WHAM! I have no idea where I'm going with this... Anyway, you literally gave me chills. Damn. Amazing job, Wanobii!

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12 hours ago, djregs said:

Sad story,

Oh cmon, it was "mostly happy"

 

12 hours ago, djregs said:

I kinda want to meet this "Krunk" guy.  He seems like he'd be a fun time.  

That reference may be a little after my time, sorry =(

 

10 hours ago, Collygon said:

WHAM! I have no idea where I'm going with this...

That makes two of us ? but thanks much for the nice words Colly ?

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Mister Wanobi, will you stop making me thrilled with your episodes ;) (just joking). This is excellent episode and I felt bad about Mara priest who hung himslef. Damn succubus.

Many praises for everything: screenshots, effects, story and good looking girls. :)

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21 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Mister Wanobi, will you stop making me thrilled with your episodes ;) (just joking). This is excellent episode and I felt bad about Mara priest who hung himslef. Damn succubus.

Many praises for everything: screenshots, effects, story and good looking girls. :)

Thanks EP ?

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I must agree with Devianna on this, that chapter was remarkable not only technically ( (the effects from the monarchs transformation up to the succubus tongue/tail...), but also in terms of scenario and staging : the ugly devote falling in love with a blind lass was the kind of idea you'd find in folkloric tales, and Mara's affair afterwards was as enticing than it was tragic in the end. Also quite convinced by the dialogues, with the touch of the "co-listener" Almont allowing for interesting jokes and changes in pace (plus who am I to deny the protagonists telling the story by themselves ? ^^). Anyway, we are entertained, master Wanobi ! :smiley::thumbsup:

 

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