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A few tweaks for Lilith. I made her eyes more almond shaped, recolored her eyebrows so that they were about the same color as the roots of her hair, I recolored the crown to make it look more "Hellish" and "edgy," and I recolored the horns to make them look more cohesive to the rest of her outfits and color scheme.

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Since the horns originally took up the earrings slot and I wanted her to have earrings, I tried to make it work by changing the horns's category to a different accessory, but it ended up causing some color/texture glitches.

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So, the Empress will have to make do without any earrings (sadface).

 

I also ditched the other dress from before since I didn't think it matched the rest of her. Now, I'm having trouble choosing between the following dresses:

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Dress 1:

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Dress 2:

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Dress 3:

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Dress 4 (her original dress in the old version) : 

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I think any of these four could work, but I'm curious to see what you all think. Remember, Lilith is the Empress of Gehenna, a grandmaster succubus, an elite warrior mage, and a 1,000+ year old demon MILF; I'm trying for a balance between sexy and regal. In short, Lilith has to look like a queen who doesn't just have sex, she has to look like she FUCKS??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

 

So, like, yeah, I would really appreciate some feedback from y'all.

 

Bonus: Lilith's human disguise:

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@porkybork the human form is so cute that it's almost a heartbreak to see the transformation ??

She looks great though and the colour of the earrings kinda works too as it matches the crown and looks quite otherworldly 

 

I'd have to say dress 2 is my choice, it has a regal presence and elegance, the top half has the slutty charm without being cheap,

I was almost drawn to dress 4 but I now think this looks like maybe something her subordinates or priestess would wear

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Hey all! Some more redos of my characters here. This time, I'll be showing off the Aikuchi family. I haven't properly introduced them yet, but I have shown the daughter character a couple times in previous posts. These are going to be a bit text heavy as well, so I'm going to put pretty much everything in the spoilers to keep this post looking a bit more palatable.

 

Kouta Aikuchi:

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Kouta is a former Yakuza member who left Japan with his wife, Aimi, to start a family away from any danger. Everything seemed to go well enough at first, but over time, things between him and his wife got really tense. No one outside of their own household really knows the cause of all their drama. It couldn't be financial since they live in a good neighborhood and can afford to send Harumi, their daughter, to a private school; and Kouta and Aimi have always taken their vows seriously, so infidelity is out of the question. What could be driving this family apart?

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Kouta's Yakuza tattoos:

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Aimi Aikuchi:

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Before Aimi left Japan with Kouta, she often worked in her family's flower shop by arranging flower displays. Once she and Kouta arrived in Willow Creek, she slid back into the same line of work after being employed by a local flower shop. She maintained a friendly relationship with the shop's owner, an elderly woman, and took control of the business after her passing. There was a noticeable shift in Aimi's disposition and behavior after the death of her boss. Could there be a connection between Aimi's friendship with her deceased boss and her marital issues?

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Harumi Aikuchi:

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The phrase "it wasn't always like this" has become Harumi's mantra whenever her parents fight. She can remember times as a small child where her parents would laugh together, whisper sweet nothings into each other's ears, and cuddle on the couch after a long day. Now, those memories are buried underneath an overwhelming flurry of images of her parents shouting at each other and refusing to so much as look at each other. Instead of hearing her mother hum songs from her home country to herself while doing housework, she hears her mother's sobs from a few doors down. And instead of seeing her father kiss his wife before leaving for work, she sees him walk out the door with his head down only to return in the wee hours of the night. The one thing Harumi can't remember, is the last time anyone in the house was genuinely happy.

 

So, she's been forced by the circumstances to focus on herself and her schoolwork. At one point in time, she had hoped to bring the love back into her family by some Hail Mary plan that would just come to her one day, but now she can only watch as her hopes fade away.

 

On the bright side, she's found comfort in books and her academic pursuits. What she lacks in emotional support from other people, she makes up for it in her drive to do well in spite of her home life. This is all well and good, but how long will that drive last? And what about her parents? When all is said and done, can she honestly say that she loves them?

 

Changes: Made her facial features a bit softer and changed her eye color from blue-green to amber-brown. Used a brown and red-orange color palette to giver her a warm, down-to-Earth look that juxtaposes the brewing coldness within.

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Old design:

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Let me know what you think.

 

P.S. Thanks to @R-Lo and @Raised_by_wolves for their input. I've taken note of it and I appreciate you both for speaking up.

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