Troubles of Heroine

[CGi]

The noble Breton in Markarth has no dialogue for me. Aside from that everything else is working.

Little suggestion for adding the PC's name to the notes instead of PCName: TextReplacment.

[crococat]

I have no problems with install on existing game. All work fine.

But there is no mod interactions with the world - Breezehome and Lidia are still my property (exept one one-time dialog line) after yarls events, - no Lykan events on breake contract rules, - no Mikael sequences when he was my pet and recognize i am not real dragonborn, - no any people recognize me as lair dragonborn or Bruiser slave by themselves.

I like this mod as it is on start, but if it is pointed as humilation mod, there must be events starting not only by player. Waiting for future updates. And what about Greybeards or Miraak?

[FoxyProxy]

What's new in 1.1.2?

[Reila]

On 9/27/2019 at 2:11 AM, Reila said:

Grammar Patch v. 1.0.1

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I finished cleaning up the dialogue to the best of my ability, trying to keep everything in line with the tone (I think) you were going for. On a sidenote, I really enjoy how surprisingly lore friendly your dialogue is compared to most mods, so I tried to supplement on this wherever it felt appropriate.

It's probably not perfect yet, as I've only gone through each "quest" once, but there shouldn't be any glaring mistakes anymore. (I also didn't remove all of the redundant spaces, so the CK will still throw some warnings about that.)

I'm not an experienced modder, so I can't guarantee I didn't accidentally break anything, so use this .esp at your own peril.  As a failsafe, I attached the extracted dialogue from the CK as well as my own text files.

Feel free to do whatever you want with this, there's no need to credit me. I'm looking forward to your next update. ^^

EDIT:
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After testing a lot, I realize I let a few sentences slip through here and there since I didn't understand the context fully. I will try to help fix those with a future update so I can do it all at once.

Maybe we can set up a google document for it or similar, to make it a collaborative effort.  That way DSHV can pick and choose from the suggestions and include the ones he prefers to the mod.

Files:
 

textfiles.rar 17.68 kB · 58 downloads troublesofheroine.esp 156.22 kB · 71 downloads Dialogue.TXT 4.94 MB · 87 downloads

Grammar Patch  v. 1.1.2
Patch for 1.1.2 is done.  I made it in SSEEdit, but I messed something up and had to fix a lot of stuff cause I'm a noob, so it got delayed.  I also made it dependent on the main .esp so that you don't have to override the original .esp entirely.
 

It's for SSE since don't have LE installed, but as always feel free to convert or do whatever with it.

 

troublesofheroine-patch.esp 259.08 kB · 0 downloads

Updated grammar patch to 1.1.2, sorry for the wait.

Noticed I had made some mistakes with the form IDs earlier, resulting in dialogue not showing up in game or not overriding the original one.  Those issues should be resolved now, and the patch should be okay to use. 

(I stayed away from book descriptions and item descriptions to minimize the chances of me breaking anything, so only dialogue should be changed by this patch.)

On a completely different note:

Here are some ideas I thought would be cool to see in the mod while I was working on this:

Bruiser:
Since the player's race is rarely addressed by vanilla Skyrim NPCs, it would be cool if Bruiser had some race-specific taunts and insults for each of the races. Especially in reaction to the player calling him a pig.

Tapasvee:
If Tapasvee were to die for any reason it would be neat to be able to make a pair of boots / loincloth / fur armor / rug from her fur. Perhaps something stamina enhancing, considering her run-in with the mysterious entity near Chorrol. (Molag Bal?)  This way, a part of her can always be with us. ❤️

Real Dragonborn:
Would be cool if he looked just like the default Nord Male 1 preset, and was dressed up in the Bethesda's official Dovahkiin outfit.  This way it would serve as a kind of meta commentary on how the Skyrim marketing team is presenting him as a "canon" Dovahkiin, despite player's characters rarely looking like the man in the promotional material. (Which is kinda what Balgruuf is doing in this mod.)

Anyway, thanks for the latest update - I haven't played it myself yet, but the new content is looking great.

[Kalthen]

I was really interested in the argonian mistress part. So I did all the dock quests for the argonians. But the door to the argonian abodes at the docks remained unlocked. So I cheated and got to mistress Belladonna but there is no quest as mentioned. Didn't get any unique dialogue.  Is this part still WIP?

 

Like the mod sofar. Love the flavour. Keep it comming. cheers!

[master151194]

I assume that was an grammar update aye?

[wygner]

where is bruiser located when you dismiss him cant find him in the sleeping giant

[Kalthen]

20 hours ago, wygner said:

where is bruiser located when you dismiss him cant find him in the sleeping giant

Same here, … plus I get double the lines with the patch.

[E_Nigma]

I got a suggestion, how about instead of being yet another sexist trope, the noble guy is just a massive pervert and got tired of traveling with the guy in ebony armor or even if this scenario you flipped the script and he is a nice guy and all that and your character introduces him to naughty stuff. Just to mix it up a little

[CountShaun]

On 10/9/2019 at 9:51 PM, wygner said:

where is bruiser located when you dismiss him cant find him in the sleeping giant

 For me he stays in the location he was dismissed at. So you should check wherever you dismissed him.

[Gwentag]

So do you Need 100 health to not be killed in some scenes?

[spartan343xd]

What requeriments i need to play this mod?

[just_Gina]

@spartan343xd

Don't believe there are any hard requirements. However, Sexlab, a follower mod, (I use IAFT, and so far it is fine) 

will help.

 

@Gwentag So do you Need 100 health to not be killed in some scenes?

Not sure what you're referring to. Neither the Orc, or the Breton have yet to really hurt my PC.

 

[Gwentag]

6 hours ago, just_Gina said:

@spartan343xd

Don't believe there are any hard requirements. However, Sexlab, a follower mod, (I use IAFT, and so far it is fine) 

will help.

 

@Gwentag So do you Need 100 health to not be killed in some scenes?

Not sure what you're referring to. Neither the Orc, or the Breton have yet to really hurt my PC.

 

I don't know it. It says something like this in the mod description. I was hesitant to download the mod because of that. My charakter has like 60hp or smth ^^

 

Under "possible problems":

NPC beat you to death - have at least 100 healths before a possible punishment;

 

But I think if thats not an important part of the mod i can just go with tgm for those scenes 

[DSHV]

Version 1.2.2:  Small changes like player’s name in contracts or real Dragonborn’s new armor;

Garona the Insatiable new female orc follower in the Candlehearth Hall, Windhelm; 

Martin Carvain new noble Imperial follower in the Southfringe Sanctum, near Helgen;

Cellmates in Falkreath, Morthal and Winterhold prisons;

Nasty beggar near The Winking Skeever, Solitude ;

Bruiser: new dialogs, now he mentions a player’s race (for example, call him a pig at first meeting and listen what he think about your race), at 60 and less dignity Lucan offers to change the contract;

Real Dragonborn: 2 his fans in Breezehome (need to start his quest from the beginning, but they not worst it – no dialogs for now);  Tapasvee: new dialogs, she can die from your hand now and her craftable armor (more in her description);

Help Mikael to distribute the second part of his masterpiece;

Agronian Mistress now lives in the New Gnisis Cornerclub, Windhelm;
 

On 10/9/2019 at 11:51 PM, wygner said:

where is bruiser located when you dismiss him cant find him in the sleeping giant

I add quest markers to all followers.

 

On 10/17/2019 at 11:07 PM, Gwentag said:

My charakter has like 60hp or smth ^^

It usually -20/ -40 hp per encounter. Only Bruiser, when apologizing for the character's gender or when giving him 10 coins can take 90hp, I think.

[lightsinx98]

how do u update the file? just overwrite it? Algor doesnt have any dialogue so im wondering if it didnt update my file

[blobsweats]

can you add some spaces between the line in the change log it makes it a bit easier to read something like this


Small changes like real Dragonborn’s new armor, etc
Garona the Insatiable new female orc follower in the Candlehearth Hall, Windhelm
Martin Carvain new noble Imperial follower in the Southfringe Sanctum, near Helgen
Cellmates  in Falkreath, Morthal and Winterhold prisons
Nasty beggar near The Winking Skeever in Solitude 
Bruiser: new dialogs, now he mentions a player’s race (for example, call him a pig at first meeting and listen what he think about your race),
at 60 and less dignity Lucan now offers to change the contract
Real Dragonborn: 2 of his fans in Breezehome (need to start his quest from the beginning, but they are not the worst – (no dialogs for now);
Tapasvee: new dialogs, you can kill her now and turn her into  armor  Help Mikael to distribute the second part of his masterpiece
Agronian Mistress now lives in the New Gnisis Cornerclub, Windhelm

loving the mod so far currently downloading the update

[DSHV]

16 hours ago, lightsinx98 said:

how do u update the file? just overwrite it? Algor doesnt have any dialogue so im wondering if it didnt update my file

Yes, just overwrite, but some changes show up only if you complete certain quest stages. Id of follower quests: AAA*Follower's name*quest.

[MyHaFa]

Still waiting for female Brusier ? Keep going with more  filth! ?

[Farah' Nor]

I'm loving this. 

Not a request, just an idea.

A Wife's Fantasy : A follower who is the pc's husband's friend or bully. Your husband's bully banging you. 

Dirty trainee : You were approached by a young imperial to train him combat and possibly get to laid you.

Old friends : Your childhood friend visiting you from Hammerfell and see you have developed such beautiful curves.

Forbidden Pleasures (Incest) : Your step-father or your steps-son or your brother-in-law finds you irresistible and do the unthinkable. It's your choice to retaliate or reciprocate.

Charmed : A sweet-talking young nord approaches you and try and start an abusive relationship.

Naughty Neighbors : Your neighbor spies on you and try and get his way with him, if given a chance.

Nurse's Duties : News of your kindness(how you take care of people) has secured you a position as a nurse, to care for an old master of a rich family, his sons are not so polite though.

 

They're just ideas not requests. But would be happy to play though. I can provide detailed stories and character backgrounds. Hope it helps.

 

 

 

 

[poopoopuh]

Just found this, and I'm glad that I did!

I'll definitely be checking it out. Hope you'll continue to add to it!

[Mangetsu Shiro]

hey, i really like this mod so far. But I can't get the Mikael quest to start (not even with console commands), all other quests seem to be working very well.
So after the first visit to the Greybeards the quest can start right? So after i completed the little training and got the new quest i headed to riverwood where i was greeted by the cultists that start the dragonborn dlc quest, a little fight broke out and during that Alvor got killed. I resurrected him and talked to him to see if he gives the quest but he doesn't
(maybe he has the book in the inventory which he gives me to start the quest? and when i resurrected him, I reset the inventory?)
After that I went into the inn to see if Orgnar starts the quest, which didn't work aswell. 
I then headed to Whiterun to see what's the deal with "the real dragonborn" quest, created a new save before talking to Jarl Ballin' and then tested that, which worked and then i went back to my previous save. I tried spawning in Urag gro-shob or however he's called and he didn't give me the quest aswell.
What could be the reason that it doesn't start for me?

 

I am using alternate start, which changes the main story a bit, but not the greybeard quest, so i don't think that's a problem.
I might have installed the mod when i was already playing on that character, but i'm not sure.

But maybe it was Alvor's death that let that happen...
Anyways I'd really appreciate help, I'd really love to play that quest, it seems the most fitting and fun for my character. Thanks in advance ^^

 

EDIT: It worked with a new character, so either it was the problem that Alvor died or that I installed it on an existing playthrough

 

[SexyRabbit]

On 10/20/2019 at 8:54 PM, Farah' Nor said:

I'm loving this. 

Not a request, just an idea.

A Wife's Fantasy : A follower who is the pc's husband's friend or bully. Your husband's bully banging you. 

Dirty trainee : You were approached by a young imperial to train him combat and possibly get to laid you.

Old friends : Your childhood friend visiting you from Hammerfell and see you have developed such beautiful curves.

Forbidden Pleasures (Incest) : Your step-father or your steps-son or your brother-in-law finds you irresistible and do the unthinkable. It's your choice to retaliate or reciprocate.

Charmed : A sweet-talking young nord approaches you and try and start an abusive relationship.

Naughty Neighbors : Your neighbor spies on you and try and get his way with him, if given a chance.

Nurse's Duties : News of your kindness(how you take care of people) has secured you a position as a nurse, to care for an old master of a rich family, his sons are not so polite though.

 

They're just ideas not requests. But would be happy to play though. I can provide detailed stories and character backgrounds. Hope it helps.

 

 

 

 

Really great idea!
There is no incest themed quests or mods in sexlab, and i really want one so it would be good.
Wife and old friends are good themes to, i hope you can do somethings like this DSHV.

[dwing200]

Loving this mod! hope you keep updating it for a long time.

But i have a problem with upgrading the contract with Lucan at 60 dignity, he talks about it when i get close to him but doesn't forcegreet or changes anything in his dialogue.
The 2 fans are also not showing up for me in breezehome (done the quest from the Beginning).

I also have to say that i love the idea behind the depraved female player.

Manipulating/forcing/asking your follower to pretty much humiliate and degrade you is one thing i hope you make more of!

I got a few ideas for followers who can fit that scenario:

Confidence booster: A shy and timed follower (m/f) who wants to have more confidence, asks the PC for help, and what better way to bring his/her confidence up by bringing yours down by letting him/her humiliate and degrade you.
Isolation: The PC  finds somebody in a cave/ruins and quickly learns that they never had any contact with the outside world and they don't know any social norms. So it is up to the pc to teach those (depraved) norms.
Games: The pc is having money problems and a man is offering to play a few games with her for money. The guy gives a humiliating/degrading command and must do it to a random  npc, the commands get more and more humiliating the more you do them, until you come to  a point where you do it for free.

 

Just a few ideas, but keep doing what you are doing, great work man.

[fsdgdsfhdfh]

On 10/22/2019 at 2:04 PM, SexyRabbit said:

Really great idea!
There is no incest themed quests or mods in sexlab, and i really want one so it would be good.
Wife and old friends are good themes to, i hope you can do somethings like this DSHV.

While the ideas are good, I, for one, would prefer to keep incest content separate from the humiliation/sexism part this mod focuses on. An issue with incest is that it sets up a certain background for the player character, limiting player's possibilities.

I do, however, particularly enjoy the Wife quest idea. NTR is a niche fetish, and if it's not your thing, the player could choose to just stand up for themselves.