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So, here's Chapter 5. It's a bit shorter than the last chapter, but my idea for Chapter 5 kinda ballooned, and has now taken over the next several chapters. 

 

I did a lot of experimenting in this chapter. I feel like some of it worked out really well, and some of it still needs a little work.

 

Previous Chapters can be found here:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

 

Lexi Stories (Featuring yours truly) Can be found here:

DVD Extras

A Message From Lexi

 

And, on with the Chapter!

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Meanwhile. In Solitude...

 

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Okay, I'm really confused right now, but I really do love this daedric girl of yours and a whole emh... dream(?)
And separate plus for a lesbomancy ^_^ best magic school ever.
Good job ^_^

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1 hour ago, Crw said:

Okay, I'm really confused right now, but I really do love this daedric girl of yours and a whole emh... dream(?)
And separate plus for a lesbomancy ^_^ best magic school ever.
Good job ^_^

Thanks! It's meant to be a little confusing right now! 😆

 

I can personally assure you that shortly into chapter 6 you'll have a pretty solid idea of what's going on. 😀

 

I can't seem to write anything without having a dream sequence at since point. It is a bit earlier than I was expecting. 

 

Glad you like Daedra girl. She's the first npc I specifically created for this story. I also did my own take on Sybille's look. 

 

Glad you're still enjoying! 😍

 

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Can i make a request ?

Can you send me some screenshots about the kinky princess mod ? I can't use SSE or convert that mod to LE skyrim... but I think the manor shape can be useful for a project.

 

Thanks in advance

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31 minutes ago, Delzaron said:

Can i make a request ?

Can you send me some screenshots about the kinky princess mod ? I can't use SSE or convert that mod to LE skyrim... but I think the manor shape can be useful for a project.

 

Thanks in advance

Probably be a day or two. Gonna be busy the next couple days.  You just want like screenshots of the interior and exterior? 

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Nice entry. A bit static scene-wise, but you made up for that with the dialogues' and captions quality. Also liked the humor, specially with those movie-like credits rolling during the intro 😂). The daedric dream/nightmare twists were good, specially the daedra's transformation, which felt as surprising than dramatic. Technically the screens are good, and nothing to say about the lighting and expressions. Now after building such mysteries, it's a bit cruel (but commercially excellent ^^) to end on a cliffhanger : we want to know what's next ! :smiley:

 

Also, don't know if that's intentional but :

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Yours truly.

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Malicia : « First I wanna say to all the LexisAJ82 who worked on this movie they did a very good job, uh. :star:

 

               'cause it shows why it's very dangerous to kiss another girl on the mouth, so it's very educative. :classic_lightbulb: »

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20 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

Probably be a day or two. Gonna be busy the next couple days.  You just want like screenshots of the interior and exterior? 

Both please. I wish to see where it the place, the exterior look of each face, the interior (and the plan in CK if possible).

 

Yes, it's for NMM. I plan a redone, but I need a good scenario before beginning it (why the player woul join a vampire and her prostitutes by the beginning ?)

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On 4/22/2020 at 1:24 PM, Tirloque said:

Nice entry. A bit static scene-wise, but you made up for that with the dialogues' and captions quality. Also liked the humor, specially with those movie-like credits rolling during the intro 😂). 

Yeah. I thought that would be kind of fun, but mostly I thought it was a good place to get a nice chunk of the expositional narration dialogue out of the way without overshadowing the character scenes. 😀 

 

I also very much enjoyed showing Thora's cocky, playful side with the "swordfight" and then doing a 180 and taking her to the other side of the emotional spectrum with nothing in between. 

On 4/22/2020 at 1:24 PM, Tirloque said:

 The daedric dream/nightmare twists were good, specially the daedra's transformation, which felt as surprising than dramatic. Technically the screens are good, and nothing to say about the lighting and expressions. Now after building such mysteries, it's a bit cruel (but commercially excellent ^^) to end on a cliffhanger : we want to know what's next ! 

Yeah. I love writing dream sequences. They're so full of possibilities. As far of as it is at this point I have the major events of Thora's story planned out to the end so this dream sequence will (and already has been actually) be full of foreshadowing and subtext. There are so many things, even a ways of yet that youi'll be able to come back to these chapters and be like, Oh, that was hinted at way back here. 

 

I think I'm getting a pretty good handle on the screenshots and presentation, so I appreciate the compliment. 

 

Yeah... cliffhangers are kinda my specialty so expect them every once in a while. 

On 4/22/2020 at 1:24 PM, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « First I wanna say to all the LexisAJ82 who worked on this movie they did a very good job, uh. :star:

 

               'cause it shows why it's very dangerous to kiss another girl on the mouth, so it's very educative. :classic_lightbulb: »

Thanks! All the LexiAJ82s appreciate it! 😍 

 

And yes... verrrry dangerous. 😯

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Very curious chapter and true to it's dream-like scenario just the right amount of confusing. :classic_ph34r:

 

If I'm reading this correctly, the dream sort of picks up from the ending of Chapter 4 where Thora falls asleep while crying. The narration hints on the poor girl visiting the land of Quagmire as a child and possibly meeting Vaermina or one of her servants numerous times (if that is the case it might explain a sort of fearless abandon with which Thora sometimes carries herself. After such meetings nothing else could ever truly scare her). I wonder if the transgressions that the daedric being mentions is related to the fact that Thora was taking skooma for a few years and as such 'cheated' her way out of nightmares. 🤔 Of course I might be completely off with my guesses, but one thing is clear - Thora and her family's background is very intriguing and mysterious 😮.

 

I really like how you portrayed Sybille. She looks pleasant and friendly but at the same time there's a rather sinister air about her.  Also great job on her redesign! Thora's daedric visitor also looks wonderful. Her skin color suggests her connection to Vaermina (purple and greenish swirls) but daedra, especially Daedric Princes, aren't really tied to one image so it really can be anyone. 😵

 

Excellent work on the screenshots and a captivating story. Really looking forward to more! 😊

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5 hours ago, Devianna said:

Very curious chapter and true to it's dream-like scenario just the right amount of confusing. :classic_ph34r:

 

If I'm reading this correctly, the dream sort of picks up from the ending of Chapter 4 where Thora falls asleep while crying. The narration hints on the poor girl visiting the land of Quagmire as a child and possibly meeting Vaermina or one of her servants numerous times (if that is the case it might explain a sort of fearless abandon with which Thora sometimes carries herself. After such meetings nothing else could ever truly scare her). I wonder if the transgressions that the daedric being mentions is related to the fact that Thora was taking skooma for a few years and as such 'cheated' her way out of nightmares. 🤔 Of course I might be completely off with my guesses, but one thing is clear - Thora and her family's background is very intriguing and mysterious 😮.

 

I really like how you portrayed Sybille. She looks pleasant and friendly but at the same time there's a rather sinister air about her.  Also great job on her redesign! Thora's daedric visitor also looks wonderful. Her skin color suggests her connection to Vaermina (purple and greenish swirls) but daedra, especially Daedric Princes, aren't really tied to one image so it really can be anyone. 😵

 

Excellent work on the screenshots and a captivating story. Really looking forward to more! 😊

Thank you. 

 

Yep. It picks up as she fell asleep in the brothel and her past nightmares definitely have a... connection to the present so you're definitely heading in the right direction with your suppositions. 🤔 Though I won't say you're 100% correct. 

 

The lore behind Thora and her family is pretty complex (I have like two or three pages of notes just regarding her family history 😯) but we are about to get at least a cliff notes version from Sybille via Gisli. That may or may not start to shed some light on it. 

 

As far as Sybille's redesign, glad you like it. None of the npc replacers I use touch her and, for someone who's going to have a not insignificant role going forward, I wanted her to have a more distinctive look going forward. She's such an under utilized character in the base game and her vanilla appearance is so blah! 😝  

 

The colors of Daedra girl are a definite and intentional nod to Vaermina. As I've mentioned here I a slightly love writing dreams, which probably makes her one of my favourite Princes so it was inevitable that her realm would probably tie in at some point. 

 

Glad you're continuing to enjoy. I'm currently putting together chapter 1 of Aza so it might be just a bit longer than normal for Chapter 6, but it's definitely on the way!

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Agents of Mephala, so hot right now 🤣. Dream stonks 📈

 

I really liked the internal monologue and the setup with the skooma making her not dream was very well done and really draws the reader in to the story. 

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