Chapter 3: A Bard's Pride
I might have had this ready for upload yesterday, but Devianna suggested adding Facelight in. I did, and was much happier with the shots, so I ended up doing another set of reshoots.
Thank you to her and Triloque for all of the helpful suggestions they've added along the way. I don't know how good this actually is, but I do know it's a lot better than it would have been without their help and support. This is the first time I've tried something this ambitious, so I'm still learning a lot along the way.
If you haven't read the first two chapters, you might actually be okay. I think this chapter does a good job of setting up and recapping the main plot points.
(12/5/21: For anybody reading this entry for the first time, I've also put up a "remastered" version. It doesn't really change anything story wise, and the imagery is more or less the same, but I have changed the style of Thora's inner monologue text boxes to bring them more in line with my current chapters, as well as shifted some of the dialogue bubbles and text boxes around to
improve the readability and flow. (I've also added one... kind of dumb joke back in that somehow got cut out when I was making the original. I do enjoy being able to took back on my progress and see how far things have come so, rather than just outright replacing the original, I've decided to simply add the new version underneath.)
If you're only going to read one version, I recommend the remastered version, but feel free to read either.
Thank you!
Lexi❤️
So, enjoy!
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And, here is the remaster:
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Thank you to all who read!
Edited by LexiAJ82
Added "Remastered" Version
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