Wow! Very Creative work like the book narration.... and getting paid to do this instead of the other work we do would be nice indeed. 

I thought that proposal was cute! Also, who knew gutting fish could sound so sexual?  

Well done on the .gifs, and I'm interested to see how Fjori gets out of this one!   

As well crafted as your usual, Wanobi. The poses and movement effects were flawless, but going as far as animating the fluids spraying moments for the gifs is your special touch no one here can equal yet. However, sensual moments put aside, your strongest assets are the dialogues and the staging, with twists (often humorous) being planted all along. I'm not too found of the sort of grain filter you added to make the aspect "old book" like though as they're often similar to what minute jpeg artifacts could produce. And sometimes (when Runa talked while sobbing for example), the bubbles placement was suboptimal. But that's minor, overall the technical execution is outstanding. And we had action, sex, humor, and story content all in one entry. Thanks for the share !

Malicia : « I very like that Fjori gal, she's very intelligent and very clever.

              Plus she's very good at making mannequins, yes.  »

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P.S. It has come to my attention that some folks have no idea what kind of shenanigans go on here on the LL site.

I've read a blog or two where people are really offended by the content here.

To me it was like.. "duh" but I have to be respectful, so with that in mind, I've come up with a lil disclaimer for my blog...

LL is a place of freedom of expression. If people don't like something, they're free to do so, but they can't reproach to the author of using that very same freedom for his/her creations. The only limit to that is pedophilia, which will always be a no go, but aside from that everything goes.

Great job as always, naw ibo! The fish misdirection scene was great and while I'm not usually much of a fan of gifs or videos in stories that cumshot on her butt was absolutely amazing. Plus we have some sort of plot type thing starting to develop too so I guess that's okay also ?

On 9/30/2020 at 8:27 PM, Jayomms said:

Wow! Very Creative work like the book narration.... and getting paid to do this instead of the other work we do would be nice indeed. 

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And damn that boy is out! He's all like Tally Hoe Bitches I'm outta here! 

 

On 9/30/2020 at 9:32 PM, djregs said:

I thought that proposal was cute! Also, who knew gutting fish could sound so sexual?  

 

Well done on the .gifs, and I'm interested to see how Fjori gets out of this one!   

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

As well crafted as your usual, Wanobi. The poses and movement effects were flawless, but going as far as animating the fluids spraying moments for the gifs is your special touch no one here can equal yet. However, sensual moments put aside, your strongest assets are the dialogues and the staging, with twists (often humorous) being planted all along. I'm not too found of the sort of grain filter you added to make the aspect "old book" like though as they're often similar to what minute jpeg artifacts could produce. And sometimes (when Runa talked while sobbing for example), the bubbles placement was suboptimal. But that's minor, overall the technical execution is outstanding. And we had action, sex, humor, and story content all in one entry. Thanks for the share !

 

Malicia : « I very like that Fjori gal, she's very intelligent and very clever.

 

              Plus she's very good at making mannequins, yes.  »

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LL is a place of freedom of expression. If people don't like something, they're free to do so, but they can't reproach to the author of using that very same freedom for his/her creations. The only limit to that is pedophilia, which will always be a no go, but aside from that everything goes.

6 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Great job as always, naw ibo! The fish misdirection scene was great and while I'm not usually much of a fan of gifs or videos in stories that cumshot on her butt was absolutely amazing. Plus we have some sort of plot type thing starting to develop too so I guess that's okay also ?

Thanks for all the great feedback guys!! I do love your comments ?

22 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

 

 

 

Thanks for all the great feedback guys!! I do love your comments ?

I aim to please!

20 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I aim to please!

Malicia : « Not always, no.  »

Okay, most likely it was alredy mentioned and I late to the party, but that was fuking amazing! The scenes, the ideas and their realization, each movement and character position was perfectly clear! With a great dose of humor and eroticism!
I got the feeling that I really read a professional comic!

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Not always, no.  »

Why, what have you heard ?

13 hours ago, Crw said:

Okay, most likely it was alredy mentioned and I late to the party, but that was fuking amazing!

Thanks CRW!

13 hours ago, Crw said:

I got the feeling that I really read a professional comic!

Oh, go on....

No really,  go on =P

On 10/2/2020 at 8:51 PM, SpyVsPie said:

I aim to please!

23 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Not always, no.  »

8 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Why, what have you heard ?

Uhhhhh, should we be seeing this?

8 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Why, what have you heard ?

Malicia : « I heard that, you had promised ponies to some people who never got them, no.

                I very heard it.  »

39 minutes ago, WANOBI12 said:

Uhhhhh, should we be seeing this?

Better not get between an angry woman an her target ; I'd say.

18 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I heard that, you had promised ponies to some people who never got them, no.

 

                I very heard it.  »

Better not get between an angry woman an her target ; I'd say.

 

Should I consider witness protection ?

A fantastic part 2! Gosh, this might be my favorite of yours. The pacing is perfect and the stakes are ramping up! It's seriously so well done. Oh ,and that fish scene? HA! I really fell for that one. Loved it xD

3 hours ago, Collygon said:

A fantastic part 2! Gosh, this might be my favorite of yours. The pacing is perfect and the stakes are ramping up! It's seriously so well done. Oh ,and that fish scene? HA! I really fell for that one. Loved it xD

Thanks Colly!